Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.31] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[redcynic]

To redeem myself from the off topic ramblings about character writings, bush cock won't count for Ryn's monstrosity parsing because it specifically checks for a single cock of >=x size.

And, in my humble opinion as a rando on a porn site critiquing characters in a porn game, I'd say it's better to compare Cait and the reactions around her to another Savin character, namely Helia. Mainly because a lof of the topic(s) that rise up about Cait are the same that folks bitched about Helia.

 

[Archaon11111]

Sadly, not everyone is open to sex in this game. I remember being really uncomfortable with Lieutenant Jen. She doesn't want to have sex so you have to pretty much rape her.

When asked about why she has a chastity belt, she reacts like you're a dumbass because she obviously doesn't want to lose her job as a soldier by getting pregnant. She recounts how her squad got captured by orcs, brought to their village and raped for days. Because of her chastity belt, she didn't get impregnated. Unlike her squad mates who most likely all did.

And you know what my stupid character does when I do something as harmless as a little bit of titplay with her? Complain and whine multiple time about not being able to impregnate her... Why the fuck does my 0 corruption character want this woman's life ruined just so that I can have bigger boobs to play with?! Why would you write this Bubblelord?! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!

Well you're already raping her yourself why wouldn't talk dirty? Don't have to be corrupt to be an asshole

 

[Archaon11111]

To redeem myself from the off topic ramblings about character writings, bush cock won't count for Ryn's monstrosity parsing because it specifically checks for a single cock of >=x size.

And, in my humble opinion as a rando on a porn site critiquing characters in a porn game, I'd say it's better to compare Cait and the reactions around her to another Savin character, namely Helia. Mainly because a lof of the topic(s) that rise up about Cait are the same that folks bitched about Helia.

back to growing a horse cock I go

And those were dark days, many forum warnings were handed out

 

[Decent-Win]

Sadly, not everyone is open to sex in this game. I remember being really uncomfortable with Lieutenant Jen. She doesn't want to have sex so you have to pretty much rape her.

When asked about why she has a chastity belt, she reacts like you're a dumbass because she obviously doesn't want to lose her job as a soldier by getting pregnant. She recounts how her squad got captured by orcs, brought to their village and raped for days. Because of her chastity belt, she didn't get impregnated. Unlike her squad mates who most likely all did.

And you know what my stupid character does when I do something as harmless as a little bit of titplay with her? Complain and whine multiple time about not being able to impregnate her... Why the fuck does my 0 corruption character want this woman's life ruined just so that I can have bigger boobs to play with?! Why would you write this Bubblelord?! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!

That's bubblelord's writing for ya easily the worst writer in the game.

 

[Biostar]

Personally, I see any and all followers as "mine", but not in the sense of "only I get to have sex with them" but in that I have the most control over their autonomy. I decide whether they stay at base or go with me to fuck around. If I want to fuck them I could do it anywhere at anytime no matter what they're doing. No matter who they fuck on the side it's my bed they always come back to and I'm always the best they ever had. I can fuck whoever they fuck and I'm the one who gets them pregnant when I feel like it. If I want to modify their body to my tastes they will always go along with it to please me. In a world where half my children are from random fucks in the wilderness, I don't care much about exclusivity just as long as it's established that I'm the one they stick with in the end.

That's bubblelord's writing for ya easily the worst writer in the game.

I thought that was TheObserver?

You can in the future get her this thicc like expanding her tits, some art for future content was already done and is located in the game files.

They need to fast track this. I need my kitty with some love handles.

 

[Megumin.]

Well you're already raping her yourself why wouldn't talk dirty? Don't have to be corrupt to be an asshole

Here's the thing. You're supposed to be the good guys, apparently. The people you rape were already planning on raping you anyways. Some action that can be considered *dick move* are usually locked behind a certain level of corruption or instead make you gain corruption.

But here, I'm just able to rape this innocent woman that never intended to rape me in the first place with 0 corruption and no corruption gain. And to make it worst, my character is frustrated that she can't get pregnant with that chastity belt in the way. You know... the thing she fears the most. GETTING PREGNANT!
That's more than just being an asshole. That's kinda evil.

 

[Megumin.]

I thought that was TheObserver?

