These are the typos or visual inconsistencies I noticed. left of : is in game, right of : are fixes. I think I checked every choice. The English is pretty good, not that many typos/errors.
Would be nice if the character names had different colors
Dad was missing : is
I knew now : know
still hadn't : haven't
(why does the Uber driver know about his dad?)
arms around my neck (image shows around his back)
is still like you : is just as you
I'll go put these up : these away
The room was had : (remove was)
(says room had been cleaned, but then also there is a layer of dust)
(3 years and he isn't a fan of any of the bands he listened to anymore? That seems slightly ridiculous)
where the I knew : (remove the)
(surprised he doesn't make note of the police tape door when taking out the trash)
coffee sometime or something : coffee or something sometime
(why does MC lack a phone? Living in south America would still have him own one)
catch me in the morning : (she mentions the coffee, but since it was open to "something" it should probably be less specific)
(mentions Lisa put her hand on MC's but image shows her holding arm up)
so He can : he
your chauffer : chauffeur
if you could get : can
I wish He : he
put the little : put what little
side-eying : eyeing
scarfing up : scarfing down
down on the gas (I understand what you mean, but it reads weird, as if the opposite should be happening, with the MC getting slammed back into the seat)
(the random real life imagery feels off)
(bunch of capitalization of courses)
not near this : nearly
(coffee shop is a temp image but not the lobby?)
payed me no : paid
hadn't change a : changed
sat to eat : sat down to eat
eyebrow to me : at me
(Kevin's name appearing when it was never asked)
be a least : at
(hair in a tight bun, gonna disagree)
(dusty law office?)
(eye shift, kind of wish there was an actual small shift)
really needs mowed : mowing/to be mowed
in front of the telivision : television
(surprised MC doesn't mention she is left handed)
if I record : record it
is all i know : I
you have been gone to college : you have been away at college
keeping up witht he maintenance : with the
(MC shower image after mowing is very noisy)
(some of the animations are kind of scary)
(also could use better looping)
close to coming : cumming
(outside of house doesn't change time)
annoying and the abandon : they/then
(Suzy leaving breakfast table has her at a weird angle)
a little essentric : eccentric
(thick glasses, yet none are shown)
(visible tattoos, but can't see any)
