VN Ren'Py College of Mysteria [v0.10] [HappySteveGames]

[dexterousgecko]

I was really excited about this title. The artwork and renders are gorgeous. The plot premise seems cool and it looked we were set up for a fun time. Then I came to realize a vital detail. You could replace every single line of the MC's dialog with the word "derp" and you wouldn't miss anything.

"[MC] I'll be bathing by the stream don't peak!" "Derp"
"Hey [MC] how about I come stay with you in your shack and keep you warm?" "Derp"
"Look! [MC] it's a floating magical college!" "Derp"

None of those quotes are MC quotes though? Or are you saying that the MC is replying to those quotes with "derp"? Either way, a weird critique.

 

[DenSasaki]

Hot chapter, this is getting better and better.

 

[Ass Fan]

That's great, we'll have some hot scenes with other girls. It's a shame we'll only have one scene with NTS.
The important thing is that Monique is back, I love that little fox!

 

[NadaMucho]

None of those quotes are MC quotes though? Or are you saying that the MC is replying to those quotes with "derp"? Either way, a weird critique.

I'm saying that his dialog and responses are so beef headed you might as well just say "derp". Definitely not a strange critique if you knew me. There are many titles on here with me ranting about a derp MC. It's my AVN trigger

To be fair and I told this to an F95 mate. This MC is a dumb ass, clueless type of derp which is a lot better than a whiny, paralyzed, endlessly introspective and ineffective derp.

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[MagicMan753]

Looks like a disappointing update from what's listed. Looks Like Cindy will only get NTS scenes from now on, no more scenes with us anymore. Shame that dev doesn't care about those scenes at all it seems.

Also seems like dev didn't fix Wendy sharing scene yet like he said was fixed last update to "make sharing avoidable", but WASN'T. So please dev, fix it, like you said you did and would.

 

[dexterousgecko]

Looks like a disappointing update from what's listed. Looks Like Cindy will only get NTS scenes from now on, no more scenes with us anymore. Shame that dev doesn't care about those scenes at all it seems.

How so? What scenes are in the new update?

 

[Ass Fan]

How so? What scenes are in the new update?

here:

Okay, here it is.
13000~ words. 200 images. 2 Lilly scenes, 1 Monique scene, something that is like a scene with Elise, you'll understand when you see it. And an optional sharing(NTS) scene with Cindy.
10 animation loops.
Minor scenes with Wendy and Penelope.


For me it's perfect. At least one NTS scene with Cindy for someone not to complain is optional. ♡