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Punkreas

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Male Protag no Sissy is perfect and a good selection of images so far, still little content but i'll keep an eye on this. Just a little tip, you should reduce the font size a little (y)
 

ZeroKing21

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Aug 23, 2017
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I think it's ok (for now) there were a few spelling errors. There is a good selection of pornstars and I get a very "Realm of Lust"-esque vibe from it. I will definitely watch this; as well as review this when there is a lot more content/paths. But keep up the good work.
 

Trandoshan

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Jan 9, 2018
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It's got a nice 'freeuse' vibe and the pornstars you picked are great, love me some Jada Stevens. I'd say keep the tone and embrace the normality further, no use making it more serious after this start.
 

Trasher2018

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Aug 21, 2018
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Very short and not much to do. Quite boring without any tension.
Then the frequent switch between him and you for the MC. Pick one and stick to it ^^

Content for the 0.1:
You play as a college drop out who finds himself somewhat lost in his life after failing to make it through school. But life isn't all bad when you're a young and hung guy in this town!
"hey bro, let me see your huge dick!" - "sure" - "hey sexy ladies, cool party" - "wanna drink and fuck?" - "sure"
- end of content.


:rolleyes:

That is fine for a first test, but nothing more. The images dont fit that good - as long as it is the same woman it looks like thats ok. You can see a bathroom background in a bedroom scene or the hair changes from open to ponytail and/or back in a sex scene.

To early to say what the story might be, because there is currently no. All there is, I mentioned in my content of 0.1 part ;)
 

Warsteel

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I gotta give you credit: your writing isn't bad, just nothing too far above what the standard for porn is.

The family stance on sexuality is a bit too normal. Part of the erotica of incest is the whole taboo approach, but reading all the sultry looks and attitude the mom and sis have it's almost boring. Their approach to the subject is almost as shameless as it is casual.

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Another issue is referring to the main character as "you" and occasionally switching it to "him." Is this some weird translation issue? It's extremely off-putting.

I assumed being called "dork" by the sis set the standard for this guy as a desperate virgin but based on the party scene he has waaaaaay too much game.

Still, keep going! Don't give up on something you're passionate about!
Being called a dork by your sister doesn't really set the standard for anything. She's your sister... she's gonna bust your balls no matter what.
 
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kkai

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From the size of 0.2 it looks like you may have made it work offline. If so, thanks for hearing our requests! I'll download it now and check it out!
 

Dtrain327

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May 23, 2018
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From the size of 0.2 it looks like you may have made it work offline. If so, thanks for hearing our requests! I'll download it now and check it out!
Yes indeed, as well as a bit more content! Not a huge update but most of my time went to switching everything over so it functioned offline.
 
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kkai

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Yup this is indeed very much up my alley. Nice work Dtrain327! Obviously it's early days, though perhaps that's just my hoping this is intended as a grand endeavor, but I like where you're going. I'd just like to give a little constructive criticism.

1) I'm hoping you add a save system. Even with the limited content right now, it's tedious to use UNDO to find the different paths. Some people enjoy starting a game from the start over and over to try different paths. I do not. If you do add one (such as using the save system in sugarcube), please also consider enabling the ability to save to file. I find save systems that rely on browser local storage to be a pain and unreliable.

2) There are currently a few typos, grammar and punctuation errors. But nothing too severe. There are also a few bad URLs to images.

3) I'd also suggest that the paths dovetail back together periodically (for example, after the party/mom time things sync up again before paths diverge again) so as to aim more for a whole lot of content on any one playthrough rather than a lot of varied permanently branched content on repeated playthroughs. I think this is easier for development and I find it preferable as well. This is particularly subjective, of course.

4) If there is a way to get the non-looping videos to hold playing until scrolled fully into view, that'd be great. (NOTE: That should be mentally voiced as Bill Lumbergh.)

5) Again, assuming you intend to have a decently weighty game (which I very much am hoping), a long term goal of tracking viewed scenes so people know what they've missed would be nice.

6) Scene and actress selection is great. I know some people commented on it being jarring having the male actor change, but (a) that's just life with real porn games and (b) I like that you get to cum like a firehose several times in a few minutes. It bolsters that whole wonder-cock super-virility thing you're aiming for.

That's all that's coming to mind right now. Thanks for the effort so far!
 
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ADIDAS

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Feb 3, 2018
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Some images are broken and not displaying properly in the game and when you get to the party a lot of the videos are way to big and are cut off by the sides of the screen.
 

MausMaus

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Aug 2, 2018
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dina 6,stacy3,stacy1,images dont work on some pages,not sure if its the image itself,or if it is suppose to be another image in its place
 

TiffanyMonroe

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May 29, 2018
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Being called a dork by your sister doesn't really set the standard for anything. She's your sister... she's gonna bust your balls no matter what.
Ikr if I had a brother I would bust his balls all the time. Wait, that sounded better in my head.
 
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