- Sep 6, 2019
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Eh, I don't really see any complexity in his characters behind some pretty surface level things. I admit they have/had potential to be complex but they just fall flat every time. Like I said in an earlier post, he could lean more into Kiyoko being fucked up over spending so much time in the pocket dimension but she seems like a regular person after that ordeal. Nakano could actually be a decent melancholic character if he wasn't such an uptight dickhead and opened up to the PC. Kinu could have mixed feelings about you not being in her life as much as she wanted but still loves you and cares about your opinions(even though she shouldn't be aged up so this shouldn't be a thing in the first place). I can't say anything on Rindo since I gave up on his content before doing much with her.He's not Wsan or William so I typically don't read his content for the sex as he is white toast bland but I do like his character building with Kiyoko Herthia etc. I heavily disagree with his choices for Kinu and some of the Rindo content but I genuinely like the premise of ALL of those characters. Great characters with complexity but seriously iffy execution.....he simply needs someone to reign him in. The sad part is the toxicity that seems to be the base behavior of the dev team so.......it is what it is.
All the others seem pretty one-note to me and I really don't like Hethia. She's just a stereotypical uptight tree-hugging fantasy elf as far as I can tell.
The general premise of his characters have a lot of potential, but he just pisses it away every time. It seems like he has decent ideas, but he really just can't write with a degree of competency for the life of him.