Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.32] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

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NotEvenOw said:
Like I said though, I think Tobs is the best *conceptually*, and thoughts and concepts don't necessarily translate well to paper if you don't have the writing ability to adequately convey what it is you're trying to do. As for Convocation, I mostly hate how up it's own ass it is and the fact that it drags on for seemingly forever, forcing you to at least skim it lest you get btfo'd and forced back to the beginning of the encounter again.

Also, real talk, but babybag is one of the least attractive descriptors of a womb in an erofic I've ever heard. Fucking end me.
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I can agree with that yeah, he's pretty much the only one who consistently wants to make big projects. He's definitely the most efficient writer they have, with an editor to cut like 50% of what he writes and to keep him away from ever writing sex scenes I reckon he'd be way more liked for sure.
Just needs to break out of that "semi-popular fanfic writer" mentality somehow.

Convocation is just incredibly out of place, "tobs does fantasy ace attorney" isn't something anyone was asking for as far as I'm aware. and yeah I'm honestly impressed they came up with something that unsexy lmao.

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IMO when a design is more complex than the character's personality, it might be time to develop the latter more.
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Lol I think this might just be the best way to put it. I'm a fan of the idea of her character, but man she needed a way closer look over before they made her a companion. If they needed to at all, I feel like she'd be better as like a fort/town guard commander or something.
 
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actualrealname said:
I can agree with that yeah, he's pretty much the only one who consistently wants to make big projects. He's definitely the most efficient writer they have, with an editor to cut like 50% of what he writes and to keep him away from ever writing sex scenes I reckon he'd be way more liked for sure.
Just needs to break out of that "semi-popular fanfic writer" mentality somehow.

Convocation is just incredibly out of place, "tobs does fantasy ace attorney" isn't something anyone was asking for as far as I'm aware. and yeah I'm honestly impressed they came up with something that unsexy lmao.


Lol I think this might just be the best way to put it. I'm a fan of the idea of her character, but man she needed a way closer look over before they made her a companion. If they needed to at all, I feel like she'd be better as like a fort/town guard commander or something.
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I do not know wo/man. From what I gathered from places like 4chan and there forums (not best sources of information I know) is that he is well liked or that most people are indifferent to him. And from what I also gather, the Mirror quest was also well received. I personally liked it, since as I said couple pages ago, I like that our characters got to show off there cunning. But at same time, It does enforce that we do not get to really role play in this game. Since even if cunning is your lowest stat, you can still pass it no problemo.

Now this is not to negate your points or anything, but I feel like as long as he keeps producing the amount content that he does now, people outside of this forum will be pleased. It helps that he wrote Kiyoko, one of most popular characters there. Because people usually only get annoyed at writers when they are obviously bad. Now, I am not some kind of critic of books and am not really aware of nuances of book writing. But I do enjoy his characters and sexual scenes the most. Mostly because he Is one of few authors that really gets into foreplay and I do enjoy his characters the most. And I do not mind long stuff that do not lead to sex In this type of games most of the time. I am one of few people that read all of world descriptions and items pick ups.

As for Azzy, I feel like she was supposed to be gentle lady knight. But I just do not feel that from her interaction and attire. As you said, her design is too busy.
 
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MonteNetro said:
From what I gathered from places like 4chan and there forums (not best sources of information I know) is that he is well liked or that most people are indifferent to him.
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this thread is pretty much the only place outside the official forums I ever see it discussed much, and keeping in mind official forums upvoted that "it's impossible to talk to someone outside 30IQ of you" line I'm not sure how much I trust their opinions on quality lol. most likely majority of players just coom and move on without thinking much either way tbh

I wonder if trying to make Azzy that character type was a mistake by itself? Like it's kind of a weird in between of archetypes we already have, between Atugia, kiyoko and etheryn, there's not a lot of room for it to really stand out, so she just comes across as bland.
I don't know if there's really enough space for that character to be companion material, considering they wanted companions to be more limited than camp/ship people were in previous titles.
 
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Weird, I remember people saying that she would only have Dom content. Well good for people that like her design but not wanting to be sub. I am personally not into her either way, so pass from me probably.
Still, I hope dom route is not only restricted if you have a dick. Come on Wsan, give me a femdom role for my PC to perform.
 
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Megumin. said:
It's more of a immersion problem on my side. I mostly gravitate toward cute/shy characters. These games are DEFINITLY not made for that. I don't have OC's (original characters) and I don't have the creativity enough for that. It may be wierd but I search for characters from media I know and put them in these games. I feel like their decision to make the game primary artstyle *anime* was a mistake for me personally (talking about DCLzexon). Because I'm so used to anime women in media to all be scared of anything remotely lewd.
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I can recommend you to try Renryuu Ascension. There the shy character (Mira) really needs to get used for the nature of the protagonist (Ryen).
 
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Archaon11111 said:
Dev said that would not be possible for Etheryn and the majority of dickgirls here like the guard captain you capture. Think its just consitency issues and not having to write two different scenes for dick/dickless. My theory though is Savin just wants to write more anal only scenes.
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It could be also that most writers just do not want to and it would kind of devalue the characters that you're able to if you could do it to everyone.
And from writing perspective, having more options for sex scenes is always appreciated.
 
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Archaon11111 said:
Also ff you're corrupt in CoC1 half the characters won't bother dealing with you and treat you way differently. In CoC2 I can hug the big bad demon and declare my affection to her in front of my companions and the only response is a few funny dialogue.
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"What the shit, (Player Name). She's a demon!"

"She got a big dick, though."

"Shit, u rite."
 
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stuffinabox said:
I was just going to play this without commenting, however I can't concieve that people are being paid to write lines such as this.

"Must've been something of my husband's that skipped a generation or two, because even he wasn't that much of a simp when we were younger. Ha ha! Ha!"

I get it. You're snorting patreon money likes its coke off a hookers ass claps, but at the same time this is about the lamest and laziest writing I've seen so far. This is suppose to be their mother, not some random you plucked off tiktok. Damn. And here I had higher writing expectations lmao. Thanks Observer for introducing memes into your writing.
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This reminds me of an argument on the Fenoxo forums where people were saying gunboat diplomacy shouldn't be used (a term Tobs used in Kitsune lore/content) because gunboats literally do not exist in the historical time period represented in CoC2 (lore shit about the type of metals/technological level).

The counterargument was about the game being "translated". I thought the argument sucked and was an excuse for lazy writing. I wouldn't be surprised if the same argument is used for the inclusion of simp.

I'm disappointed.
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Yeah, so for me it would be to start a new game play. Two reasons now:
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2. Spare the Behemoth! xD
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Pretty sure you can get both?
Mr Technician said:
I bet that Fen will upgrade this if they will create more content including more of unique items to be found by the player.
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Unless something changed in the last month (I haven't been paying attention to updates), Fen doesn't work on CoC2, Savin does.
MonteNetro said:
Weird, I remember people saying that she would only have Dom content. Well good for people that like her design but not wanting to be sub. I am personally not into her either way, so pass from me probably.
Still, I hope dom route is not only restricted if you have a dick. Come on Wsan, give me a femdom role for my PC to perform.
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Wsan has said he likes domming the dom (it may have been specific to males), so it isn't that surprising.
 
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