[v0.7.1c]
I am sorry but entire storytelling of this game is one humongous mess. Like.. I know all those games are fictional, and some can be more believable than others, but this one? Not for a single second I could believe something like this could ever happen. No chance in hell. For the entire play my reaction was fluctuating between 2 states, something like this:
1. " OMG, it's so silly, I can't take it seriously *chuckle* "
2. " What the actual fuck, no human being would ever choose to act this way "
Now, it doesn't help that dev obviously isn't native speaker, but that's not the whole issue. I'm not one either, but I still can write a few coherent sentences. The dialogues in game serve importan reason, to build whole narrative in pair with renders. And what can be build if characters tend to only have exchanges of few words, and with very poorly conveyed meaning?
At some point near the end dialogues got better (I assume it was the latest update), so dev either finally learnt something or hired competent person to translate. So it got better, but let me accentuate, it's still not 'good'. And while I definitelly commend this upgrade, only working on dialogues content, wont't change the fact that whole story is riddiculous. At least for me, with plot that unbelievable, it was constantly throwing me off the role. Also the pacing feels faster than F1 race. Now I'm gonna give just a couple examples, like it's completelly fine to spent thousands of dollars on daughter of stranger, who you also met for the first time yesterday. Or I guess it's fine to meet some orphan friend of (another) daughter and adopt her after 5 minutes. Very cool for the orphanage to agree and also let her immediatelly live with MC even tho process was not finished.
From the graphics side, renders are okay. Well, I've seen many games with much better ones, sadly, even if those were greates visuals of all the time, it still won't save the story. And I'm only giving it 3 stars instead of 2, because of earlier mentioned improvement near the end, so we can hope the quality will continue to change for the better.
I am sorry but entire storytelling of this game is one humongous mess. Like.. I know all those games are fictional, and some can be more believable than others, but this one? Not for a single second I could believe something like this could ever happen. No chance in hell. For the entire play my reaction was fluctuating between 2 states, something like this:
1. " OMG, it's so silly, I can't take it seriously *chuckle* "
2. " What the actual fuck, no human being would ever choose to act this way "
Now, it doesn't help that dev obviously isn't native speaker, but that's not the whole issue. I'm not one either, but I still can write a few coherent sentences. The dialogues in game serve importan reason, to build whole narrative in pair with renders. And what can be build if characters tend to only have exchanges of few words, and with very poorly conveyed meaning?
At some point near the end dialogues got better (I assume it was the latest update), so dev either finally learnt something or hired competent person to translate. So it got better, but let me accentuate, it's still not 'good'. And while I definitelly commend this upgrade, only working on dialogues content, wont't change the fact that whole story is riddiculous. At least for me, with plot that unbelievable, it was constantly throwing me off the role. Also the pacing feels faster than F1 race. Now I'm gonna give just a couple examples, like it's completelly fine to spent thousands of dollars on daughter of stranger, who you also met for the first time yesterday. Or I guess it's fine to meet some orphan friend of (another) daughter and adopt her after 5 minutes. Very cool for the orphanage to agree and also let her immediatelly live with MC even tho process was not finished.
From the graphics side, renders are okay. Well, I've seen many games with much better ones, sadly, even if those were greates visuals of all the time, it still won't save the story. And I'm only giving it 3 stars instead of 2, because of earlier mentioned improvement near the end, so we can hope the quality will continue to change for the better.