VN Ren'Py Corrupted Hearts [v0.6 Part B] [Sinful Studios]

[siath70]

If, I'm honest, I play the game and choose the option where Clara the elite assassin get shot in the head. All because she kept her team out of the loop and decided to trust someone she didn't know.

Story makes much more sense.

 

[abirvg]

Why can't we just have a dark revenge path.

...How would you integrate a "dark revenge path" in the ntr porn game?
I mean, think for a moment: if you were to choose, what would you want to see in the next update - gunfight scenes or sex scenes?

So you need revenge through sex.
But antagonists don't really care for anyone in these games. ...Except for, maybe, mMC .
You can't NTR the guy who doesn't love.

So... what's the revenge plan?
For MC to tie Leon up and fuck him in his hairy ass? Not sure if a sudden gay turn would be received much better than 50 gunfight scenes instead of sex scenes, honestly...

 

[Return_To_Monke]

Revenge path will suit a ntr game like this. Preferably quick and intense.

 

[MoBy28]

Revenge path will suit a ntr game like this. Preferably quick and intense.

The revenge path for this one will probably just be sending Clara to jail with the "bad guys" and being with Anna afterwards(optional). Most stories like this focus on all the sex scenes and quick simple endings.

 

[Return_To_Monke]

The revenge path for this one will probably just be sending Clara to jail with the "bad guys" and being with Anna afterwards(optional). Most stories like this focus on all the sex scenes and quick simple endings.

I wonder why majority games do those simple endings instead of being a bit elaborate about it.

 

[MoBy28]

I wonder why majority games do those simple endings instead of being a bit elaborate about it.

Easier, faster, cheaper and unless it's actually a good story not too many care for the endings, just the sex scenes getting there. Some devs just aren't good with endings as well. I've had 2 really good stories/games release their endings this year and both had multiple endings that were well done.

 

[UpravDom]

Easier, faster, cheaper and unless it's actually a good story not too many care for the endings, just the sex scenes getting there. Some devs just aren't good with endings as well. I've had 2 really good stories/games release their endings this year and both had multiple endings that were well done.

It's not that simple! A complex erotic drama unfolds in the game. Very carefully, in short steps, the story of an experienced agent named Clara is moving forward! The situation that Clara is in is like a whirlpool in a river. Without outside help, Clara will flounder on the surface until she has enough strength, but eventually Clara will gradually be dragged to the bottom! At the beginning of the story, Clara acts decisively like a kind of luxurious lioness! But the enemy turned out to be more cunning and stronger ! Clara is simply bent lower and lower, literally and figuratively! It is interesting for me to observe this process and I hope the endings of the game will not be hasty.

 

[srl316]

Really? You're here for logic?

I already know you just need pics, so don't reply as a clown.
and hey, if you just want sex, why don't go to video？

 

[srl316]

Clara is simply bent lower and lower, literally and figuratively! It is interesting for me to observe this process and I hope the endings of the game will not be hasty.

this route is very good, I also like the process.

 

[Adhdclassic]

...How would you integrate a "dark revenge path" in the ntr porn game?
I mean, think for a moment: if you were to choose, what would you want to see in the next update - gunfight scenes or sex scenes?

So you need revenge through sex.
But antagonists don't really care for anyone in these games. ...Except for, maybe, mMC .
You can't NTR the guy who doesn't love.

So... what's the revenge plan?
For MC to tie Leon up and fuck him in his hairy ass? Not sure if a sudden gay turn would be received much better than 50 gunfight scenes instead of sex scenes, honestly...

Actually I wrote a dark revenge path awhile back. A game of spies and espionage is easy to write a dark revenge path.

 

[Adhdclassic]

I wonder if they will pull a rarity for a NTR and instead of the guy losing the girl and falling into a mass depression. The girl loses the guy and she falls into depression and depravity. Anna is pushing to be with Alan and she is willing to do anything to be with him. Alan is already seeing the difference with Clara and questioning if she really loves him while Anna is showing him respect and care.

 

[srl316]

Easier, faster, cheaper and unless it's actually a good story not too many care for the endings, just the sex scenes getting there. Some devs just aren't good with endings as well. I've had 2 really good stories/games release their endings this year and both had multiple endings that were well done.

maybe could you tell me which two？ i wanna try.

 

[tharsheblows]

She did tell him it would be ok for him to cum in her. So fuck off with your weak arguments. She did tell him not to put it in, if the second sex scene happens. So what are you talking about?

The position is she fucked Leon in 6 days from mission start over a kiss. She went out on dates with her husband during that time, but oh wait, they're supposed to hide their relationship. She banged her husband on day 1 of the mission, so in 5 days she feels so alone, even though her husband is right there and she can spend time with him. She's super stressed, in 6 days really? Some elite agent she is.
She get's ashamed of what happened with Leon, only then did she come up with the whole, maybe you shouldn't visit so much. Oh, so he was visiting her during those 6 days...

The story is all over the place and doesn't make sense. Don't worry we all know you're here for the pictures.

