VN Ren'Py Consciousness [Ch.1 Final] [Inwatch]

[rafa30]

Contain incest this game?

 

[inwatch]

Well that was very fast. Also where is the new image

Heyo Mr.G!

It took way longer than I thought to get this part done so glad to hear you think it was quick! The images are in the gallery or the character folder in the files.

Have a good one!

Superb visuals, hs2 banzai
Just maybe a little worried by the number of girls, we all know how it can quickly turn in a kind of black hole when submerged by proposition, let see how dev manage with that

Thank you! I'm happy to hear you liked the visuals and guess we'll have to see if I can avoid that event horizon .

Take care!

Valarie 47 age really? loll she is beautiful i want fuck she

Took a while until sex happened, but I enjoyed it. Good premise. Look forward to more!

Thank you for trying it out and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it! (Also looking forward to blasting you guys with more goodies!)

Have a good one!

What was added? Ended the same place as before

My caveman coded character gallery with juicy updating logs! With the added possibility of discovering one's own cognitive bias'

Have a great one V!

Hey Dev, in the game characters menu, the protagonist's name shows the default name, not the player's given name.

Heyo booty deity!

Thank you for pointing it out! Just updated it with a quick hotfix so should be working now.

Have a good one!

Hello, this game looks like another game i played before but i dont remember the name, in this game we have incest and a girl with lara croft cosplay, can someone remember this please ?

Would love to know that as well.

the story its pretty good but after 15 minutes i started skipping the monologues, they serve no purpose and yet there is a monologue every 4 lines of dialogue

it feels like playing the game with beavis and butthead as color commentators

edit: patricia looks like a fucking clown

i was sold on the world domination, but

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consider me interested.

I'm most delighted to hear that.

Have a great one!

Contain incest this game?

Thanks for the question and no incest. Or at least there's no plans for any official incest or how you say it.

Have a good one!

 

[JEER0X]

meh as soon as the girl forced the MC to sign that contract while in the scanner i lost interest, i tried to fast forward thru the game to see if the MC would be able to fight it but the MC is just a horny idiot

 

[longjohngold]

This was interesting so far, and the sex scene at the end was well written. The billionaire lady is my favourite, naturally.

Putting things like *downstairs* *being driven* at the start of multiple lines of dialogue just makes it hard to parse, shove that somewhere out of the way like next to the name or something if you feel it's important to include.

This makeups style is weird... looks like she has a really bad cold. It chilled out a bit later on.


And this one's makes her look like a 10 dollar whore, not really a corpo boss / headmistress.

 

[inwatch]

This was interesting so far, and the sex scene at the end was well written. The billionaire lady is my favourite, naturally.

Putting things like *downstairs* *being driven* at the start of multiple lines of dialogue just makes it hard to parse, shove that somewhere out of the way like next to the name or something if you feel it's important to include.

This makeups style is weird... looks like she has a really bad cold. It chilled out a bit later on.
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And this one's makes her look like a 10 dollar whore, not really a corpo boss / headmistress.
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Ahoy longjohnsilver!
Thank you for the input and giving the game a try!

Just a little note to the first picture but it's mentioned three times that she and her mother are sick before that.

Take care landlubber!

would be able to fight it but the MC is just a horny idiot

Yet... And yes...

Thanks for trying out the game and have a good one!

 

[Invictus7]

liked the idea of the game but dislike how much of a horny idiot the mc is some designs are.. questionable but overall will look forward to the next update

 

[inwatch]

liked the idea of the game but dislike how much of a horny idiot the mc is some designs are.. questionable but overall will look forward to the next update

Thank you for the input and giving it a try! Glad to hear you look forward to it despite the idiocy.

Have a good one!

 

[HAISEKEN1999]

Consciousness [Ch.1 Final] SAVE

 

[Mauser45]

Chapter 2 can't arrive soon enough!!

 

[JEER0X]

Ahoy longjohnsilver!
Thank you for the input and giving the game a try!

Just a little note to the first picture but it's mentioned three times that she and her mother are sick before that.

