VN Ren'Py Onhold Corrupted Hearts [v0.7 Part B] [Sinful Studios]

[ItsNotUs]

she is not cheating just because of the kiss......


mate read the text

Yes, Clara is frustrated, but she herself tells Alan that we can’t be together often because we’re on a mission. Then she sees Alan kissing Anna and - she goes to her room, takes a shower and gets drunk! At the same time, she justifies her mistakes by saying that she supposedly does everything for Alan, for the success of the mission, and his innocent kiss is just personal betrayal! Lol it’s just a kiss, and in this scene there is a choice to stop it, and if everything had been like this, it is written above in the text, that she stayed in place and watched them kiss and could not enter the room - logically, she should have seen that Alan interrupted the kiss and reasoned with Anna! But this is not the case. In addition, she thinks to herself that they could have had not just a kiss, but that Clara herself had fucked Leon, Alan had fucked Anna - what nonsense of a drunken woman! She drank and came up with something that wasn’t there! Kiss + alcohol + Leon
- Leon: mm Clara, yes, everything is fine, don’t worry, just relax, that’s what you want, I’ll just fuck you
and she’s like,
- Ok!
Wow, that's damn plot! The construction of the first NTR scene was done so realistically!
No!
Next time it will be like this:
- Leon: hey Clara high five
- Clara: what?
and next oh ah, stronger, deeper ,faster!
xdd

 

[Alea iacta est]

In my opinion sex scenes are not thoroughly represented. They look very mechanical with no really build up.

I know eroticism is the most difficult thing to represent. But it is a pity because good sex scenes could glorify better this game

 

[elbro]

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Yes, Clara is frustrated, but she herself tells Alan that we can’t be together often because we’re on a mission. Then she sees Alan kissing Anna and - she goes to her room, takes a shower and gets drunk! At the same time, she justifies her mistakes by saying that she supposedly does everything for Alan, for the success of the mission, and his innocent kiss is just personal betrayal! Lol it’s just a kiss, and in this scene there is a choice to stop it, and if everything had been like this, it is written above in the text, that she stayed in place and watched them kiss and could not enter the room - logically, she should have seen that Alan interrupted the kiss and reasoned with Anna! But this is not the case. In addition, she thinks to herself that they could have had not just a kiss, but that Clara herself had fucked Leon, Alan had fucked Anna - what nonsense of a drunken woman! She drank and came up with something that wasn’t there! Kiss + alcohol + Leon
- Leon: mm Clara, yes, everything is fine, don’t worry, just relax, that’s what you want, I’ll just fuck you
and she’s like,
- Ok!
Wow, that's damn plot! The construction of the first NTR scene was done so realistically!
No!
Next time it will be like this:
- Leon: hey Clara high five
- Clara: what?
and next oh ah, stronger, deeper ,faster!
xdd

You're right about all of that but that didn't seem so bad to me, what seemed wrong to me was the fact that one of the strongest secret agent spy acted like a weak woman with a lack of analysis for a kiss, but I'm still not going to act so harsh with the creator of the game because I am entertained anyway with this game.

 

[ItsNotUs]

You're right about all of that but that didn't seem so bad to me, what seemed wrong to me was the fact that one of the strongest secret agent spy acted like a weak woman with a lack of analysis for a kiss, but I'm still not going to act so harsh with the creator of the game because I am entertained anyway with this game.

Those. do you agree that it was possible to refine the reason why she cheated on Allan in the path of love not because of a kiss?

It was just necessary to correctly work out the story.
-FIN-

 

[mindexcursion]

A wonderful update!
It's a relief that the story doesn't take years for something to happen. And altthough Clara has now had sex, the story is far from over. So far we can rely on three things for the dev.
A) He doing HIS thing
B) He surprises again and again
C) He is fast in a pleasant quality

One of the hightlights for me in the last update was the looming war between Anna and Clara. I found it wonderful to read how the blood preasure of the two of them slowly rises.
In addition, there are other topics such as...
Did Leon fall in love with Clara?
What about Leons Sister?
How does Alan behave?
And of course... Can - Want - and should Alan and Clara remain a couple? Or has their relationship always been only maximum good friendship? I'm looking forward to the sequel and also if there is no dispute here in the forum about emperor's beard.

(The english here is as bad as the translation program)

 

[Couto25]

when did she say it? i think i missed it. Can you remind me?

In the beginning, the meeting scene where Clara and Leon were discussing on how to remove Alan traces of hacking. Before you make a choice on whether to sacrifice the dignity or not...Leon asked why she's being over protective for Alan. That's when she told Leon.

