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Well that was a complete snooze fest. It actually felt the weakest of part 3 for me.
The time spent with the usual girls just felt short and completely bland with a complete lack of imagination on date scenarios as well as the dialogue. Penelope's was about the only one that felt good.
I don't know wtf happened with Emily. Pretty sure she told my MC it was done then after avoiding MC, suddenly we are going on a double date and MC acts like he knew about it. While Em is being a complete slut in the toilet. They really trashed her as a LI for good.
I really hoped for MC getting more steamy with Lindsey as her and Nora are the only ones I'm still interested in - okay Penelope too.
The story flow feels really disjointed, plot non existent and the dialogue just awful: if I read *chuckles* one more time...
Whoever Steve has doing the writing, he should boot them and get decent ones. Seen much better by small devs on here with only a fraction of the patreons. Time to switch patreonage I think to one of them. CK really went down the pan.
The time spent with the usual girls just felt short and completely bland with a complete lack of imagination on date scenarios as well as the dialogue. Penelope's was about the only one that felt good.
I don't know wtf happened with Emily. Pretty sure she told my MC it was done then after avoiding MC, suddenly we are going on a double date and MC acts like he knew about it. While Em is being a complete slut in the toilet. They really trashed her as a LI for good.
I really hoped for MC getting more steamy with Lindsey as her and Nora are the only ones I'm still interested in - okay Penelope too.
The story flow feels really disjointed, plot non existent and the dialogue just awful: if I read *chuckles* one more time...
Whoever Steve has doing the writing, he should boot them and get decent ones. Seen much better by small devs on here with only a fraction of the patreons. Time to switch patreonage I think to one of them. CK really went down the pan.