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AlphaDlaW

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So simple, constructive criticism to help improve your game / writing is simply rejected by you wholesale? What happened to you, man? You used to be cool. :(



I will give you a clue. Two, even, if you want to be a bit...you know. Read our username and take note of the use of capitalisation for the second "L." ;)

(And if you don't want to bother with that, well, it's because Mal and Liz are two separate people using the same account. We sign our posts to make it clear who is expressing what sentiments where.)



I doubt many (if any) actual literature professors at Oxford University would ever really promote the use of a two dot ellipsis. It may not be technically "wrong" per se, but it's uncommon for a reason. I mean, when was the last time you saw it being used in an actual book, or even a news article? Because I honestly cannot recall a single instance out of all the ones I have read thus far.

...And "space saving" is a pretty poor reason these days, I have to say. A hundred years ago when everything text-based was printed with valuable ink on paper, it may have made sense. But in today's digital age of communication, that simply seems redundant. :unsure:

-Mal
all that just to make the argument that although the two dot ellipsis can be used, most don't. you do know that doesn't make you any less wrong lol. you went from saying it's not an acceptable way to write to saying most people don't write that way. you're hilarious lmao.
 
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yoyomistro

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So maybe more like, "M. Night, but done right."?

Edited for spelling (My autocorrect had an aneurism)
That's acceptable. I refuse to say his name correctly since he did us the disservice of bringing the name "Ong" into the world for a character that was not his own. I can't look at the man the same after that cinematic butchery.
 

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On day 9, in the background of scene d9_388 between Emily and Jasmin, there's a picture frame with some great photos of the girls in other scenes that aren't in V0.10a. Is this just an illustration, or will these scenes be in the next version?
 

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On day 9, in the background of scene d9_388 between Emily and Jasmin, there's a picture frame with some great photos of the girls in other scenes that aren't in V0.10a. Is this just an illustration, or will these scenes be in the next version?
They are old Gallery renders.
 

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Thanks RICOH, is it still possible to find and download them? In what version?
I think it was removed in 0.6, so 0.5 it should be there.
No idea where you'd find that version though.
 

jamass

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If anyone knows where I can download versions 0.5 and 0.6 please let me know as I don't have those versions. Thanks
 

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Thanks yoyomistro, version 0.5 is small but great. Where can I get more versions before v0.10a? If you can help, I appreciate it so I can complete all the versions.
 

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I found some scenes of Emily (bath) and Lauren (library) in versions 5 and 7. But I couldn't find the scene of Emily and Holly, which version should it be in?
 

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I found some scenes of Emily (bath) and Lauren (library) in versions 5 and 7. But I couldn't find the scene of Emily and Holly, which version should it be in?
Those are the only two that are actual scenes from the pics on Emily's wall, all others are single renders from the old Gallery Version of the game.

Emily+Holly(+Jasmin) will be in the next update: v0.11 (if people shared Holly with the girls)

Hello Ricoh, has the Corrupted Doctor v0.1 game been released yet?
To my subs, it only has the trap in it atm, so many people are not interested just yet.
They're waiting for 0.2 where they'll be able to "play" with a girl.
 
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