 

[Sadowdark]

In the beginning, the meeting scene where Clara and Leon were discussing on how to remove Alan traces of hacking. Before you make a choice on whether to sacrifice the dignity or not...Leon asked why she's being over protective for Alan. That's when she told Leon.
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Can someone explain to me why Klara is so pale, how old she looks with that pale face, as if she suffers from anemia,she looks like a vampire, or maybe she's sick?

 

[Gato negro]

Carlo is the new husband of Alice, he saved her and protected her from Mafia.
He brought Alice, Samantha and James on United States, hoping to be safe there.

Unfortunately for them troubles keep following the family.

In the beginning, the meeting scene where Clara and Leon were discussing on how to remove Alan traces of hacking. Before you make a choice on whether to sacrifice the dignity or not...Leon asked why she's being over protective for Alan. That's when she told Leon.
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thank you so much. i was skipped these scene.

 

[NewTricks]

Maybe within 2 years we'll see her get plowed. Typical slow burn boredom that doesnt need to the typical tease and drag out

This post aged like milk.

 

[Couto25]

thank you so much. i was skipped these scene.

Oooooo nice game link...i will play that game thank you ....plot looks nice

 

[elbro]

Those. do you agree that it was possible to refine the reason why she cheated on Allan in the path of love not because of a kiss?

It was just necessary to correctly work out the story.
-FIN-

I believe that a jealous woman can cheat on her partner out of annoyance, grief or revenge, the creator of the game argued problems with Allan with the masturbation scene, lack of sex, manipulation on the part of Leon and X, that is, he built arguments.
but for me those arguments depend on the personality of the characters, I think it doesn't suit the character of the Agent to be so emotional, to be so weak, it could have been done better but I don't think it's that bad either, not everyone is a good writer or has such details clear in his mind, I hope the details improve in the future but I think the game attracts positive attention.

 

[davildante]

Well i see typical woman, she just polished some guy pole and let some other dudes grope her. But its her husband betrayer cuz he kissed another girl!!!! So she just goes do things with another dude instead of talk with her other half. It's NTR game, one of few that decent, but please remove this lame plot with kiss! It's so stupid, specially after her encounter with black guy.......

 

[UpravDom]

Can someone explain to me why Klara is so pale, how old she looks with that pale face, as if she suffers from anemia,she looks like a vampire, or maybe she's sick?

If the question was asked by a serious guy, then the answer will be serious enough! So far, the color is conditionally healthy. The skin color is explained by a combination of negative factors that constantly suppress Clara's psychoemotional state! Here are only known factors: risk, stress, neuroses and a state of dissatisfaction with sex similar to blue balls in guys! Probably enough to explain. But what a wonderful blush was on Clara's face after unprotected sex with Leon! A pussy full of an outsider's sperm! The euphoria was short-lived. As you know, Clara asked Leon to consider what happened a mistake and forget it! But in the future, when Alan and Clara's dreams come true, the unthinkable will happen! A child similar to Leon will be born in the family, because Clara is marked with Leon's genes! Inquisitive Alan will demand an explanation from Clara! That's when the complexion of the face will turn into a pale green! The reason is clear...

 

[La Dani]

Well i see typical woman, she just polished some guy pole and let some other dudes grope her. But its her husband betrayer cuz he kissed another girl!!!! So she just goes do things with another dude instead of talk with her other half. It's NTR game, one of few that decent, but please remove this lame plot with kiss! It's so stupid, specially after her encounter with black guy.......

My exact thought, Bro.

 

[mindexcursion]

Here the German Translation https://f95zone.to/threads/corrupted-hearts-v0-5-part-a-sinful-studios-german-translation.200879/
Habt Spaß!

 

[Couto25]

Wait I thought X is only sending message to Clara and Leon...Howcome X is sending message to Anna too?? Does X has got all Alan, Leon, Clara and Anna asses? I am plating this recent update 2nd time and I still feel like I am missing something everytime.

 

[truthpolice]

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Wait I thought X is only sending message to Clara and Leon...Howcome X is sending message to Anna too?? Does X has got all Alan, Leon, Clara and Anna asses? I am plating this recent update 2nd time and I still feel like I am missing something everytime.

Did you miss the scene where X contacted Anna? She decided there and then to take X's help.

 

[michael1984]

Is there a way to break up with that blonde wife of the mc

 

[Couto25]

Did you miss the scene where X contacted Anna? She decided there and then to take X's help.

Probably...there are lots of texts in single renders..maybe that's why he's able to finish updates so fast....I have to read texts whenever I get time..why there's no option from Ana's POV to accept or reject X offer?

 

[truthpolice]

Probably...there are lots of texts in single renders..maybe that's why he's able to finish updates so fast....I have to read texts whenever I get time..why there's no option from Ana's POV to accept or reject X offer?

Because you aren't playing as Anna? You can only make choices as Alan.