winmace

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I'd have preferred the chapter ended with Nael going bananas but I guess we'll save that for the beginning of next chapter.

Shame Nael didn't just delete Samuel, such a pointless plot device that has no business existing.
 
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While i partialy agree and i love gab, he didnt really thought it through lol, there would have been so many better things he could have done than what happened.

And it was alberre who involved zeno for reasons unrelated to claire being a mini hitler so she doesnt really deserve to die for that.

And she is unaware of what gabriel did and was ready to sacrifice herself at least
IDK if feel like something bad will happen to Clara due to Claire being a control freak. I feel Clara becomes a enemy due to mind control and it will be on her. Intresting take on making one who is close to MC an antognist but not sure how it will work out. Also still wish we got to kill discount Cloud looking guy...in the airplane.
 
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jadepaladin

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IDK if feel like something bad will happen to Clara due to Claire being a control freak. I feel Clara becomes a enemy due to mind control and it will be on her. Intresting take on making one who is close to MC an antognist but not sure how it will work out. Also still wish we got to kill discount Cloud looking guy...in the airplane.
It could go really dark if Clara gives into Ren. Ren could try to use her to kill Claire but I don't see the MC letting it come to that. So far Clara is beating back Ren's suggestions too easily so I expect something will happen that will cause Clara to have doubts. Maybe if she sees Claire being attacked and she can't do anything about it.
 

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How ai I only discovering this now? I hope the story is as good as what it seems like and that we actually have choices. Sad thing to say but almost all devs who have a story focused game only have fake chocies.

I'll give this a try and come back once I've smt to say abt the game





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mordred93

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How ai I only discovering this now? I hope the story is as good as what it seems like and that we actually have choices. Sad thing to say but almost all devs who have a story focused game only have fake chocies.

I'll give this a try and come back once I've smt to say abt the game





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Define fake choices? You can skip content (like not sleeping with a girl), that to me, is not a fake choice. You will still be friend with them, but of course there is more left unsaid, etc.
 
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The only negative were the animations in the early chapters which seem to have been completely resolved in the newer iterations. Damn if I don't love the storyline in this game.
 

Johan_0000

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Define fake choices?
things like talk witth this girl 1st then the other, Singular option choices, choices than change nothing in your gameplay apart from an immediate slight change in a current convo...
Most of the time, I don't mind them on the contrary they keep the player focused. However when they are 80-90% of the game. That's the thing I hate the most, You can't even attach to the game the kinetic tag bc of the frkin 10% lol.






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jadepaladin

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things like talk witth this girl 1st then the other, Singular option choices, choices than change nothing in your gameplay apart from an immediate slight change in a current convo...
Most of the time, I don't mind them on the contrary they keep the player focused. However when they are 80-90% of the game. That's the thing I hate the most, You can't even attach to the game the kinetic tag bc of the frkin 10% lol.






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There's a few choices in here that are "fake" by your definition. Most choices do affect a stat, or call up a scene if appropriate (obvious ones being lewd scenes). I run the game with URM so I can track what is being affected by the choices I make.

That said, this is definitely not a kinetic novel and nowhere near deserving of the tag. Blake and Claire choices should make that obvious.
 
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ProtoJoto

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Nael tells me that I am not on Emma's route. My memory is foggy: was the femdom scene necessary to stay on her route? If so, that would explain why I'm not on it. It would be nice if it were possible to get back on her route without the femdom. Maybe she will have mellowed when she finally wakes up.
 

vvulf

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Nael tells me that I am not on Emma's route. My memory is foggy: was the femdom scene necessary to stay on her route? If so, that would explain why I'm not on it. It would be nice if it were possible to get back on her route without the femdom. Maybe she will have mellowed when she finally wakes up.
Yeah it is, the scene triggers an Emma love variable that is used for most of her interactions after it.
 
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hey guys a question??

are the links on the first page for Season 1 chapter 1-9 the new ones with the polished writing and the fixed end of season 9 bug Berkili4 brought out a few days ago??
 

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While i partialy agree and i love gab, he didnt really thought it through lol, there would have been so many better things he could have done than what happened.

And it was alberre who involved zeno for reasons unrelated to claire being a mini hitler so she doesnt really deserve to die for that.

And she is unaware of what gabriel did and was ready to sacrifice herself at least
Honestly Claire doesn't deserve to live behind this. I dont hate Claire but what she is doing is literally Paranoid Fueled violence. Power going to her head. Clara is not in danger. She has the high order, Emma, and The MC who is bonded with a primordial as well on Clara's side. She was justified with attacking the legion. But the brotherhood did nothing but attempt peace. Remember that Claire has refused multiple attempts at peace apparently. I just finished chapter 9 and will start 10 now but Claire is not a good person anymore. Even if someone's end goal is pure, the means matter. She is a problem and needs to be put in her place and at least removed form power and punished.

P.S> I am upset that we dont see Clara Apologize to EDA for her words during the heated moment where claire was going to sacrifice herself. She hurt EDA and for EDA to just act like it didnt happen kind of destroys the whole point of it in the first place. I know a dark one serves their companion but they just go back to normal. No depression or anything. No Hinting towards her pain. Clara not feeling those emotions of pain from EDA after the relief came that her mother was saved is not right.
 
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It could go really dark if Clara gives into Ren. Ren could try to use her to kill Claire but I don't see the MC letting it come to that. So far Clara is beating back Ren's suggestions too easily so I expect something will happen that will cause Clara to have doubts. Maybe if she sees Claire being attacked and she can't do anything about it.
If only our primordials could call meetings like Nael we could just summon Ren then kill her....we can gang up on her :D :cool:
 
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I dont think Clara need to apologize for scene. 1. It is her mother was about, 2. Eda did used her feral status against wish of Clara, against bond directly. 3. Eda is feed on emotions, i assume whole such drama was actually quite a feast for her. She is a Dark one crawed for emotion energy. Eda did act to protect her companion, but i dont see it selfless noble act in this case. Selfish instant impulses all over place, just like Clara's. And Eda lives in Clara. They get each other, well. So, drama come and go, they moved on, as it should be for them.

As for Claire, a still think we will se her becoming Tessah companion. Probably she will be summoned by Nael trough Sam and get to task rescue Gab. And provided by Tessah for this task and as a reward her service. Or she will take refuge in Naels realm and get Tessah, and so on. She will definitely don't die soon. I could easily see Emma soon dies in her struggles, Blake dies in Brotherhood's mess. Amy's mum soon dying in a mess Jacky involved us. Jacky in those mess right now. But not Claire, yet. Claire got too many plot-knots at the moment.

And with her continuous motherly attitude to MC, revelations about brotherhood zeal, and Ren's deal, Claire is quite a solid trickster character. In inner circle of MC. I'm sure she will mass murder more and will live long.

Actually, it is quite refreshing to see big tits mother-like character is not instant bed toy or main LI in AVN. Claire is a gem. I really quite a fond of her now.

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not gonna lie ch10 was mid. not much happened and the Clara animation was flawless but the Cia and Amy were terrible for me it stuttered and was unplayable which is weird since the Clara one was better animated and longer. The cliffhanger was also expected and not surprising since it was hinted already a few chapters back. Hope next chapter has more action.
Too bad it was laggy for you, I don't know how the author cooked up that last scene, but the quality jump is so insane that I hope future scenes can match it.
 
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