VN Ren'Py Onhold Corrupted Hearts [v0.7 Part B] [Sinful Studios]

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

Meh. If original cheating is a plot point or some kind of catalyst - it's alright. Like the early one - it's justified.
The one with Leon is premature and is lacking buildup, imo.

As far as NTR(hell, not even NTR, but most of the stories written in here) goes - 8 out of 10 are just pure garbage.
NTR or not, the main catalyst is "Ohmagad I've seen the penis while he was showering".
I don't know what kind of women some of the lads hang around, but haven't met one who was like "yeah, dick is the ultimate decision-maker".

Well we don’t know if Clara is a size queen or not but when all she gets in the tasks are big dicks and bbcs, it’s hard to go back to little Alan and feel satisfied

 

[Sadowdark]

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Well we don’t know if Clara is a size queen or not but when all she gets in the tasks are big dicks and bbcs, it’s hard to go back to little Alan and feel satisfied

Because this is a classic in NTR games, Alan will become a cuck and Clara will become a sperm dumpster.

 

[Sadowdark]

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They should have changed the review writing system on this website a long time ago.

 

[WikiFox]

I came in to laugh at the comments. In this topic, people are guessing what will happen next. I'll tell you nothing interesting. Clara is such a good agent that she solves all her questions by spreading her legs. Alan is generally a super hacker with an IQ below 10. To be honest, I forgot what their assignment is (to fuck with everyone)? I personally don't like playing for the idiot Alan.
There are no riddles in this game, the new characters that will appear will definitely fuck Clara.
And who is this X I wonder? I can't even imagine (It's Leon, you can disagree)

 

[UpravDom]

I came in to laugh at the comments. In this topic, people are guessing what will happen next. I'll tell you nothing interesting. Clara is such a good agent that she solves all her questions by spreading her legs. Alan is generally a super hacker with an IQ below 10. To be honest, I forgot what their assignment is (to fuck with everyone)? I personally don't like playing for the idiot Alan.
There are no riddles in this game, the new characters that will appear will definitely fuck Clara.
And who is this X I wonder? I can't even imagine (It's Leon, you can disagree)

Really funny! It's not the first time you've been here and you still haven't realized that you're playing a porn game! Here all the characters are fucking or enjoying the view!

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

Because this is a classic in NTR games, Alan will become a cuck and Clara will become a sperm dumpster.

Why don’t the devs know by now that every Cuck character in their game should be named “Joshy”
Even the “Baby sitters” dev does this in his game

 

[Sadowdark]

I came in to laugh at the comments. In this topic, people are guessing what will happen next. I'll tell you nothing interesting. Clara is such a good agent that she solves all her questions by spreading her legs. Alan is generally a super hacker with an IQ below 10. To be honest, I forgot what their assignment is (to fuck with everyone)? I personally don't like playing for the idiot Alan.
There are no riddles in this game, the new characters that will appear will definitely fuck Clara.
And who is this X I wonder? I can't even imagine (It's Leon, you can disagree)

Klara, a spy-murderer who kills in cold blood without blinking an eye and breaks down after one kiss, sees Alan kissing Anna and Klara thought he might have had sex, the behavior of a stupid bimbo, I have never seen more stupidity in the game. Klara was supposed to see this kiss. I think X told Anna to do it. Anna pretends to be stupid and innocent - an easy cover. X He did it for Leon's sake. . A very far-fetched and poorly executed forced NTR and too fast.

 

[fbass]

Klara, a spy-murderer who kills in cold blood without blinking an eye and breaks down after one kiss, sees Alan kissing Anna and Klara thought he might have had sex, the behavior of a stupid bimbo, I have never seen more stupidity in the game. Klara was supposed to see this kiss. I think X told Anna to do it. Anna pretends to be stupid and innocent - an easy cover. X He did it for Leon's sake. . A very far-fetched and poorly executed forced NTR and too fast.

Have you played the game? Clara is unsatisfied with Alan and is put in several tempting situations. While she despises the situations she still has a biological response, meaning she gets horny whether she likes it or not. Horny and unsatisfied can be dangerous for anyone

 

[MoBy28]

Have you played the game? Clara is unsatisfied with Alan and is put in several tempting situations. While she despises the situations she still has a biological response, meaning she gets horny whether she likes it or not. Horny and unsatisfied can be dangerous for anyone

Then tell us why are they still married? If it takes so little to trigger that response it probably should have happened alot sooner in their marriage.

