Game should have more paths, at least 2 or 3, perhaps the content will be expanded in future versions.
That's a really good point! Initially, I thought it would be best to wait until the MC is more open about exploring that part of her sexuality before introducing the girl-on-girl relationship arc. However, you make a strong case for including it at the end of v0.4. Thanks for pointing out the oversight, it's helpful for future development!
Great work. I just became a member on your Patreon, hope to see more content coming soon.
That's a fascinating point! Anecdotally, some women seem to appreciate the various emotional expressions the actresses display during sex. I'd definitely love to explore this topic further (both in-game and outside)!
It's your game, you don't have to introduce girl-on-girl relationship arc faster than you feel is right for your story.
I think the monologue is one of the best aspects of this game. Sure it might be too long for those looking for a quick fap, but I find it hilarious and it makes us more attached to the character.
I agree and also disagree at the same time. At the start of the game it did feel like it was a bit to much for me where I felt like I wanted more stuff to happen. But I thought it improved alot since the update with her mother.
I agree but I would add. I think that it's because we, as a reader, still don't care a lot for her yet. In the later part we are fonder of her and are more invested in her story by that point. So I'm not sure if it's really the writing that changed or the mindset of the reader. On the other hand it means that the start could use an editing pass at some point. but I would argue that it's too soon to do that. I think Huninn should wait until she found the pace and style she want to go with and mastered it before going back. The writing is the most important part of this story after all. Unless she(?) wants to re write it a fourth and fifth time. To me it feels good enough as a base to go forward and write the rest of the story even if not ideal. But who hasn't heard of othors writing the first chapter last?
I've in fact "redone" the game already once
I completely overhauled v0.1 (rewrote all the text and close to 95% of all the renders then released it as v0.2). I agree that there's a bit too much text, and I've trimmed down some in v0.2. You’re spot on about me still exploring my style (writing style, 3D renders, how I want to present the scenes, bonus episodes, etc.). I really struggled with the updates after redoing v0.1. The game was originally meant to be more light-hearted, and Jessica wasn’t supposed to show up until much later (she wasn’t even a key character at first, and her personality and looks were totally different in my original draft). But yeah... I'm doing my best to improve both my writing, pacing of the story, and quality of the renders.I know some of the choices can feel awkward or contradictory, but that’s actually intentional! It plays into the 4th wall, where the player might want Ami to do something she’s not ready for yet, so she just “ignores” the choice. There will be choices later on that actually affect which scenes you can see.
I hit a bit of a writing roadblock recently, plus my full-time job needed my attention for a while, but I’m back on track now and working on the next update!
I love Jessica glad you decided to add her sooner. I think she brings so much to the game and is what add it's charm to the game. Because for me without Jessica there wouldn't be a whole alot I look forward to personally. Don't get me wrong I like Ami and her inner monologue and find her quite funny and enjoy the few lewd scenes there are so far. But Jessica is much better than all of that to me.I've in fact "redone" the game already once
Early access is available for patrons as of yesterday if you are interested. 8$ CAD to have it one week before public according to the tiers on the Patreon.
