- Jun 1, 2017
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Imo I think rindos original concept would have been better, with one of your children being burned in the attack on your home. I don't think it would have had any sexual content but it would have had a personal touch and potential for your character to help them heal mentally as their parent, more platonic emotional support version than the current rindo. It feels weird with the entire location burning and some of the little kids having to go feral to fight off the attackers that there were no consequences, it would have had more emotional impact if it would have ended with something like "many escaped with few wounds, but some have needed medical care, and one of our daughters was burned horribly; please speak with her".I must say as a disabled, parental abuse victim, I do read stuff like Kinu and Rindo as Tobs having a misery boner.
Its dehumanising at times cause he seems to think tragedy and harm like that are things you can use like a spice....Reminds me of abusive, manipulative ex's of mine tbh.
Edit: Sucks that charcters that had such potential are used that way. (I prefer Inari over Hime but both could be handled better. And with Rindo originally the plan for Kinu's sister, it just gets even more creepy.)
Rindos not awful but her "I snorted the ashes off her neck it was pretty hot" scenes pale in comparison to having a situation where you could interact with one of your kids, it could also have helped kiyoko get more development, like if she was in the party maybe she helps her along with you. Maybe even introduce a new kitsune that loves her as she is and get wholesome sappy matchmaking stuff that gives a opportunity to be involved with making sure your daughters happy instead of having no role or input. Literally anything else other than kinu sue parts 3-6