 

[ScrewMe]

Have you played the game? Clara is unsatisfied with Alan and is put in several tempting situations. While she despises the situations she still has a biological response, meaning she gets horny whether she likes it or not. Horny and unsatisfied can be dangerous for anyone

Yeah mate)
Dudes who have pregnant wives and don't have sexual encounters for a few months start fucking their coworkers just because they flirted a bit? (And almost everyone knows that there's this stupid trajectory: when you have no partner - nobody gives a fuck, but once you have one - all of a sudden every other girl starts flirting with you)
Come on
SD still could somehow make ends meet with making it known that wine bottle was spiked or something.

 

[Sadowdark]

Have you played the game? Clara is unsatisfied with Alan and is put in several tempting situations. While she despises the situations she still has a biological response, meaning she gets horny whether she likes it or not. Horny and unsatisfied can be dangerous for anyone

Yeah mate)
Dudes who have pregnant wives and don't have sexual encounters for a few months start fucking their coworkers just because they flirted a bit? (And almost everyone knows that there's this stupid trajectory: when you have no partner - nobody gives a fuck, but once you have one - all of a sudden every other girl starts flirting with you)
Come on
SD still could somehow make ends meet with making it known that wine bottle was spiked or something.

Specially prepare wine with Clara's increased libido

 

[Couto25]

Specially prepare wine with Clara's increased libido

I think it's a mix of all wine(alcohol) + getting cheated feeling + sexual dissatisfaction + someone(Leon) take advantage of the situation at the right time when the girl is most vulnerable. Obviously It's a game so all the reason for cheating in most of the games are mixed together to present an early scene ....as per the vision of the story this cheating sex is required.

If he would have added a small tease kind of scene of 15/20 renders of Clara and Leon in some early part especially during the scene where Leon saved Alan and Clara's ass while alan try to hack into the system., where clara might have stopped leon approach while working together (e.g. some flirting or groping or spanking in ass or boob touch or a kiss.... anything) from progressing any further...or leon acted professional and controlled himself after groping / coping a feel of clara by saying we should stay professional even if he finds her attractive...... then this scene would have made more sense. But whatever done is done..lets see how it goes forward.

 

[ScrewMe]

Specially prepare wine with Clara's increased libido

Meh. Good old Aphrodisiac could've worked.
Make X do the call to Clara and telling her "Ouch, that kiss probably hurt, but there's wine bottle I left in your room" and make Leon tell her that he's gotten message from X to come to her etc etc.

There were numerous ways to write this without players showing their hand before Flop and out of all the options one of the bad ones was chosen, imo.

 

[fbass]

Yeah mate)
Dudes who have pregnant wives and don't have sexual encounters for a few months start fucking their coworkers just because they flirted a bit? (And almost everyone knows that there's this stupid trajectory: when you have no partner - nobody gives a fuck, but once you have one - all of a sudden every other girl starts flirting with you)
Come on
SD still could somehow make ends meet with making it known that wine bottle was spiked or something.

Clara is unsatisfied with Alan and is put in several tempting situations

 

[fbass]

I think you people are just playing the wrong game

 

[truthpolice]

Meh. Good old Aphrodisiac could've worked.
Make X do the call to Clara and telling her "Ouch, that kiss probably hurt, but there's wine bottle I left in your room" and make Leon tell her that he's gotten message from X to come to her etc etc.

There were numerous ways to write this without players showing their hand before Flop and out of all the options one of the bad ones was chosen, imo.

Eww aphrodisiac trope is the worst one you could use in a story and is overused and cliched . Is this the genius idea you have lol

 

[truthpolice]

I think you people are just playing the wrong game

Bro they are trolling and have nothing better to do. Let's just enjoy while they keep mooing and their messages will get deleted by the mods sooner or later

 

[MoBy28]

Clara is unsatisfied with Alan and is put in several tempting situations

You keep saying that but have yet to answer the question I posed to you about this same comment in an earlier post.
If she is so unsatisfied why are they still married and why hasn't it happened before? I'm sure as attractive as she is made out to be she has had opportunities before now as well as tempting situations. Does she go home drunk and/or horny to be with her husband only to be left even more unstatisfied and frustrated? Seems if that's the case it would have happened very early on in the marriage instead of now in the middle of a "major" mission.

