Took a break from this game sometime at the end of the Euro-tour.
My thoughts remain the same. A great framework for good stories with
good characters....if only it had some really good writing.
Just started playing again after a long break because of frustration with the quality.
I would respectfully recommend using the current work to date as a rough draft and start over from the beginning and produce really compelling story work.
Really, I want this to have success. It is just so difficult watching all the missed opportunities for telling a good story that will stick.
Recommend: Whatever path someone gets on, minimize other girl paths to some degree. Example, the Lauren path was completely messed up. You commit to her yet have to do all of these other activities with other girls...and you are LOCKED in to it.
If I am on a certain path with one girl, stop forcing me to participate in other girl events. If I wanted that, I would create a path for that (and of course saves that go along for that path).
It is very frustrating because I can see the huge potential of this VN.
Like the following paths but others are good too.
1. Lauren (very sweet).
2. Aubrey...a bit of a surprise but great to start to see her back story.
3. Autumn...a wonderful surprise....very sweet.....
Again, this VN could be much better....