You sure know a lot about "elite agents" You must have gone to some "elite agent" school to have acquired all this indepth knowledge of not only "elite agentism" but an incredilbe indepthunderstanding of the female psyche.

Ever wonder why you're the only one sliding up and down this flag pole?
Ever get tired of trying to convince the world that you know so much about sothing you really have no idea about?
You seem to be getting more and more desperate in the effort.

 

[tharsheblows]

I already know you just need pics, so don't reply as a clown.
and hey, if you just want sex, why don't go to video？

I clown no one. Serious question.
You're actually disappointed if logic is suspended in a porn comic?

 

[eldorado14]

I love how people can literally deflect any criticism with porn logic nonsense. Like, we can't actually point out some badly done parts of the story or game because it's a lowbrow porn comic quality work in a porn site.

This site has well-written and quality porn games, you know. You can't deflect any criticism with that short of nonsense forever.

 

[MoBy28]

I wonder if they will pull a rarity for a NTR and instead of the guy losing the girl and falling into a mass depression. The girl loses the guy and she falls into depression and depravity. Anna is pushing to be with Alan and she is willing to do anything to be with him. Alan is already seeing the difference with Clara and questioning if she really loves him while Anna is showing him respect and care.

I can only see her possibly going into a depression on the corruption/slut path, most of the time she doesn't seem to care about the marriage or her husband much less truly love him enough to get depressed over losing him. She would probably go into the depression from realizing what she has become and how she is the one to blame instead of others. She might even be happy if Alan was with Anna if she makes him happy and truly loves him.

 

[tharsheblows]

I love how people can literally deflect any criticism with porn logic nonsense. Like, we can't actually point out some badly done parts of the story or game because it's a lowbrow porn comic quality work in a porn site.

This site has well-written and quality porn games, you know. You can't deflect any criticism with that short of nonsense forever.

Logic exists on a spectrum There's porn logic and then, for lack of a better term, there's "Hard Logic" People need to realize there's a balance point between the two where the general consensus is to accept the logic and move on. Some folks are incapable of doing this and insist on trying to hammer hard logic into a story created for the purpose of fun and sheer entertainment. Then they get butt hurt when the general consensus indulges thier view point for a while, then responds to repeated efforts to hammer away with "give it a rest."

 

[Adhdclassic]

Hope in the end they let us choose between Anna and Clara. I would choose Anna, After her dick insults let that bitch go. Usually I like to play the faithful fully through after She said that shit so easy and freely. Bye Bitch.

 

[Deleted member 7535870]

Hope in the end they let us choose between Anna and Clara. I would choose Anna, After her dick insults let that bitch go. Usually I like to play the faithful fully through after She said that shit so easy and freely. Bye Bitch.

I would love that too, there will surely be a redemption path for Alan to forgive her and move on like nothing had happen i bet a lot of people wouls like that but there other people who want Alan to be with Anna and let Clara down since she's an unworthy wife

 

[siath70]

I love how people can literally deflect any criticism with porn logic nonsense. Like, we can't actually point out some badly done parts of the story or game because it's a lowbrow porn comic quality work in a porn site.

This site has well-written and quality porn games, you know. You can't deflect any criticism with that short of nonsense forever.

This, why can't you have a good well written story and the porn?
If you do not say anything then the authors think it's all good as long as the pictures are good.

This story could be so much better as myself and many other have said. The fact anyone takes time to say so shows they think the story could be great. It's up to the Devs to take into account what is being said and improve their writing.

It shouldn't only be about the pretty pictures, some of us do like a good well thought out story.

Take some time go back and fix the story to make more sense, be proud of what you do and don't half ass it.

People saying she was alone and under pressure, well...
Let's look at a timeline.
She is an elite agent trained to deal with high stress situations being an assassin.

From the Dev's own description:
Your wife, Clara, the most beautiful woman you had ever set eyes upon and an elite secret agent, is by your side, but the waters are treacherous.
Both of you are tasked to infiltrate a powerful company as spies along with your intern, Anna.

Let me tell you, she is not even near your side from the start, she hides everything from you and the team.

Now the timeline:
Day one fucks husband after work.
Day two not much happened, event with code.
Day three goes out with husband and theater event happens. I think she cums from getting eaten out and fingered.
Day four not much happens, story events.
Day five again more story.
Day six, sees husband in a kiss with Anna, doesn't question it. Falls on her back and fucks Leon over that.
All those days, the husband can come over and visit and spend time with her.
Day seven tells husband he can't come over anymore. (no red flags there)
Day eight see a picture from Leon as he visits her in middle of night, again. Picture is her husband grabbing Anna's tit. Sex between Leon and Clara ONLY if Alan tries to spy on her. But that sex Leon can't put it in at all. Any other choice Leon gets kicked out.

So, with in about a week, this elite secret agent is so stressed she just abandons her real team over someone she doesn't know (Leon). She fucks Leon over a kiss and hides everything from a team she's been working with for 5 years as if she doesn't trust them?

Yeah...