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I can agree with that yeah, he's pretty much the only one who consistently wants to make big projects. He's definitely the most efficient writer they have, with an editor to cut like 50% of what he writes and to keep him away from ever writing sex scenes I reckon he'd be way more liked for sure.Like I said though, I think Tobs is the best *conceptually*, and thoughts and concepts don't necessarily translate well to paper if you don't have the writing ability to adequately convey what it is you're trying to do. As for Convocation, I mostly hate how up it's own ass it is and the fact that it drags on for seemingly forever, forcing you to at least skim it lest you get btfo'd and forced back to the beginning of the encounter again.
Also, real talk, but babybag is one of the least attractive descriptors of a womb in an erofic I've ever heard. Fucking end me.
Just needs to break out of that "semi-popular fanfic writer" mentality somehow.
Convocation is just incredibly out of place, "tobs does fantasy ace attorney" isn't something anyone was asking for as far as I'm aware. and yeah I'm honestly impressed they came up with something that unsexy lmao.
Lol I think this might just be the best way to put it. I'm a fan of the idea of her character, but man she needed a way closer look over before they made her a companion. If they needed to at all, I feel like she'd be better as like a fort/town guard commander or something.IMO when a design is more complex than the character's personality, it might be time to develop the latter more.