Alright, I caught up with the content. Earlier I was thinking that the complaints about rushed stuff and the subsequent rework of the Emily and Lauren first times was a bit overblown, but I just loved the new scene for Emily. Perfect!
Also a great fan of the new Holly-development. I like the MC balancing genuinely caring about people AND wanting to fuck them all. And Emily's part is great, too, and she is clearly taking after her Dad in various ways.
Megan is, of course, the odd one out. I tried both paths, and was dissatisfied with them (too little Megan on one, too much rape on the other). Her scene in the morning was fitting in well with the overall vibe: She's hesitant, but into it; and Max just gives her the lies she needs to justify indulging in the activities. But to get it, there is the late night scene.
I think rather than adding a whole new alternative Megan-path, a few rewrites could do: