VN Ren'Py Confessions of a Sassy Girl [v0.2 Beta] [Huninn]

[Huninn]

Jessica is great and all, but, I want 0.1 back Had I known there would be an overhaul I would have permanently saved some of those renders before I deleted the game from my hard drive.
Do any kind souls still have it? Can it be put up on the main page please?

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[R1k0]

Thanks for the feedback! The game is all about "corrupting" an "innocent" girl (Ami) . I'm just taking my time to build the story toward that. Plus, there will definitely be more scenes happening outside of the main character's mind!

This is just the beginning of the story and it may not yet be clear how the story will develop further and I have drawn the wrong conclusion. The first version of the game is different from what it is now and I like the updated version better, but the mother was very attractive and it would be a shame not to see her in the game, only she looks very young, maybe make her the MC's sister, and would like to see the black guy in the game too. Jessica corrupting Ami, that sounds yummy.

 

[JenMistress]

Well, disappointed the teacher was really reduced down, and the parrot was completely removed. Hopefully that will return in future updates, because really liked them. However, new girl, not bad, I like her. And Kevin reduced down, OK, that one I can agree with you on. Guy was getting on my nerves. But still enjoyed it, thank you so very much for this, and looking forward for more!!!

 

[Huninn]

This is just the beginning of the story and it may not yet be clear how the story will develop further and I have drawn the wrong conclusion. The first version of the game is different from what it is now and I like the updated version better, but the mother was very attractive and it would be a shame not to see her in the game, only she looks very young, maybe make her the MC's sister, and would like to see the black guy in the game too. Jessica corrupting Ami, that sounds yummy.

Thanks for the feedback! I'm really happy to hear you enjoyed the updated version. Just a heads-up, Ami's mother is making a comeback in v0.3. I aimed to portray her as someone who got pregnant young, without pinning down an exact age. This gives her a more youthful vibe, which makes their relationship feel more like sisters than a traditional mother-daughter dynamic. I like your idea of turning her mother into a "sister" idea, but it wouldn't quite fit the context and plans I have for Ami's mother.

 

[Huninn]

Well, disappointed the teacher was really reduced down, and the parrot was completely removed. Hopefully that will return in future updates, because really liked them. However, new girl, not bad, I like her. And Kevin reduced down, OK, that one I can agree with you on. Guy was getting on my nerves. But still enjoyed it, thank you so very much for this, and looking forward for more!!!

Thanks for your feedback! I had a blast creating those two scenes—they were both spicy and hilarious! It's a bummer to see them go in v0.2, but I felt they were a bit crammed in too early and came off as "forced" in the story. I think it would be better to introduce them later, giving the narrative some room to breathe.

While I'm aiming for a more no-nonsense vibe with the reboot, I might find a way to bring them back if they fit into the overall narrative. It probably won’t be as over-the-top as in v0.1, though! I'm definitely open to suggestions

 

[rafa30]

I like

 

[Knight_of_the_lance]

I did not try 0.1 only 0.2 I must say that the few renders peps posted screenshot of I would have liked to see in the game. I liked the characters, especially the main one. She is so different from the ones I usually play, even rarer in the female lead role. She feel on the edge of unlikable, not falling on either side right now. Seeing all her thoughts in her journal help sympathise with her while if she was a stranger she would feel really difficult to get close to. She remind me of a particular girl in hi school.

I was not tempted to let go of the game despite it's wordiness, for now. I could see myself having difficulties with it if I was more tired or was less interested in the girl. It's a balancing act that feel difficult though since to sympathise with the MC her awkwardness and antisocial attitude we need to know a lot about her but the story still needs to go forward.

As for my taste in Female lead, I personally like to play them as Bi rather than pure lesbians or straight, but I also like to choose with whom the MC has sex. I personally dislike pushy characters that want the sex only for themselves and completely disregard the MC's will or are jerks. I have no problem to use sex to get back at them but I don't like, as a MC to give sex to characters I feel are undeserving. Unless it's to trick them and get something else out of it. So locking sexual growth and exploration ( I hate the term corruption for that with a passion) behind scenes with such characters generally leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

Up to this point though I like the game a lot, I find it has great potential. But at some point along with knowing Amy better the pace of the story will have to leave behind a bit more of the reflection in a journal kind of pace. doesn't need to ditch it altogether but make it a bit more rare. IMHO. You do you it's your story.

 

[Huninn]

I did not try 0.1 only 0.2 I must say that the few renders peps posted screenshot of I would have liked to see in the game. I liked the characters, especially the main one. She is so different from the ones I usually play, even rarer in the female lead role. She feel on the edge of unlikable, not falling on either side right now. Seeing all her thoughts in her journal help sympathise with her while if she was a stranger she would feel really difficult to get close to. She remind me of a particular girl in hi school.

I was not tempted to let go of the game despite it's wordiness, for now. I could see myself having difficulties with it if I was more tired or was less interested in the girl. It's a balancing act that feel difficult though since to sympathise with the MC her awkwardness and antisocial attitude we need to know a lot about her but the story still needs to go forward.

As for my taste in Female lead, I personally like to play them as Bi rather than pure lesbians or straight, but I also like to choose with whom the MC has sex. I personally dislike pushy characters that want the sex only for themselves and completely disregard the MC's will or are jerks. I have no problem to use sex to get back at them but I don't like, as a MC to give sex to characters I feel are undeserving. Unless it's to trick them and get something else out of it. So locking sexual growth and exploration ( I hate the term corruption for that with a passion) behind scenes with such characters generally leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

Up to this point though I like the game a lot, I find it has great potential. But at some point along with knowing Amy better the pace of the story will have to leave behind a bit more of the reflection in a journal kind of pace. doesn't need to ditch it altogether but make it a bit more rare. IMHO. You do you it's your story.

Thanks so much for the awesome feedback! I totally agree that some parts of the story can get a bit wordy, especially Ami's monologues. I've been working on trimming those down, especially now that I’ve introduced most of the major characters (just a couple left, including one small fellow and Ami's mom).

I’m really glad you liked the main character Ami is designed to be someone you might not warm up to right away. She’s pretty indifferent to others' opinions and often prefers her own company. More of her backstory and struggles will come to light in future updates, which should help players connect with her better (I hope).

You also make a great point about player agency in romance options. I definitely plan to include a system that gives you some control. I won’t force players into scenes or encounters that they’d rather skip. Most of Ami's interactions will however be male-female, with potentially some female-female encounters too.

Thanks again for your insights!

 

[bamachine]

Just found this game, missed the first version, so not sure about whatever was in it. I do hope that we can go down a lesbian only path with Ami and besides Jessica, she needs to get it on with her longtime friend. Maybe even become a lesbian domme and really punish her "bully" and both of her stooges. She needs to nail Mrs Henderson at the end of it all, as a graduation present.

 

[restrictive]

Great fun.
If by some strange coincidence have not yet watched "Dead like me" (show and movie both), you should rectify that situation ASAP.