Sedid

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This is just my personal opinion, but for me the image/text ratio is unbalanced.
8000 words for 170 images seems excessive to me, and 170 renders per update isn't much, unless updates are frequent.
 

Firaxius

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The start was really great, hope you keep us thrilled with the next updates, you sure know how to keep us interrested with stopping at a crucial moment of the story (You, You are... The end of part 1)

Anyway looking forward to the next updates and your writting skills are great, the story is interresting and different then the 100s of same plot, boy alone, dad or mom dead and now he can shag the world.
 

Mwanted

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I simply love the setting and the fact that you can see from other perspectives.. good luck going forward :love:
 
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