VN Ren'Py Correctional Church [v0.2] [Chibis]

[DH4444]

This game is barely starting and one of the choices is not available till a future date, so I cannot understand how it can have two, five star ratings. One of the choices in the bathroom scene is not available due to only 1 of 3 hearts. I replayed several times, passing & failing test, different choices with mom, but ZERO change in the number of hearts. up or down.
I'm guessing some more choices will be added to the beginning of the game, to affect the hearts, which will certainly require a restart.
I'm not saying the game is bad, but there is not much here to base such ratings on. Just about every game has potential.

 

[DH4444]

It’s perfectly fine if there’s something you don’t like. But I hope that while playing, you’ll still enjoy yourself — even if you don’t unlock 100% of the gallery.

GALLERY!, what gallery? Something else forgotten in this 5 star game.

 

[Lady Lydia]

This game is barely starting and one of the choices is not available till a future date, so I cannot understand how it can have two, five star ratings. One of the choices in the bathroom scene is not available due to only 1 of 3 hearts. I replayed several times, passing & failing test, different choices with mom, but ZERO change in the number of hearts. up or down.
I'm guessing some more choices will be added to the beginning of the game, to affect the hearts, which will certainly require a restart.
I'm not saying the game is bad, but there is not much here to base such ratings on. Just about every game has potential.

Errr I was actually able to get the three hearts... so its entirely possible to achieve it already. Being as helpful and supportive of Cornelia in addition to passing the test and leaving school with her would be it? I don't know what else it could be.

That being said I do agree its pretty short of a start and I wouldn't say its 5 Star worthy, it feels to some degree the story is trying to be a bit based on shock value with what happens and the overly aggressive religious tone in a modern setting, I feel if the same story in a medieval setting it might seem less ridiculous, in modern times it feel like its trying to be a bit like the Handmaiden's Tale, some ridiculous story about a modern ultra-christian nation, and this feel about the same, and similarly it has about the same degree of credibility as a story.

 

[Unfaithful]

This game is barely starting and one of the choices is not available till a future date, so I cannot understand how it can have two, five star ratings. One of the choices in the bathroom scene is not available due to only 1 of 3 hearts. I replayed several times, passing & failing test, different choices with mom, but ZERO change in the number of hearts. up or down.
I'm guessing some more choices will be added to the beginning of the game, to affect the hearts, which will certainly require a restart.
I'm not saying the game is bad, but there is not much here to base such ratings on. Just about every game has potential.

If you look a few posts above, you will find a walkthrough that I posted here. I think it will be very helpful to you.

GALLERY!, what gallery? Something else forgotten in this 5 star game.

I have the functionality for a gallery in the code, but I don't see the point in adding a gallery to the game right now when there aren't that many H-scenes.

 

[Suchpornverywow]

This game clearly has potential, looking forward to seeing how it progresses

 

[lonzee]

lmao this is too short

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Unfaithful

Can you answer this?

Are maledom and rape avoidable?

Has the game romance?

 

[Unfaithful]

Unfaithful

Can you answer this?



Has the game romance?

It all depends on your choices during the game. There is forced sex in the game, but no rape at this point.
There will be romance in the game.

 

[Dunking_Donuts]

It all depends on your choices during the game. There is forced sex in the game, but no rape at this point.
There will be romance in the game.

Your game is very cute and cool, the plot is great, the characters are very beautifully made, I really liked your game)) и большой жирный плюс что в игре есть русский

 

[DH4444]

If you look a few posts above, you will find a walkthrough that I posted here. I think it will be very helpful to you.

I have the functionality for a gallery in the code, but I don't see the point in adding a gallery to the game right now when there aren't that many H-scenes.

