KINETIC NOVEL, please add appropriate tag so we know to skip it. Thank you
- Thread starter LeetW
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- Jun 18, 2021
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Haven't played yet, but bookmarked for later in case it gets more updates
- Jan 17, 2019
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I enjoyed "Don't Toy with Me, Miss Nagatoro" so I see how close the physical characteristics and the blonde hair and fashionable nails often seen in Gal style characters is a nice touch. Personality is really different so I think that's where the comparison ends.
Now about the title itself. This is a first project so please take my thoughts as constructive feedback based on my personal opinions and tastes. I don't not want to discourage the dev even if the title isn't something I enjoy. First as mention above from others, the TAGS are misleading so far. I'm not a fan of Kinetic Novel style with no choices or control over flow. It's early so I can understand if things haven't been introduced yet, but in this case it felt pretty clear this a straight HARD NTR humiliation story which you can find thousands and thousands of in a hentai library. This doesn't interest me. In this case I feel it would have been better to wait on this release until the dev could show what could make it different, if there is choices or not.
AI CG is decently done, however I would focus on getting more range in eye emotion and expressions to help give the characters more life. at times she really just felt like a doll instead of a character you want to believe is real and breathing.
English translation is a bit broken and jarring so I would probably work on fine tuning that as well. The wrong translation can really take you out of a scene.
MY final thoughts based on this first release from LeetW, thank you for effort to create and share this with us. Your title so far is pretty and has a fun aesthetic. The use of characteristics from Miss Nagatoro was nice and actually had me hoping to see other parodies characters like the busty President Sana Sunomiya or the echoing and cat-like Yoshi. Nagatoro was always nervous about Sana's relationship with Naoto so that could create a fun rivalry between characters and since you have the freedom to change the personalities you could show a character inspired by Sana in a way outside of what we got in the show.
Refine the TAGS. As of now there is NO netorase, Animated can be unclear as most with think it means in game animations which sadly seems to be lacking in AI CG titles. I'm failing to see any Romance here at all so far as it seems pretty toxic and sad so far. If you do not plan to have any choice or freedom for the player then the Kinetic Novel tag needs to be added. There is obviously a audience for Hard NTR content so if that's your vision and what you want to create then I wish you luck, but if you intend this title to be more then that, then you have a lot of work to do.
Now about the title itself. This is a first project so please take my thoughts as constructive feedback based on my personal opinions and tastes. I don't not want to discourage the dev even if the title isn't something I enjoy. First as mention above from others, the TAGS are misleading so far. I'm not a fan of Kinetic Novel style with no choices or control over flow. It's early so I can understand if things haven't been introduced yet, but in this case it felt pretty clear this a straight HARD NTR humiliation story which you can find thousands and thousands of in a hentai library. This doesn't interest me. In this case I feel it would have been better to wait on this release until the dev could show what could make it different, if there is choices or not.
AI CG is decently done, however I would focus on getting more range in eye emotion and expressions to help give the characters more life. at times she really just felt like a doll instead of a character you want to believe is real and breathing.
English translation is a bit broken and jarring so I would probably work on fine tuning that as well. The wrong translation can really take you out of a scene.
MY final thoughts based on this first release from LeetW, thank you for effort to create and share this with us. Your title so far is pretty and has a fun aesthetic. The use of characteristics from Miss Nagatoro was nice and actually had me hoping to see other parodies characters like the busty President Sana Sunomiya or the echoing and cat-like Yoshi. Nagatoro was always nervous about Sana's relationship with Naoto so that could create a fun rivalry between characters and since you have the freedom to change the personalities you could show a character inspired by Sana in a way outside of what we got in the show.
Refine the TAGS. As of now there is NO netorase, Animated can be unclear as most with think it means in game animations which sadly seems to be lacking in AI CG titles. I'm failing to see any Romance here at all so far as it seems pretty toxic and sad so far. If you do not plan to have any choice or freedom for the player then the Kinetic Novel tag needs to be added. There is obviously a audience for Hard NTR content so if that's your vision and what you want to create then I wish you luck, but if you intend this title to be more then that, then you have a lot of work to do.
I don't know how to feel about the people complaining about "stolen character", should i pity them, or just ignore them.
Plenty of games use existing characters from other media, and people applaud because they can fuck around with naruto or one piece characters.
But this, no, this is too far... no wonder they'll spend the next 30 years getting cucked...
Plenty of games use existing characters from other media, and people applaud because they can fuck around with naruto or one piece characters.
But this, no, this is too far... no wonder they'll spend the next 30 years getting cucked...
- Jan 7, 2021
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Zero buildup, no suspense. You should start over and focus on the story rather than just your AI prompts. Ive already seen the GF being gangbanged and the BF has seen everything too, and he didn't even react. Why should i come back for the next update? There is nothing more to find out.
- Jan 19, 2025
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You'll see, I'll make the Venus de Milo out of this monolith, just let master do his work
(And if not, I'll delete my comment and you're not gonna prove anything
)As long as F95 doesn't clean up their tagging system (i.e. POV instead of protagonist), that sounds a lot like false advertising.
Good luck anyways!
- Jan 25, 2019
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Don't be discouraged by all the brayers around these parts, good luck and keep up the good work, dev!