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4.00 star(s) 66 Votes
Dec 9, 2019
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Informal Review of 0.2

Fantastic Renders, with a flat storyline and characters.

Let's take about the art, because that is absolutely one of the game's strong suits. The look of the characters is great, and the way that they interact with each other is top-notch. The background and locations are the same as a dozen other games, so don't expect any interesting locations here.

Where the game falls flat is in the characters themselves. The MC come across as flat, with a kind of "everything good is happening to me." attitude. The sisters are better, with actual emotional responses and fears, and hopes, and a range of emotions. The mother is somewhere in the middle, the developer tries to put her in the range of "So grateful for help that she's willing to trust strangers" but it comes across as more 'trusting and naive' then 'desperate'.

Suggestions:
  1. Add some emotional depth to the MC. Make him lonely living in that big fancy, empty house. Make him malevolent and wanting to exploit someone's moment of need. Make him aware of how lucky he got in life, and wanting to give back.
  2. Keep up the art direction! Particularly the outfits.
 

YogSothoth1982

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Jun 26, 2018
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Suggestions:
  1. Add some emotional depth to the MC. Make him lonely living in that big fancy, empty house. Make him malevolent and wanting to exploit someone's moment of need. Make him aware of how lucky he got in life, and wanting to give back.
I don't like the part about making him malevolent. But, I'm attracted to the other two suggestions.
 

Gosamr

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May 6, 2021
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So MC has all the money he needs, but do not own a dishwasher? What country is he from?

Also: The bus comes here every two hours. For a rural region in the 50s there are too many graffities on the wall.
Do you mean a mechanical dishwasher?
 

BigDaddyDom

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Mar 4, 2020
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Liking the corruption/creep approach with the older daughter! Hopefully that keeps up without her being too easy - it's all about having to win her over or the sleep creep stuff
 

PhazeUFO

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Sep 28, 2021
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That's right! I've seen many, many, many 18+ girls crying 'cause their mom's didn't buy them a birthday cake! (It could happen!?) :sneaky:
To be fair, I have seen some immature women. Not to that degree, but I have never seen a teen act like that. Must be hormones in the water.:coffee:
 
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qwoppe

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May 21, 2018
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I wish I had the MC's OP cheat skill that lets him act as much of a fucking creep as he wants because people magically find it charming instead.
 
4.00 star(s) 66 Votes