With the walkthrough, I was able to get the 3 hearts. As someone else posted, there a quite a few paths.
This quick response from the developer, along with the rather large number of other responses by you, gives me quite a bit of hope this will not be another flash in the pan game.
You may want to add SubscribeStar to your payment methods. I support about 30 developers on Subcribestar & would support 2 others, but for some stupid reason they have picked a setting that limits how many developers someone supports. Jealousy or accidentally selected the option?
I refuse to do any more business with Patreon due to their treatment of both supporters and developers. I'm clearly not the only one who feels similarly. I am glad you have the Itch option with a name your price, but I've seen comments from a couple developers recently who had to tone back their games due their policies too (or said bye bye to Itch). Hopefully this is not Itch following in Patreon's path.
If the game evolves enough, I will use the Itch option or SubscribeStar if you choose to add it.
Especially with such a new game, you might want to add a supporter level of 1 or 2 dollars for those who just want to give a little bit of support with few or no other benefits. A bunch of one's is better than zero larger donations.
In 4+ years, I think I've only supported one game in its very early stages at $5 a month and it had several times the content & a good story line, compared to what most developers have at this point. Over half the developers I currently support are at $5 or more a month, but they are pretty well established with regular updates. I have 5 more I've supported on Steam.

 

[SerasAshrein]

Your game is going very well. I always have a question about games that are just the beginning and the beginning of all the plot twists and fetishes. Or will there be a cuckold storyline? Will the girl have an animal fetish a little later in the game? And another question: you said forced sex is in this chapter or will it appear in version 3? And good luck with the game.

 

[istlover08]

this game seem to have a *lot* of paths which can easily lead to later update coming out slower or ignoring some of them. im a bit worried

 

[Tyrranus]

more hre than expected, and a solid start. Hoping the protag stops being such a yutz but at least this time theres a solid in game reason he's acting they way he does.

 

[Unfaithful]

Your game is going very well. I always have a question about games that are just the beginning and the beginning of all the plot twists and fetishes. Or will there be a cuckold storyline? Will the girl have an animal fetish a little later in the game? And another question: you said forced sex is in this chapter or will it appear in version 3? And good luck with the game.

Сuckold - no, animal fetish - sounds interesting, but I can't even imagine how it could be implemented yet. Forced sex is in the chapter yet, but without CGI's.
Thanks for review.

 

[fool793]

The art looks awesome.
Thanks for sharing.

 

[Adoringfan]

This game is barely starting and one of the choices is not available till a future date, so I cannot understand how it can have two, five star ratings. One of the choices in the bathroom scene is not available due to only 1 of 3 hearts. I replayed several times, passing & failing test, different choices with mom, but ZERO change in the number of hearts. up or down.
I'm guessing some more choices will be added to the beginning of the game, to affect the hearts, which will certainly require a restart.
I'm not saying the game is bad, but there is not much here to base such ratings on. Just about every game has potential.

Afaik you have to pass the test and walk the sister home and then peek on her in the bathroom. As for rating on potential, I hate that shit. Rate games for what is present and not what could be. Models look good and it's interesting so far, even if it's somewhat predictable. Not liking that you have to pick between the mom and the sister so early on, even if the sister choice is available in a future patch. In a harem game you want to catch em all and having a fork like that so early means you might not catch them all. Unless the two paths meet up at the same place later on, but then it just seems like creating extra work for no real reason. Also, not a big fan of the overheard scene, not because it's bad, but it should be shown. Is that where this pic comes from?

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Did the scene just not make it into this update? I liked the game, so far, but there is a lot of lore and world building that needs filling out. Like why did that boy have cat ears? When/how did the church get like this? Why did the sister rat on her own mother? My advice is not to set up too many forks, because then each of those paths has to be filled in and if someone is a fan of one path and not another, if only certain paths are updated they will be put out and the more forking that occurs the more this happens. It's how devs burn themselves out, because the workload is multiplied and trying to please too many people usually ends with an abandoned title. I'm looking forward to the next update, but pace yourself and be mindful of scope creep, is what I am saying.