Most people I have seen arguing this point are mainly not happy with how easy and quickly it happened for her to do it now with the "kiss" being the triggering point. That, on top of what her character is supposed to be, doesn't make sense to some people. Also I saw where the Dev gave extra info about her having issues yet to be revealed. Not even gonna get into the whole "top field agent" thing about that. I posed the question about if she has ever had to do anything in earlier missions like that or worse but I don't think anyone but the Dev knows yet. If so you she has no real right to get upset over "the kiss".

I think the biggest issue will be solved when things get revealed but it may have been a little better to reveal those before hand so people understood "the real reason". Usually in a story you get to know about the main characters a bit before things go sideways so you can kind of understand the motivation. Sometimes revealing too soon can hurt a story and sometimes it can help it. Not sure which in this case but if people are disappointed with the way things go they tend to stop playing. Personally I'm giving it a bit more time before I pass judgement (hopefully until I at least get to play to this point).

 

[fbass]

You keep saying that but have yet to answer the question I posed to you about this same comment in an earlier post.
If she is so unsatisfied why are they still married and why hasn't it happened before? I'm sure as attractive as she is made out to be she has had opportunities before now as well as tempting situations. Does she go home drunk and/or horny to be with her husband only to be left even more unstatisfied and frustrated? Seems if that's the case it would have happened very early on in the marriage instead of now in the middle of a "major" mission.

Most people I have seen arguing this point are mainly not happy with how easy and quickly it happened for her to do it now with the "kiss" being the triggering point. That, on top of what her character is supposed to be, doesn't make sense to some people. Also I saw where the Dev gave extra info about her having issues yet to be revealed. Not even gonna get into the whole "top field agent" thing about that. I posed the question about if she has ever had to do anything in earlier missions like that or worse but I don't think anyone but the Dev knows yet. If so you she has no real right to get upset over "the kiss".

I think the biggest issue will be solved when things get revealed but it may have been a little better to reveal those before hand so people understood "the real reason". Usually in a story you get to know about the main characters a bit before things go sideways so you can kind of understand the motivation. Sometimes revealing too soon can hurt a story and sometimes it can help it. Not sure which in this case but if people are disappointed with the way things go they tend to stop playing. Personally I'm giving it a bit more time before I pass judgement (hopefully until I at least get to play to this point).

So you answered your own question

 

[truthpolice]

You keep saying that but have yet to answer the question I posed to you about this same comment in an earlier post.
If she is so unsatisfied why are they still married and why hasn't it happened before? I'm sure as attractive as she is made out to be she has had opportunities before now as well as tempting situations. Does she go home drunk and/or horny to be with her husband only to be left even more unstatisfied and frustrated? Seems if that's the case it would have happened very early on in the marriage instead of now in the middle of a "major" mission.

Most people I have seen arguing this point are mainly not happy with how easy and quickly it happened for her to do it now with the "kiss" being the triggering point. That, on top of what her character is supposed to be, doesn't make sense to some people. Also I saw where the Dev gave extra info about her having issues yet to be revealed. Not even gonna get into the whole "top field agent" thing about that. I posed the question about if she has ever had to do anything in earlier missions like that or worse but I don't think anyone but the Dev knows yet. If so you she has no real right to get upset over "the kiss".

I think the biggest issue will be solved when things get revealed but it may have been a little better to reveal those before hand so people understood "the real reason". Usually in a story you get to know about the main characters a bit before things go sideways so you can kind of understand the motivation. Sometimes revealing too soon can hurt a story and sometimes it can help it. Not sure which in this case but if people are disappointed with the way things go they tend to stop playing. Personally I'm giving it a bit more time before I pass judgement (hopefully until I at least get to play to this point).

It seems like you haven't clearly played the game properly. It was said more than once that Clara was a assassin and had never been a spy before nor had she done any seduction missions before this. There is a difference between being a top spy and being a top assassin. One involves collecting information using multiple methods which includes seduction as well and the other mainly involves killing.