During that scene, if you choose to break it off, she calls the MC "Mitch" even if you've changed the name. Also, when the MC steps out of the shower at the hotel he calls himself "Mitch".Hey All
First off, thank you everyone for taking an interest in my story - it's very much appreciated!
Secondly, the 'cheating' in my story is a one off event at the beginning of the game to get things moving. NTR isn't a theme I'll be exploring in Consort.
Yea well I really didnt need to see that. 0 to 100 real quick and it was nowhere near as satisfying as driving a fast car.Hey All
First off, thank you everyone for taking an interest in my story - it's very much appreciated!
Secondly, the 'cheating' in my story is a one off event at the beginning of the game to get things moving. NTR isn't a theme I'll be exploring in Consort.
Thanks for the thumbs up - very much appreciatedLooks pretty good. let's give it a go.
I think demons is spelled wrong in the overview.
The link to the Ancients works very well with the story I'm starting to tellThe words daemon and daimon are Latinized spellings of the Greek δαίμων (daimôn), a reference to the daemons of Ancient Greek religion and mythology.
Yeah, I had a feeling about that. I need to research more before commenting here. This has happened before.As to the spelling of daemon.... I'm using this spelling on purpose.
when it happened dosnt really matter i dont see how you can say its not ntr the cheating tag is mostly used for when the mc steals another persons women or the mc cheats on his girlfriend at least thats what i usually see imo this need a netorare tagYea well I really didnt need to see that. 0 to 100 real quick and it was nowhere near as satisfying as driving a fast car.
But the guy was the literal devil. Story wise idk if it makes sense to blame her for it but from a meta perspective I can't help but feel you didnt need to go that route to get the point across. Especially since you say this kind of content wont be portrayed further in your story. Now I wont say its NTR because it happened at the beginning and us as the player had no connection to Latisha...but still that really put me off and now I am honestly apprehensive to take you at your word..
I mostly meant I'm not going to go ballistic over something that is supposed to be the introduction to the rest of the story. It's so early it might as well have been a flashback. Also I really don't need a lecture on tags(Edit: Because I agree with you). I dont think the scene needed to be the way it was but I am trying to be reasonable.when it happened dosnt really matter i dont see how you can say its not ntr the cheating tag is mostly used for when the mc steals another persons women or the mc cheats on his girlfriend at least thats what i usually see imo this need a netorare tag
You might want to check the options in the elevator with Lucy. When you get in the room MC will apologize for looking even if he didnt look at her tits because the game checks for 1 perv point which you can get from earlier in the lobby.Lorric17 - Thanks for picking up on the volume slider thing. Wll be fixed in the next release.
What's the problem here?
I made a spelling booboo in the line of text...What's the problem here?
Oh my eyes have autocorrectI made a spelling booboo in the line of text...
Well I am glad you are happy. You have an interesting story so far, despite my distaste for how you chose to introduce the antagonist.Dear All,
Just a little note to those of you who have responded in this thread so far.
Working on Consort has been a solitary experience for a long time and being able to read your thoughts and remarks has been very energising for me!
Many many thanks