Wew...ok this is a very interesting game to say the least. I love where the game is going already and I have no clue where that place even is. The writing (not so much the grammar) and the interactions between Elsa and Edward is by far my favorite.
Elsa is a heck of a character, I already love her. Design, attitude, dialogue, personality, etc. I am very much looking forward to more of her. Very mysterious that one. The whole knight and princess things between Elsa and MC is hilarious too with Elsa being the knight and MC being the princess in the tower waiting for knight to save him heh. Already a favorite girl for me among the games I really like. Good job.
When Alice was introduced I immediately loved her design for being similar to another girl in my favorites in another game. Maybe someone can guess. Anyway I thought she was just going to be a generic character for the MC's starting motivation while Elsa would be the main girl and Lucy the easy fast sex scene character but it seems that wont be the case. Maybe I am looking into it but she is quite mysterious too. The end scene where Edward picks between wanting to live or to make them suffer got me thinking when I chose suffer. Maybe she is indeed sweet, or shes the absolutely ruthless cunning sadistic mean woman I suspect her to be, making a run to control the company while Elsa is the one who comes off as calculating cunning and ruthless when she is in fact not that way at all and just comes off that way. Though there is obviously a lot more to Elsa, a big player in one of the factions vying for control of the company? Rival to Alice? Maybe I am looking way too deeply into things.
Interesting game, anyway bravo to the dev,
sqwl along with the writing (grammar aside lol). Please dont abandon the game lol
I read some comments on the game description and how its very vague, short, and doesnt do the game justice. I can see the point but personally I disagree but thats in my case only. It was short and to the point and honestly the game name, banner, and description is what made me want to check it out. Also description reminded me of that game The Stanley Parable. Another reason I checked the game out.
I do agree with other comments though, a lot of weird grammar issues and a few sentences dont even make sense. And in Edwards room when Elsa is putting her shoes back on and goes to leave, she tells the MC he forgot to take her shoes off but the game dialogue indicates that Edward is saying it instead of Elsa. And the 1st post also needs better images to represent the game, they dont do the game justice.