 

[xuxuxf]

Afaik you have to pass the test and walk the sister home and then peek on her in the bathroom. As for rating on potential, I hate that shit. Rate games for what is present and not what could be. Models look good and it's interesting so far, even if it's somewhat predictable. Not liking that you have to pick between the mom and the sister so early on, even if the sister choice is available in a future patch. In a harem game you want to catch em all and having a fork like that so early means you might not catch them all. Unless the two paths meet up at the same place later on, but then it just seems like creating extra work for no real reason. Also, not a big fan of the overheard scene, not because it's bad, but it should be shown. Is that where this pic comes from?

Spoiler: picrel

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Did the scene just not make it into this update? I liked the game, so far, but there is a lot of lore and world building that needs filling out. Like why did that boy have cat ears? When/how did the church get like this? Why did the sister rat on her own mother? My advice is not to set up too many forks, because then each of those paths has to be filled in and if someone is a fan of one path and not another, if only certain paths are updated they will be put out and the more forking that occurs the more this happens. It's how devs burn themselves out, because the workload is multiplied and trying to please too many people usually ends with an abandoned title. I'm looking forward to the next update, but pace yourself and be mindful of scope creep, is what I am saying.

This image is included in the 0.1 update.—going to get the letter will unlock it.

 

[xuxuxf]

Afaik you have to pass the test and walk the sister home and then peek on her in the bathroom. As for rating on potential, I hate that shit. Rate games for what is present and not what could be. Models look good and it's interesting so far, even if it's somewhat predictable. Not liking that you have to pick between the mom and the sister so early on, even if the sister choice is available in a future patch. In a harem game you want to catch em all and having a fork like that so early means you might not catch them all. Unless the two paths meet up at the same place later on, but then it just seems like creating extra work for no real reason. Also, not a big fan of the overheard scene, not because it's bad, but it should be shown. Is that where this pic comes from?

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Did the scene just not make it into this update? I liked the game, so far, but there is a lot of lore and world building that needs filling out. Like why did that boy have cat ears? When/how did the church get like this? Why did the sister rat on her own mother? My advice is not to set up too many forks, because then each of those paths has to be filled in and if someone is a fan of one path and not another, if only certain paths are updated they will be put out and the more forking that occurs the more this happens. It's how devs burn themselves out, because the workload is multiplied and trying to please too many people usually ends with an abandoned title. I'm looking forward to the next update, but pace yourself and be mindful of scope creep, is what I am saying.

The developer has answered these questions before; you can look back at the previous responses.

 

[sergerserj]

Good game. But text....
Why all this unnecessary name colorization, bold fonts, size change, etc...?
Just for thoughts use (text). For whispers *text* and size=-10. For yelling size=+10. Etc, etc... Or make tags for every option.
Right now all this with (whispering) (interrupting) (quietly) just a one big mess.
And wrongly made Ipatch - relation capitalizations are wrong or not working, not add good vibes in to the game. Relation capitalizations are wrong in script too, btw.
I personally made patch with all "emotion" fixes and remade ipatch in 30 min (I'm not even a coder, lol). Not that hard...
And of course another dev who for money decided use Patreon instead of other normal sites and NOT make consistent game without needing bugged ipatch...
Проще надо быть, проще... И не губить игру жадностью.

 

[MagicMan753]

Very solid dev. Girls are great. I will say I wish you maybe just waited to put out second release, then to have a choice we can't choose yet cause its in devlopment. I just don't think we should be doing that.

I hope that we will have some group scenes or something and there can possibly be some lesbian play and interaction in it between them. Also quick question, is there any chance for many some type of femdom element, maybe the teacher or someone else, could be hot, with maybe some facesitting, ass eating, body worship, maybe some other stuff or kinks, not sure, just curious, fine if not.

Also I seen someone mention something about animals, I don't know if this is what they want, but something that could be hot is maybe one of the girls can be like our kitty cat roleplay, ears, sexy lingerie, possibly a tail inserted in her ass. It would be a roleplay thing for maybe one of the girls.

But other than that, hope for maybe slightly bigger releases that don't force you only onto one choice in the future. But keep up the good work, its exciting.