iSevik
Newbie
- Apr 15, 2021
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Make the ability to pump up the character (character levels), add skill points. Also train slaves and companions. The ability to improve and modify weapons, add different materials for construction, make a more normal interface (for example, like in apocalyptic world).
The idea is good, I wonder what will happen next
The idea is good, I wonder what will happen next
bebopalot
New Member
- Mar 27, 2024
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The scrolling in this game because of all the padding is quite annoying. I had a look at the code and it seems to be caused by a bunch of <br> tags everywhere. I removed them all and now the game looks like this. Much better I think. I suggest you do the same SilkSpice
Post apoc games are interesting to me, and while I like the start somewhat sofar. Right now theres alot of little QoL improvements that are needed, like being able to bulk buy and sell. Seems so far you can only sell food and having to sell food 200 or 400 times clicking and scrolling just to buy a shotgun is just not something I'm gonna ever want to do all the time.
Needs to be able to have more interactions with slaves/companions even if you've assigned them to something. Having them sit pretty in the harem while eatting food with few repeatable scenes is not worth much after seeing those same repeated scenes once or twice.
Items and objects feel like empty things that barely impact the gameplay, there needs to be some more feeling of effect or usefulness to some items.
Anyways this isn't a bad start for a early game release, and hope to see it develop into something fun with its own take and lore and world building to distinguish it from other similar games.
Needs to be able to have more interactions with slaves/companions even if you've assigned them to something. Having them sit pretty in the harem while eatting food with few repeatable scenes is not worth much after seeing those same repeated scenes once or twice.
Items and objects feel like empty things that barely impact the gameplay, there needs to be some more feeling of effect or usefulness to some items.
Anyways this isn't a bad start for a early game release, and hope to see it develop into something fun with its own take and lore and world building to distinguish it from other similar games.
I was gonna comment on this but you've more or less solved the UI issue on your own, home Game Maker implements this or something similar.
You can loot caps from kills, but you are 100% correct about the issues.
I've been trying to modify the index to clean up the padding and other issues, but can't find the <br> tags that appear when you inspect the browser display. Would you be able to share your changes?
bebopalot
New Member
- Mar 27, 2024
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Sorry I did not download the game to test, just edited directly in browser. If they are not present in the source file, my guess is something in the script is inserting them dynamically to every element, but I am unsure why the dev would want this.
- Apr 17, 2025
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I made a mistake in the code, it has already been fixed, as well as many other things. Soon I will upload a new version in which many problems will be fixed and there will be new content.
I made a mistake in the code, it has already been fixed, as well as many other things. Soon I will upload a new version in which many problems will be fixed and there will be new content.
As for the main character, I may someday make a choice between male and female, but it will be somewhere at the end of the list of tasks, because as you can see, there is still a lot of work to be done, and I'm alone and there is not much time for development.
As for the difference in damage between a pistol and a knife, in addition to their pure damage, there is also a random dice roll that can give higher values for a knife than a pistol, but a knife definitely does not have more damage than a pistol.
As for the interaction, you are right and it should be added, but I'm afraid that developing a good code for interaction and relationships will take a lot of time that I could devote to the basic mechanics that are visible here and immediately. (Development of such a system is underway, but it is far from working)
Meat will be sold, I haven't decided what the prices of the items will be in the end, so I'm not adding them yet.
The brothel will be a separate place in the future where they will most likely provide expensive services, that is, 2 or even 3 times more expensive than Mary's, Mary will be a quest character.
If you mean the forest, then there will be a lot of content in the forest, but later, all this will be possible.
Fixed.
- Apr 17, 2025
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This is a very early version of the game, I already think that I shouldn't have released it so early, but it's my first game, so I wanted to get some feedback from players to find out what to improve, what to change, I've already redone a lot of things based on comments like yours, so thanks for the warm and constructive feedback, I'll try my best.
Yes, it makes sense, I'll do it.
You can't change this in the browser because the game is not on pure html css js, it is “Assembled” “Compiled” into code for the browser, but in fact the code you see there is not the source code.
