Damien112

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Okay, I'm a new player and I have a couple of stuff I gotta nitpick about the game.
1) What's with all the pointless sandbox elements? It makes absolutely no sense to include sandbox elements if there is only going to be a singular choice in such scenes. Adding pointless point-and-click stuff only detracts from the gaming experience since it's tedious and needlessly slows down the pace of play. The story would flow much better if the vast majority are removed leaving only the point-and-click choices that actually have multiple scenarios or choices attached to them.

2) The password minigame is incredibly stupid and has no business being in the game, admittedly I hate password minigames in general but this specific use case has to be the absolute worst way to do so that I have ever seen. Usually, when such things are used in games they are supposed to make sense in context by either hiding the password somewhere fairly obvious leading up to the minigame or being alluded to via environmental hints or signs. The dev throws this convention out the damn window and instead inserts a password minigame with absolutely no references to anything in-game that is also incredibly immersion-breaking since even if you do know the answer it makes absolutely no sense in context since the MC would have had to have guessed this of the top of the dome. Also to top it off, even the fucking out of context hint he gave is wrong, the game had me literally trying quotes from terminator one for like a solid 15 minutes before I tried any from judgment day. Like if you are gonna put such a pointless minigame at least give a correct hint dammit.

3) This is both a major and minor one depending on the context, character head, and eye placements are sometimes extremely off, sometimes it's not noticeable but other times it kinda has me raising eyebrows at how off the scene is due to a wrong placement, like the one scene with the MC investigating the sound after dropping the teacher in her car. Why the hell is bro staring off in the opposite direction from what he is trying to observe? Like sure we the audience can see what's going on but it kinda throws me out when the implied scenario isn't actually what is represented on screen.

4) HOW DOES A PERSON SHRUG OFF A FULL-FORCE BAT SWING TO THE SKULL AND GET UP AFTER BRIEFLY PASSING OUT? This makes no sense if someone had a baseball bat swung at their head with the full force of an adult male they are more likely to fucking die to a broken skull than they are to wake up. Like even if you somehow survive the swing there's no way in hell you are waking up within the hour of the hit unless you have a damn metal plate on your skull where you go hit, hell even then the concussive force of the hit alone should be enough to keep a person out of commission for a good while.

5)Why did the MC not call the cops when Michelle got almost kidnapped? Like seriously even if the victims of a kidnapping themselves told you not to why in God's name would you listen without questioning their reasoning for such an out-of-pocket opinion? Like I'm not even mad the guy listened to Michelle I'm just incredibly floored by the fact that he didn't even ask why before coming to that decision like i would have settled for even a small segment where he asks why and she says I can't tell you right now but please trust me but nah nothing. It's the equivalent of someone getting shot and asking you not to take them to the hospital, they would need to at least have some justification so their decision isn't questioned.

That said despite all the issues I have with the game so far it's interesting enough so I'll likely check back in for a couple of updates to see if it gets improvements. Hope the Dev makes some changes to fix the issues I mentioned.
 

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For those that want instant text here is a corrected init.rpy that gives instant text when the slider is at max (10).
Explanation for the dev if they want it : in your textSpeed function (init.rpy line 109) you make your calculation for the text speed based on the slider but didn't put a condition to check if speed was at max value (in this case 11 even though the setting shows 10 it's 11 in the code don't know why but that doesn't matter) and set preferences.text_cps to 0 in that case.
 

Before I Forget

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This game obvious has pros and cons but the Dev talking about abandoning this project due to something as insignificant as reviews is pretty sad. The ratings here for a lot of games are a joke, it's full of gaslighting and shouldn't be taken serious. So I really hope he's not comparing ratings from other games to his. What I would like for the Dev to do is take to heart ONLY the constructive criticism, ignore the other stuff and focus on bettering his project.
 

Dark Silence

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This game obvious has pros and cons but the Dev talking about abandoning this project due to something as insignificant as reviews is pretty sad. The ratings here for a lot of games are a joke, it's full of gaslighting and shouldn't be taken serious. So I really hope he's not comparing ratings from other games to his. What I would like for the Dev to do is take to heart ONLY the constructive criticism, ignore the other stuff and focus on bettering his project.
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Exactly. I've played a lot of very good games that people have shat on in reviews. Mainly because their fetish wasn't in the game or because it was slow burn. Dev needs to just block out the reviews and just carry on.
 

