wookie ookie

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Lost can mean more than killed, people are speaking in a hyperbolic manner. As of the last we saw him he's still alive.
I think he's probably gonna survive given what his death caused a whole one update ago. Nael hasn't grown enough yet to give up on him and it's a little premature to unavoidably destroy the entire universe at this point in the story.
Yeah I agree with that 100% because Nael would lose her shit and that's what would happen, I just wanted to make sure I seen it right (y)
 

Sennistrasz

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Do all Japanese schools look like that? I thought it looked like that school building they had in Gaki no Tsukai.
 

Dreamer93

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I found this post on Discord with all the cameos that appear in the game:



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In this cameo:
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the code says they are from Stray Succubus, Fate Crossed, and Reconstruction.

In which part of the game (Reconstruction) does the character with pink hair appear?
 
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Jnx

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The English flat-out dies at chapter 5. For the most part, I though a dyslexic wrote this and was fine. But any semblance of that is gone. This is so ALMOST well done, the terrible English is so distracting, I'm frustrated. And to make the setting America on top of it? You know, when people read stories, it's because they want to experience something else right? Set it somewhere else, teach us about your area. Hell, it's about timeless evil wizards, MAKE UP a place. I always get so sad when the part that I, a player, have to interact with, the WRITING, is so poorly translated I have to fight to keep reading. This is one of the first games in a long time that I'm not mad at the story, the characters aren't frustratingly stupid, and the plot isn't cookie cutter bullshit. The two big points of contention are the translation and ham-fisted references. But the references PALE in comparison to how upsetting it is to be reading a line and then next one to look and sound like someone sneezed out the letters and just left it in.

If someone could come in to proofread and edit this, this would be one of my favorite stories. Have I seen worse translations? Yeah, my god yes. But it's so distracting in this because it's so much better than most other games on this site.
 

Kaintfm

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First off, love your game. Great story. I look forward to the updates. Second, you really need a playtester for spelling and grammar checks. I see a lot of the same mistakes popping up over and over again. Certian instead of certain, happend instead of happened, etc.

Could be as simple as giving an advanced copy to a Patreon supporter to proofread. People might even pay for the privilege :)

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Elhemeer

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While I don't actually disagree with people's overall English grammar complaints, those complaining about the new release should really remember this is a leaked early release, so offering notes of such issues (like Kaintfm does) would be more constructive. Not that I know if the dev sees posts here, but just sayin'.
 

illogicallity

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Was it ever explained why Claire can see companions? I've seen the argument that she saw Eda because Eda was technically a feral, but she saw and interacted with the 2nd primordial before that when she was almost killed
 

resgar

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It was. At start act2. Mentioned that she starts wear imbued trinket at home. As well as at work before. So trinket. I think it mandatory for all nonCompanion personnel of HighOrder involved . Seems logical to me.
 
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Raziel_8

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It was. At start act2. Mentioned that she starts wear imbued trinket at home. As well as at work before. So trinket. I think it mandatory for all nonCompanion personnel of HighOrder involved . Seems logical to me.
That is likely logisticial not possible, nor all that helpful.
If the dark ones not showing themself even other companions can't see them, like how the MC hides he has 3.
IIRC dark ones aren't allowed to attack humans.
Even if the non-companions could see them, they wouldn't be able to really fight/harm them.
They do have some methode of scaning and dedetcting companions thought, like with the MC as he had that pearl with Nael's powers.
 

resgar

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I see no logistical problem to imbue some jevelry or military tags and hand it over with uniform. There is no evidence that Claire or any human saw Darkones who hide, but she did interact with those who willingly appears and do so. And detectors they use to track Companions. Again, no mention Darkones detected this way.

So imbued trinkets for interaction with willing Darkones. Not to fight. To see, talk/report if need to.
 
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