Nothing inserts them, it's because of a bug in the code that I don't dare to remove and redo properly because I want to spend my free time on something new, but sooner or later it will need to be fixed.
- Apr 17, 2025
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- Apr 17, 2025
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These indentations are done by the "Compiler", not me, can this be changed? You need to experiment with the code or edit the code after "compilation" - and this is double work, which I definitely will not do.
I am looking for some adequate solution that does not require a complete rewrite, but it is probably inevitable.
Yes, this is a problem with all early versions of games, they all have a feeling of incompleteness, which is not really news for early access, but still negatively affects the fate of the game, so I should have just made a slightly more refined version of the game before publishing.
Not yet, when the game has more content I will add cheats
I don't want this, and it's not me who does it, but the compiler. The platform I'm developing on is completely new to me. I've mastered it literally during the development of this game (1 month) and I still don't understand many of the nuances, but I'm sure that little by little I'll find answers to everything, and therefore solutions to problems.
bebopalot
New Member
- Mar 27, 2024
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By compiler, you mean Twine? I have never seen this issue before in other Twine games. You made me curious to look at your code properly, so I downloaded and opened in Twine. It appears you are writing full raw HTML for each story passage. Twine is designed to abstract away the need to write HTML, so it assumes that each passage is mostly text that you wish to be formatted in the game the way it is written in the file - i.e. <br> tags every time there is a new line in the passage file. Since you are writing raw HTML, there are a lot of new lines.
I would recommend learning more about how to properly write Twine files before creating more of this game, as your current technique takes more effort, and will probably cause more unexpected difficulty as you create. But if you want simple solution to this <br> issue: Simply add "\" at the end of each passage line, and Twine will not insert a <br> for that line.
Here is example of update I made to your MainMenu passage, and what it looks like now:
HTML:
<div class="main-menu">\
<div class="menu-content">\
<div class="logo-container">\
<h1 class="game-logo">Corpse City</h1>\
<div class="logo-subtitle">2037: The World After the Fall</div>\
</div>\
\
<div class="menu-warning">\
<div class="warning-icon">⚠</div>\
<p>WARNING! This game contains adult content (21+).<br>\
Sexual content, elements of dominance, violence, and brutality.<br>\
By continuing, you confirm that you are at least 18 years old.</p>\
</div>\
\
<nav class="menu-buttons">\
<a class="button start-button" data-passage="Play">\
<span class="button-inner">New Game</span>\
</a>\
<a class="button" data-passage="Settings">\
<span class="button-inner">Settings</span>\
</a>\
<a class="button" data-passage="About">\
<span class="button-inner">About</span>\
</a>\
</nav>\
\
<div class="world-info">\
<div class="info-title">World of 2037</div>\
<div class="info-text">\
After a biological catastrophe that wiped out 80% of the male population,
the world descended into chaos. You are one of the few who survived.
Now your fate is to decide the future of this world.
</div>\
</div>\
\
<div class="version-info">\
<span class="version">Version 0.2.1 Alpha Global Overhaul</span>\
<span class="separator">|</span>\
<span class="engine">SugarCube 2.36.1</span>\
<span class="separator">|</span>\
<a class="changelog-link" data-passage="Changelog">Changelog</a>\
</div>\
</div>\- Apr 17, 2025
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This is very interesting information, until recently I thought that the syntax was minimally different, but I am increasingly convinced that the changes are more significant than I expected, thanks for the interesting information, I will definitely take this into account.
I think a female Mc could be great. Ala a dirty resident evil. But that's also perhaps a different kind of game. I'm partial to female MC's as a guy because I think it's more interesting but that doesn't make this game bad as a result.
i'm seriously considering following the game to see if the dude roasting the dev in the review come back >< (though it would have been better if it was a bit nicer, he does still point out really important point while explaining clearly ... so if he does come back this would mean the story was worth waiting for the dev to work on the messed up gameplay ^^)