Which Girl is better? Remu or Karen? The rich CFO's daughter? or your girl friend


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Prinplup

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Nice input, But the storycaption left bar is too cramped don't you think?
I just went all out in compresson, would suggest asking your (paying) sponsors for feedback. I refactored "Home" to show what it looks like without the whitespace. The attached zip has the text for Home/StoryCaption/StorySidebar, and a modified (17c) html.

I would also suggest doing away with the text on the right bar completely, and replace the skip 1h/3h with images e.g. the clock with a 1 and 3 in red text. Ideally hovering over a picture should pop up a text description, but generally players should be able to figure out what they do by just clicking?

A few humble suggestions:
1.) A code editor with twine highlighting ( I use sublime text + )
2a.) Use the \ character to end lines without whitespace
2b.) You can use tabs to make your code more readable

Combining the two, this is an excerpt from Home (17c). Note that you repeated the elseif $status is "Dating Remu" and $time >18 and $time <21 block (with a wrong comment on the first one). I think such mistakes will occur less often if you follow some conventions for code formatting

Code:
<<if $home is "Owned Small House">><<nobr>>


/* Dating Karen - Evening */
<</nobr>><<if $location_karen is "home" and $status is "Dating Karen" and $time >18 and $time <23>>
<img src="img/char/karen_living.jpg" style="max-width: 80%;">

<<speech "You">>I'm hanging out with Karen in the living room<</speech>><<nobr>>




/* Dating Karen - Evening */
<</nobr>><<elseif $status is "Dating Remu" and $time >18 and $time <21 >>
<video controls autoplay ><source @src='"sexvid/remu_home_living_evening/"+either("cuddle_3")+".mp4"' type="video/mp4"></video>

<<speech "You">>I'm hanging out with Remu in the living room<</speech>><<nobr>>



/* Dating Remu - Evening */
<</nobr>><<elseif $status is "Dating Remu" and $time >18 and $time <21 >>
<video controls autoplay ><source @src='"sexvid/remu_home_living_evening/"+either("cuddle_3")+".mp4"' type="video/mp4"></video>

<<speech "You">>I'm hanging out with Remu in the living room<</speech>><<nobr>>



/* Owned Small House - Married Remu Evening */
<</nobr>>
<<elseif $status is "Married to Remu" and $time >17 and $time <20>>

<img src="img/char/remu_livingroom_1.jpg" style="max-width: 80%;">

I'm having a good time talking with My Wife

[[Have Sex with her|Remu 9]]

<<nobr>>





/* Julia Home - Day */
<</nobr>>
This can be written cleaner as:

Code:
/* Start Owned Small House */\
<<if $home is "Owned Small House">>\
    /* Dating Karen - Evening */\
    <<if $location_karen is "home" and $status is "Dating Karen" and $time >18 and $time <23>>\
        <img src="img/char/karen_living.jpg" style="max-width: 80%;">
        <<speech "You">>I'm hanging out with Karen in the living room<</speech>>
    /* Dating Remu - Evening */\
    <<elseif $status is "Dating Remu" and $time >18 and $time <21>>\
        <video controls autoplay ><source @src='"sexvid/remu_home_living_evening/"+either("cuddle_3")+".mp4"' type="video/mp4"></video>
        <<speech "You">>I'm hanging out with Remu in the living room<</speech>>
    /* Owned Small House - Married Remu Evening */\
    <<elseif $status is "Married to Remu" and $time >17 and $time <20>>\
        <img src="img/char/remu_livingroom_1.jpg" style="max-width: 80%;">
        I'm having a good time talking with My Wife
        [[Have Sex with her|Remu 9]]
    /* Julia Home - Day */\

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Prinplup

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This might be useful:

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I modified the speech/avatar macros/css as follows, so that the name only appears over the face when you hover mouse. It does not always lead to a nicer page and definitely needs more work, but could be useful in further reducing vertical bloat:

HTML:
</style><script id="twine-user-script" role="script" type="text/twine-javascript">Macro.add('speech', {
    tags     : null,
    handler  : function () {
        var id = this.args[0], name = id;
        if (this.args.length > 1) name = this.args[1];
        var output = '<div class="speech ' + id + '">';
        if(id=="Youp") name = "You (cop)";
      output += '<span class="avatar"><div class="overlay"><div class="text">' + name +'</div></div></span>';
        output += this.payload[0].contents + '</div>';
        $(this.output).wiki(output);
    }
});
CSS:
.avatar {
    display: block;
    padding: 1px;
    height: 84px;
    width: 84px;
    float: left;
    margin: 0px 10px 0px 0px;
    border: 2px solid Black;
    border-radius: 5px;
    background-size: contain;
    background-repeat: no-repeat;
    background-position: center;
}
.overlay {
  opacity: 0;
  background-color: #008CBA;
}
.avatar:hover .overlay {
  opacity: 1;
}
 

wei270

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(bug) can't scroll down on small phone, and since 0,17d add promotion, this makes me unable to access call function from cell phone.
 

Gakko_dev

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(bug) can't scroll down on small phone, and since 0,17d add promotion, this makes me unable to access call function from cell phone.
Okay thanks for notifying this, I'll add the scroll bar tomorrow, but at the moment, for quick workaround, can try to zoom it out a bit
 

osmcuser132

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CorpoLife_dev I never dated Karen and dumped her to make her quit the bank and just married Remu and I am CFO and have bought the mansion and completed the Eva/Candice quest-line.

Is there any way to make her quit and appear in the convenience store without having to restart the game and loose all my progress?
 

zoku

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Grinding makes you rich
But seriously, I gave up after one hour of play because you feel that the game isn't going nowhere.
And I'm not a type of guy who wants to jump to the gallery in the first minute, But there is an extent where a grind can be tolerated with few conditions where you feel that there is an evolution of the storyline besides captivation.

Trading many hours of play for looped scenes of few seconds that we can find ourselves on the net in full length videos, is not really worth it.

In short, after 1 hour of play there was no storyline at all. It just felt like a waste of time. And I think you need to adress that matter.
 

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Gakko_dev

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CorpoLife_dev I never dated Karen and dumped her to make her quit the bank and just married Remu and I am CFO and have bought the mansion and completed the Eva/Candice quest-line.

Is there any way to make her quit and appear in the convenience store without having to restart the game and loose all my progress?
No. It means you never get to know Karen closely, and it's irrelevant to have her "return" to your life
 

emmanul

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hi there, for some reason the Yua-BINAF event for me is not continuing, i bought the 50 million mansion, but for some reason, when i check the property, i can still buy it again, and the event after it is not triggering. Please help
 

Gakko_dev

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hi there, for some reason the Yua-BINAF event for me is not continuing, i bought the 50 million mansion, but for some reason, when i check the property, i can still buy it again, and the event after it is not triggering. Please help
Can you rollback (hit default back button on the left side bar?) until before you re-bought the mansion. This is definitely a bug. I should have remove the option to re-purchase the mansion if you already purchased the mansion
 
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