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Sinaxxr

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i agree with the others in that lewd games should have lewd content. i will throw you a bone in that story wise the mc should not have knowledge of it this early in the game.
to many games are tidious and boring trying to be slow burn.

i do agree with you that the red neck scene was very weird.
No love for Joe Deep around here. T....T

I think the redneck scene was useful because it showed us more about the characters.

Sister Mary stood up for herself and even decked him when he tried to manhandle her. So she's not just a meek little mouse that won't defend herself. If she does anything lewd or whatever, it's because she decided to do it, she wasn't forced.
 

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So there's a serial killer running around murdering dudes every update?
No no, Sinaxxr actually sacrifices people for divine inspiration.

No love for Joe Deep around here. T....T

I think the redneck scene was useful because it showed us more about the characters.

Sister Mary stood up for herself and even decked him when he tried to manhandle her. So she's not just a meek little mouse that won't defend herself. If she does anything lewd or whatever, it's because she decided to do it, she wasn't forced.
Yeah the redneck was fine for me. I was more rebutting the idea that a slow burn game should have no porn at all in it for several hours of gameplay, which is contrary to good design philosophy.

Generally speaking, whether porn or not, you want the game to begin with what it's going to be focusing on. If you're making a Doom/Wolfenstein-esque B-movie shooter it should start with plenty of shooting and cheesy badass dialogue. If you're making a comedic puzzle game it should start with some simple puzzles and funny one-liners. If you're making a deep, ponderous introspective story-heavy Visual Novel it should begin by raising a lot of deep questions and giving the player some choices to pick.

And if it's gonna be about fuckin', it should start with screwin'.

For bonus points combine all of them and begin the game with a cheesy badass contemplative monologue from the MC while he solves puzzles and delivers funny one-liners to the girl sucking him off under the table. :V
 
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No love for Joe Deep around here. T....T

I think the redneck scene was useful because it showed us more about the characters.

Sister Mary stood up for herself and even decked him when he tried to manhandle her. So she's not just a meek little mouse that won't defend herself. If she does anything lewd or whatever, it's because she decided to do it, she wasn't forced.
that is smart i didn't think of it that way.

i guess the issues with the scene are a couple:
- the scene was completely out of left field. You don't expect it as a player and so it feels forced
- Joe is really ugly and A LOT of ppl hate the ugly bastard tag i think a lot of ppl would have found it more acceptable if the guy looked normal \ handsome
- Mary gets a blush (i think) which is counter intuitive given that she is suppose to be a pure character but now she is getting off to a random ugly guy groping her. its very narative breaking

anyway these are just my thoughts I'm sure others have their own reasoning. again no hate I'm just happy to see you updating the game
 
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Sinaxxr

Corrupting A Nun (Dev/Artist)
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that is smart i didn't think of it that way.

i guess the issues with the scene are a couple:
- the scene was completely out of left field. You don't expect it as a player and so it feels forced
- Joe is really ugly and A LOT of ppl hate the ugly bastard tag i think a lot of ppl would have found it more acceptable if the guy looked normal \ handsome
- Mary gets a blush (i think) which is counter intuitive given that she is suppose to be a pure character but now she is getting off to a random ugly guy groping her. its very narative breaking

anyway these are just my thoughts I'm sure others have their own reasoning. again no hate I'm just happy to see you updating the game
Thanks for taking the time.

- Hard to say about the coming out of left field part. Maybe. If the scene ends up causing things to not flow well then I can always rearrange things in the future if needed.
- I wanted Joe to be ugly. lol. He's an ugly abrasive hobo. It'd make it more funny if the MC makes Sister Mary be 'nice' to him later on.
- I went back and looked. She is only blushing AFTER she punched him. So the blushing isn't really related to his words but more the fact she just punched someone and is shocked and flustered. She was definitely not getting off at all.
 
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Thanks for taking the time.

- Hard to say about the coming out of left field part. Maybe. If the scene ends up causing things to not flow well then I can always rearrange things in the future if needed.
- I wanted Joe to be ugly. lol. He's an ugly abrasive hobo. It'd make it more funny if the MC makes Sister Mary be 'nice' to him later on.
- I went back and looked. She is only blushing AFTER she punched him. So the blushing isn't really related to his words but more the fact she just punched someone and is shocked and flustered. She was definitely not getting off at all.
oof did not realize. memory is hell of a thing.
 
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Thanks for taking the time.

- Hard to say about the coming out of left field part. Maybe. If the scene ends up causing things to not flow well then I can always rearrange things in the future if needed.
- I wanted Joe to be ugly. lol. He's an ugly abrasive hobo. It'd make it more funny if the MC makes Sister Mary be 'nice' to him later on.
- I went back and looked. She is only blushing AFTER she punched him. So the blushing isn't really related to his words but more the fact she just punched someone and is shocked and flustered. She was definitely not getting off at all.
Joe has potential imo. Beautiful women getting with ugly male characters can be pretty hot. Granted, we do not know your plans for the character, only time will tell.
 
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