Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.47] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[fetishgirl]

WHAT IN THE ABSOLUTE FUCK possessed the writer to add a forced marriage and <I love you> after the first fuck?

Don't know if Wsan has gotten burned out due to porn brain rot or it was the request of the patreon that wanted their OC added to the game. While Tay isn't their worst work but not great. It could be possible they just wanted to get her out the way so Alante who we have waited for who knows how many months at this point lost count to get more focus otherwise benching Alante for Tay was wild.

Honestly don't know why they couldn't get another writer to do Tay since I don't feel the usual passion from Wsan so both him and Savin can focus on finishing Khorminos already.

 

[Anon_3.141]

Don't know if Wsan has gotten burned out due to porn brain rot or it was the request of the patreon that wanted their OC added to the game. While Tay isn't their worst work but not great. It could be possible they just wanted to get her out the way so Alante who we have waited for who knows how many months at this point lost count to get more focus otherwise benching Alante for Tay was wild.

Honestly don't know why they couldn't get another writer to do Tay since I don't feel the usual passion from Wsan so both him and Savin can focus on finishing Khorminos already.

The usual passion from Wsan is so missing that it feels like Tobs wrote the character.

 

[Skandranon]

Don't know if Wsan has gotten burned out due to porn brain rot or it was the request of the patreon that wanted their OC added to the game.

Afaik Wsan doesn't do commissions. Kaly was an exception probably exclusively because he needed to write one anyway, so much so he burned through writing all of her original content in 3 days.

 

[RedBluePill]

Sigh. I'm still waiting forever for Drifa's & wolf cave update.

 

[JuAqe]

Is it just me or does the descriptions of the colosseum items seem a bit.... bland? Like, the eastern greatblade for example, is it mongol, chinese, hell inspired by the Philippines even? No description of any part of it aside from length?

 

[TheInfernal616]

Where is it? Can't seem to find it

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[Anon_3.141]

Is it just me or does the descriptions of the colosseum items seem a bit.... bland? Like, the eastern greatblade for example, is it mongol, chinese, hell inspired by the Philippines even? No description of any part of it aside from length?

Pretty sure the Eastern Greatblade is meant to be a Katana, based on the references to great cutting.

 

[Farhan124]

It could be possible they just wanted to get her out the way so Alante who we have waited for who knows how many months at this point lost count to get more focus otherwise benching

hope you are right about alante, I've been looking foward to her. Octavia isn't the worst thing that has happened to this game( looking at you kinu and kitsune den) but at the same time kalysea and her feel forced. especially since they both get added as quests. I didn't follow kalysea but now every time I look at my quest page, I have to see Tay's name pop up and be reminded of her BRAT calling shit.

 

[conspiracyhoax]

Still holding out hope for more Kiyoko-content one day.
Love me some Kitsune slut-wife.

I still haven't bothered freeing her from the necklace. The dream world content with you helping raise Kinu was adorable and the fact that they instagrow all your kids just so the writer can make them go off and fuck someone was the worst decision I'd seen in the game. Even worse if you consider that in-lore they just made all your kids grow up without a father for no reason.

 

[AquilaXX]

The usual passion from Wsan is so missing that it feels like Tobs wrote the character.

Thats because Wsan in fact did not write the character. The game just updated with a correction for the Author.

 

[thecatcameback]

I didn't follow kalysea but now every time I look at my quest page, I have to see Tay's name pop up and be reminded of her BRAT calling shit.

You can't tell her to fuck off to end the quest? Kalysea doesn't get auto added. I just ignore their invite and nothing ever pops up on my quest log.

 

[smithsmithsmith]

kalysea and her feel forced. especially since they both get added as quests.

Can't really agree there, Kalysea feels fairly natural given the area and the semi mind control helps smooth over out of character decisions by the player character. She also doesn't have a build up that is inherently out of character for a sub themed pc to be engaging with, a lot of Tay's problems could be fixed by just not having her introduction be the arena champion fight.

 

[JuAqe]

Pretty sure the Eastern Greatblade is meant to be a Katana, based on the references to great cutting.

The chinese had two handed dao quite literally designed for cleaving horses, as did the mongols I believe. The asias all had similar weapon designs and intentions and partially similar armor designs as well, this particular complaint is probably just a nitpick since you can go "Its whatever you imagine it to be" but like, just looking at everything but the bear mug feels so uninspired, no offense to wsan of course but it genuinely feels like he was just bored while writing it up. Hell, the bow and king sword are literally like 3-5 words long

 

[Jorgenheil]

The chinese had two handed dao quite literally designed for cleaving horses, as did the mongols I believe. The asias all had similar weapon designs and intentions and partially similar armor designs as well, this particular complaint is probably just a nitpick since you can go "Its whatever you imagine it to be" but like, just looking at everything but the bear mug feels so uninspired, no offense to wsan of course but it genuinely feels like he was just bored while writing it up. Hell, the bow and king sword are literally like 3-5 words long

You guys never think for a second that real counties doesn't exist there so he can't really name a specific location that is located in eastern continent.

 

[Noone202]

You guys never think for a second that real counties doesn't exist there so he can't really name a specific location that is located in eastern continent.

Just made a new one and slap some reference to the faction that come from the east? You know, the kitsune colony that has long description about "back in our place" shit? Or even a line from Kiyoko?

 

[YouShallNotLol]

You guys never think for a second that real counties doesn't exist there so he can't really name a specific location that is located in eastern continent.

CoC2's Japan knock-off: Am I a joke to you?

 

[Biostar]

Alante who we have waited for who knows how many months

Try years.

made all your kids grow up without a father for no reason

Not true, Tobs totally had a reason. It was to spite you for caring.

 

[Jorgenheil]

CoC2's Japan knock-off: Am I a joke to you?

Do they have Japan in the game? No
They created a civilization inspired only by japan but iirc they origin of their civilization is still not specified which is which only the general direction that they come somewhere from north, west, east or south the only location that is establish is the map and where cait came from

So they can't just go and create a nation just for the description of a weapon.

 

[claralover]

New patch dropped and it's another futa-dom

its the same one from the previous update

 

[YouShallNotLol]

Do they have Japan in the game? No
They created a civilization inspired only by japan but iirc they origin of their civilization is still not specified which is which only the general direction that they come somewhere from north, west, east or south the only location that is establish is the map and where cait came from

So they can't just go and create a nation just for the description of a weapon.

Lol. Not just Japan, literally Imperial Japan. From item descriptions, kitsune dialogues, to the lore pages, they all describe very real Imperial Japan. Unashamedly so.
Behlar is literally Roman Empire in decline. Cait's country is knock-off Persia. And Khor-Minos is obviously Greece.
You're going for an embarassingly infantile argument here.