After playing the game I'm going to offer my take which I'm sure will piss certain people off. Most of the writing was sophmoric, juvinile, with that said there were parts that actually made me laugh. The art...I'm easy to please so I'm not going to mention the expressionless faces but I am going to mention that just by saying a young lady is 18 and then drawing her to look like she is 10, well I would say the developer has a problem. I played the route where I avoided any sort of sex with the little ones, it's just plain creepy. Kate on the other hand is a stone cold knockout for 40. Here is some business advice for developers...ask yourself what is your demographic market, numbers....I would say the majority is heterosexual, so if you want to make money cater to them..market to them, ask the majority what they find erotic and do that. Go where the money is...with the majority.