Take care landlubber!


Yet... And yes...

Thanks for trying out the game and have a good one!

So at some point you can fight that contract? i may come back then, please tone down the MC's horny factor its cringe

 

[inwatch]

Chapter 2 can't arrive soon enough!!

Thank you for trying the game and happy to hear you're excited for more!

Have a great one!

So at some point you can fight that contract? i may come back then, please tone down the MC's horny factor its cringe

Yes. But the horny factor is the "Catalyst of epigenetic alteration" so that'll stay cringe until MC learns how to control himself.

 

[Paul Kagame Superfan]

So much to unpack here. I don't want to make a review... yet, need at least one or two updates to be sure. Here some of my thoughts though:

• There is unnecessary heaviness and flowerness to the descriptions, I feel like good editing could trim down text a little bit.
• The plot seems to be struggling with ADHD. We jumping from location to location, from scene to scene, from character to character without a chance to breathe in, get to know them a little. Some things are underexplained, some are overexplained. (Like how little we know about MC condition, but already introduced to the antagonists.)
• Id, Subconscious... Penis? I still kinda confused why it's in the story, what it represents, what's the point. What I'm sure about is that MC dialogs with himself were the worst part of the experience. I'm afraid they meant to be funny. The only thing they did for me is that they made me want to kurt cobain myself. Not to mention, reading for the fiftieth time Beavis and Butthead dialog about how sexy this another woman is (thx, I have eyes, you don't need to double my thoughts for me) and how we want to claim/breed/add her to our harem became very tiresome very fast.
• It would be half as bad if MC was just an idiot, but he is also an embarrassing idiot! I think the peak cringe was achieved in the scene with model, Claudia. When she started calming MC, I felt so bad and embarrassed, that I grabbed my head with both hands. Impressive feat considering that, well... one hand usually busy masturbaiting. My suspicion is that we are at the start of the character arc, and in the future MC will become smarter and more confident, but I think there was a ways to show that more subtly.

Despite all these harsh criticisms, I have to say that the novel still hocked me in a way (or I wouldn't be bothered to write all of this). I like the premise of the story, visuals are decent, and I really really liked all the adult scenes, especially the last one. The path there was tough, but it was worth it. I really liked all the writing, the erotic tension you could feel, almost like it was written by different person. So I'm looking forward for the update, maybe in the future there will be more sex and I won't have the time to complain or be embarrassed.

 

[inwatch]

So much to unpack here. I don't want to make a review... yet, need at least one or two updates to be sure. Here some of my thoughts though:

• There is unnecessary heaviness and flowerness to the descriptions, I feel like good editing could trim down text a little bit.
• The plot seems to be struggling with ADHD. We jumping from location to location, from scene to scene, from character to character without a chance to breathe in, get to know them a little. Some things are underexplained, some are overexplained. (Like how little we know about MC condition, but already introduced to the antagonists.)
• Id, Subconscious... Penis? I still kinda confused why it's in the story, what it represents, what's the point. What I'm sure about is that MC dialogs with himself were the worst part of the experience. I'm afraid they meant to be funny. The only thing they did for me is that they made me want to kurt cobain myself. Not to mention, reading for the fiftieth time Beavis and Butthead dialog about how sexy this another woman is (thx, I have eyes, you don't need to double my thoughts for me) and how we want to claim/breed/add her to our harem became very tiresome very fast.
• It would be half as bad if MC was just an idiot, but he is also an embarrassing idiot! I think the peak cringe was achieved in the scene with model, Claudia. When she started calming MC, I felt so bad and embarrassed, that I grabbed my head with both hands. Impressive feat considering that, well... one hand usually busy masturbaiting. My suspicion is that we are at the start of the character arc, and in the future MC will become smarter and more confident, but I think there was a ways to show that more subtly.

