VN - Ren'Py - Corrupted Love [v0.9a] [RIC0H]

The characters are stiff and have weird poses like mannequins. There is no need for a super pc, quality could be a lot better with less artefacts. Lauren looks like an old hag and i don't like Emily's hairstyle. The story is too straight and fails to be interesting.

I think the best thing about this game is Max's House. Like holy shit. That house looks fantastic. It does look like it has wayyy too many windows but it is fine since they are capable of going into privacy mode. Plus the general design/look of the house is very good. I would pay/play a game that was just a basic simulator if the MC's house looked like this. Doesn't even need to be a simulator, just a game that allows us to explore/walk through houses like this would be enjoyable. But games with this house aesthetic/design would be great to live in.

A really nice treat for the introduction or as an intro.
I like MC, not the typical idiot so far.
I find the cast very appealing and attractive, especially the daughters.
But the mother also exerts a certain attraction.
The youngest daughter seems very inexperienced and innocent;
I like her already and hope she stays that way and is very curious.
The older daughter hides her soft core behind a very hard shell,
that I would love to crack!
The mother screams so much for attention and love (and sex),
how could I not want to fulfil her?

Just the pacing of the story is just too fast-paced, virtually no relationship building (of any kind).
From stranger to superdaddy and future husband in half a day???
Much too fast even for me...

1st day is a pretty good "intro".
-MC doesnt feel like a flat character. I like him.
-Younger sis is clueless on sexual acts as i hoped she would be. Hope she keeps the "innocent" act while also being able to deepthroat.
-Older sis gives off a "must protecc" vibe but with a hint of wanting to use her bod as a cock sleeve. hope shes a virgin.
-the mother seems like the basic single mother wanting attention again but im fine with that since i want the sisters to be the focus anyway.

I like what this game is going for and what is already there.
The models are good and the characters are believable.

My main complaint would be towards the pacing which seems a bit to fast: you go from stranger to future husband in one trip to the grocery store. Then again I don't really mind a little bit of porn logic seeping through the plot to accelerate things a bit.

Also for now (v0.1) it seems more like youngest daughter trying to get mom a new husband than eldest daughter trying to get you to fuck her family, I'm looking forward to that.

Other than that this is a great start and I'm eager to see what's next.
Good luck to you dev and don't invest in crypto, it's a scam.

While it defineftaly could use some polish (facial expressions, slightly better grammer/writing, and slightly higher res renders) I think this is a diamond in the rough and truly has potential good job Dev and I'm hoping to see more in the future from you!