Everyone has their preferences. But personally I'll take TheObserver's endless paragraphs of expositions over whatever that was.

 

[actualrealname]

I thought that was TheObserver?

TheObserver has this weird thing going on where their ideas are fine, but they just completely run with it and ruin it. Would probably be one of the better writers if they had an editor willing to be harsh and outright say "no-one wants to read 20000 words on your homebrew setting shoved into another game", and to remind them that the PC is the main character. It's mostly just the kitsunes that are particularly bad with that though, even if they have a habit of being way too wordy overall. Not an amazing writer by actual writer standards still, but it's mostly just needing a better editor and less of an ego there.

The stuff with the soldier lady is just poorly thought out to begin with, and isn't written terribly well either. I don't think there's a way to fix that stuff without just completely redoing it, which isn't really true for other content. Even Cait, with all the drama these last few pages, just needs some lines changed and an extra couple scenes.

 

[Decent-Win]

They need to fast track this. I need my kitty with some love handles.

That will only be possible after the minotaur city is released, and apparently she becomes like that after constantly getting Gangbangd by a bunch of minotaurs.

 

[Biostar]

apparently she becomes like that after constantly getting Gangbangd by a bunch of minotaurs.

...just as long as that isn't a necessity after the fact. I swear these guys are masochists...

 

[randomv]

They should give you an option at the beginning of the game, save Cait or save her sister. If you save Cait then shes slutty and DTF but if you save her sister shes more exclusive and waifuish. Different strokes for different folks.

 

[James3]

They just can't handle so much thickness
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About that, is there any way to Save-Edit the original pic by Chessire back after you give her the Sherry, the only pic of her I actually like?

 

[Duarchy]

You cuddle fuck her or beat fuck her into starting the quest do either of those 3-4 times, and dont worry my question about the bush cock was drowned as well. I haven't seen this much hate for a character since a certain fox.

Yeah that's the issue. If what you mean is you go the attack > win > fuck rout I've done that a great number of times without triggering anything.

 

[Duarchy]

It's mostly just the kitsunes that are particularly bad with that though

I got bored trying to get the corrupt path for the hive to trigger and went and did the dream salamander thing. I could feel my will to live draining with each wall of text, I looked over and sure enough it was The Observer. I ended up looking for the correct path to ignore all the holier than thou bullshit.

"Uh ohhh, looks like you've asked the wrong question. You really need to think harder, don't you know you can't just make baseless claims? You should pay more attention to my totally awesome and interesting writing, try again."

 

[actualrealname]

I got bored trying to get the corrupt path for the hive to trigger and went and did the dream salamander thing. I could feel my will to live draining with each wall of text, I looked over and sure enough it was The Observer. I ended up looking for the correct path to ignore all the holier than thou bullshit.

I honestly completely forgot about that lol, nothing quite like a random ace attorney section that encourages you to analyze text or take notes in a porn game. Finding contradictions and logical flaws in some ladies essay really gets the blood flowing.

 

[BlacJak]

...just as long as that isn't a necessity after the fact. I swear these guys are masochists...

Nah, they just do it on purpose to piss off a demographic of their "fanbase." That's why Cait has the most interactions with other NPCs, that's why she has most of the cuckoldry/NTR-ish scenes. They do it to piss off people they don't like, and they double down on it when they read the comments of people saying how much they hate it, even if it's to the detriment of the character or overall content.

 

[BlacJak]

And to add more fuel to the Cait Hate, I don't hate Cait because of her super-sluttery. I hate Cait because she's basically targeted ads by Google, where you mention something out loud one day, and for the next few weeks or months, you just see the shit everywhere you go. At some point you just get tired of it all...

 

[Hopeless DIO]

Speaking of Cait, do we know how/when we’ll be “upgrading” her curves? Saw the different CG’s and it got my interest.

 

[Archaon11111]

Yeah that's the issue. If what you mean is you go the attack > win > fuck rout I've done that a great number of times without triggering anything.

Might be bugged, try the cuddlefuck route maybe that'll work it makes no difference to the quest outcome so dont worry about it.

 

[Duarchy]

Might be bugged, try the cuddlefuck route maybe that'll work it makes no difference to the quest outcome so dont worry about it.

I've already done it on other characters, was just curious what content was added/changed by going corrupt.