Before I Forget

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Exactly. I've played a lot of very good games that people have shat on in reviews. Mainly because their fetish wasn't in the game or because it was slow burn. Dev needs to just block out the reviews and just carry on.
Yep. Then of course there's the other side of the coin. There's plenty of games on her that get gaslighted BECAUSE their fetish is on display. Tribalism runs rampart around here.
 
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Saint Blackmoor

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This game obvious has pros and cons but the Dev talking about abandoning this project due to something as insignificant as reviews is pretty sad. The ratings here for a lot of games are a joke, it's full of gaslighting and shouldn't be taken serious. So I really hope he's not comparing ratings from other games to his. What I would like for the Dev to do is take to heart ONLY the constructive criticism, ignore the other stuff and focus on bettering his project.
All good points.
Having worked with many developers in my proofreading, I see the spectrum of reactions from them. Have talked a few into continuing, given advice, and mainly listened to them. We are all different in how we react to stress. The main issue is that thier expectations are too high, and the crash is difficult to recover from.
Some continue their game but avoid F95 because they know what to expect. I'd say that is much better than giving up completely.

This is a worldwide platform. This is a very good opportunity to grow as a person by interacting with different cultures and being open to their way of thinking without harsh judgment while showing them your side of the story emphatically.
 
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That said, despite all the issues I have with the game so far, it's interesting enough, so I'll likely check back in for a couple of updates to see if it gets improvements. Hope the Dev makes some changes to fix the issues I mentioned.
I'm working with the dev to fix some issues. The password is one of them. Your other points are petty, in my opinion. This is a game made by a newbie. Newbie is the point here. Some advice for you. Don't play games if you're going to use actual world logic.
Read the post above this one.
 

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The protagonist, who became an orphan at the age of 13, was adopted by his father's friend. But unknown by the fact that a conspiracy is taking place backstage.​

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Release Date: 2023-10-09
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Version: Chapter 1 - 0.5
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Unfortunately, I was not able to work on text speed.
If anyone from community can fix it, you're most welcomed.


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sergerserj

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Dev... Why player need to click on single objects to continue all the time? There is no sense for that at all. If it was a choices ok, no problem, but when there are no choices... why?
Why, after animations, you need to push skip/ctrl button to (fast) continue the game. Not sure if It's worked as intended.
Text speed... I guess change transitions to 1(0) and text_cps to 0 really help for game, if you don't wanna w8 all the time...
Btw visual not bad... Plot... well see.
But for now the game need a lot to improve to become decent.
 

Damien112

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I'm working with the dev to fix some issues. The password is one of them. Your other points are petty, in my opinion. This is a game made by a newbie. Newbie is the point here. Some advice for you. Don't play games if you're going to use actual world logic.
Read the post above this one.
Regardless of whether you think my points are petty or not they are all valid and after going through this thread everything I've mentioned has been pointed out more than once before so it isn't like I'm speaking without a point. I'll acknowledge the author is a newbie so he should be provided some leeway, that said giving him/her a pass for stuff doesn't mean I won't point it out in hopes that he/she will fix the issues so he/she can make an overall better quality game. It is in both our best interests that such things are pointed out so the faults can be ironed out quickly.
Also on your point about not expecting logic from games, while that it is true as a general rule, it is also very flawed thinking. When a game is given a setting that is grounded in reality, some basic levels of realism and logic has to be adhered to in order to maintain immersion, tone, and atmosphere. If you want to be able to get away with highly unusual and unrealistic scenarios then set the world up in a way that the improbable is not impossible, and even then it would need to have some basis as to why such an improbable event can occur.
 
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Saint Blackmoor

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Regardless of whether you think my points are petty or not, they are all valid.
Valid? Do you decide what is valid? Just because some other members say something similar doesn't make it valid. And if they said it already, why are you chiming in? You and I said the dev is new at this, but you basically attacked him/her like a drill sergeant.
And don't give me "that's how I am" bullshit. I am not saying treat them with flowers and sunshine, but essentially, screaming at them will not do anything but make you look like a punk. Good job, you accomplished that.
 
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Conspiracy [Ch. 1 v0.6 Fix] [Remendo's Pvt Lmt]

NOTE: Incest patch is included, but is not applied.

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Ennoch

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Uhm, is this the one where there is some sort of magic existing and dad pops out of a portal in some alley have a quick chat then leaves?
 
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