Despite all these harsh criticisms, I have to say that the novel still hocked me in a way (or I wouldn't be bothered to write all of this). I like the premise of the story, visuals are decent, and I really really liked all the adult scenes, especially the last one. The path there was tough, but it was worth it. I really liked all the writing, the erotic tension you could feel, almost like it was written by different person. So I'm looking forward for the update, maybe in the future there will be more sex and I won't have the time to complain or be embarrassed.

Thank you for the input and trying out the game!

I'm glad to hear my raunchy scenes made up for the struggle.

And here's a few clarifications or what you call it. Answers?

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Thanks again and have a great one!

 

[Syphalion]

I think that for a first chapter, the game looks really good the visuals are great, and the characters seem interesting, even if all the so-called MILFs unfortunately look like they’re twenty. The game definitely has potential for the future.
The story seems promising, with plenty of dangerous antagonists.


The only major problem for me is the MC, who honestly gives off strong double-digit IQ vibes even before getting injected with the serum. And after the injection, I was hoping he’d at least reach a three-digit IQ, but nope, he just turned into a sex-obsessed idiot who gets horny every time a female happens to breathe near him.


His DNA is supposed to have no limits, he could achieve anything. But the guy is apparently 1.82 meters tall, has been working out for at least three years, gets a Captain America–style boost, But no he acts like a nervous virgin all the time even though he is rather handsome... Can’t fight properly, he gets wrecked in two seconds by a girl who’s a full head shorter than him. Sure, she’s trained, but he’s got the advantage in height, leverage, bone density, muscle mass everything.


He doesn’t take potential threats seriously, not against himself, not against the people he cares about. He even reveals his secret to his friend and "Family friends", saying: “Be careful, this is a secret, don’t tell anyone…”
And, surprise, that’s exactly how secrets spread everyone tells their friends, and the chain never ends.

Result: the villains find you, kidnap the people you love, threaten them with torture or death, you surrender, and you end up dissected.


The end of the negative-IQ MC.


So yeah, I really hope he finally evolves a brain in the next chapter, because otherwise I can’t see how he’d survive more than three days before being taken out by the most basic form of Darwinism.


That being said, aside from this little rant (I really can’t stand dumb main characters), I honestly wish you the best of luck with the rest of the project, especially if the story’s tone gets more serious later on.

 

[inwatch]

I think that for a first chapter, the game looks really good the visuals are great, and the characters seem interesting, even if all the so-called MILFs unfortunately look like they’re twenty. The game definitely has potential for the future.
The story seems promising, with plenty of dangerous antagonists.


The only major problem for me is the MC, who honestly gives off strong double-digit IQ vibes even before getting injected with the serum. And after the injection, I was hoping he’d at least reach a three-digit IQ, but nope, he just turned into a sex-obsessed idiot who gets horny every time a female happens to breathe near him.


His DNA is supposed to have no limits, he could achieve anything. But the guy is apparently 1.82 meters tall, has been working out for at least three years, gets a Captain America–style boost, But no he acts like a nervous virgin all the time even though he is rather handsome... Can’t fight properly, he gets wrecked in two seconds by a girl who’s a full head shorter than him. Sure, she’s trained, but he’s got the advantage in height, leverage, bone density, muscle mass everything.


He doesn’t take potential threats seriously, not against himself, not against the people he cares about. He even reveals his secret to his friend and "Family friends", saying: “Be careful, this is a secret, don’t tell anyone…”
And, surprise, that’s exactly how secrets spread everyone tells their friends, and the chain never ends.

Result: the villains find you, kidnap the people you love, threaten them with torture or death, you surrender, and you end up dissected.


The end of the negative-IQ MC.


So yeah, I really hope he finally evolves a brain in the next chapter, because otherwise I can’t see how he’d survive more than three days before being taken out by the most basic form of Darwinism.


That being said, aside from this little rant (I really can’t stand dumb main characters), I honestly wish you the best of luck with the rest of the project, especially if the story’s tone gets more serious later on.

Thank you for the kind words and trying out the game! And for the input as well of course! I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it despite MC's questionable IQ throughout chapter one and I love that you included being dissected in the result.

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Thanks again for the well wishes and the input! Have a wonderful one!