Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.8.1] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[muschi26]

I never really paid any attention to the writers names on the scenes till I came here, but seeing Noire being written by Tobs really made a lot of things click.
I don't even dislike the guy or anything, it's just really upsetting to me how much everything about her makes sense now that I have that one tiny piece of additional information.

Like what?

 

[Unobtainium]

Like what?

It's mostly just I got the same uncomfortable feeling reading anything Noire says post asking for sex that I got reading anything Kinu said to the player post Kinuquest. I'm not really sure I can describe it well. It's like I could understand Kinu wanting to be self sufficient and I can understand the submissive character being super loyal to their superior, but there is something about the way its presented that really rubs me the wrong way.

 

[NODOGAN]

It's mostly just I got the same uncomfortable feeling reading anything Noire says post asking for sex that I got reading anything Kinu said to the player post Kinuquest. I'm not really sure I can describe it well. It's like I could understand Kinu wanting to be self sufficient and I can understand the submissive character being super loyal to their superior, but there is something about the way its presented that really rubs me the wrong way.

So Glad I can be a dick to them "no go away, I got no time to fuck some street-bums, unlike you I AM a busy man"

 

[Zemax]

iam here for the tits

 

[ModraHD]

With my kinks you'd think I'd love the foxes, but each time I see the phrase "baby bag" all the horny just shrivels away. Piles upon piles of word soup with so little of it physical, literal, or intimate, and then I read that and just mash next until I can leave.

Also, Hunt menu when? Searching for anything in particular is agony, though TiTs has it far worse.

 

[muschi26]

With my kinks you'd think I'd love the foxes, but each time I see the phrase "baby bag" all the horny just shrivels away. Piles upon piles of word soup with so little of it physical, literal, or intimate, and then I read that and just mash next until I can leave.

Oh yeah, it’s terrible. Breasts being referred to as “funbags” or “mommy milkers” also puts me out. It’s like they’re embarrassed they’re repeated the same body parts so much, but their only solution to that is to flip through a thesaurus and cycle through synonyms.

 

[Skandranon]

Them too, although there's a bit of concern about Ahmri because of the centaurs not totally believing in monogamy.

No different than anyone else. When asked about marriage in the Frost Marches, the priest tells you the exact same thing. Marriages in this area (and game) in general aren't monogamous. The only monogamy in the game is voluntary.

 

[ModraHD]

Oh yeah, it’s terrible. Breasts being referred to as “funbags” or “mommy milkers” also puts me out. It’s like they’re embarrassed they’re repeated the same body parts so much, but their only solution to that is to flip through a thesaurus and cycle through synonyms.

They didn't even have to do that shit either, the core of this system is dynamic words for body parts with size appropriate adjectives. NPCs can use it.

 

[muschi26]

They didn't even have to do that shit either, the core of this system is dynamic words for body parts with size appropriate adjectives. NPCs can use it.

Actually, that might be part of it. I haven’t checked, but maybe the lists referenced by those size-appropriate descriptions are full of crap like “gargantuan mommy milkers” or “plus-sized funbags”. It’s the same issue in either case, though: repetitive texts the author tried to liven up with farfetched synonyms rather than through rewriting.

 

[ModraHD]

Actually, that might be part of it. I haven’t checked, but maybe the lists referenced by those size-appropriate descriptions are full of crap like “gargantuan mommy milkers” or “plus-sized funbags”. It’s the same issue in either case, though: repetitive texts the author tried to liven up with farfetched synonyms rather than through rewriting.

You can easily see what types of words it'll use by looking at your own appearance multiple times. Weird shit isn't on it, the descriptions are usually appropriate. The variation is tame.

 

[Quintilus]

rather than through rewriting

Rewrite how exactly? Replace all 'big mommy milkers' to 'baby feeders'?

 

[Another Myth]

Male berry can get pregnant... I mean he is still referred to as the mother but his "baby bag" can produce babies.

 

[str8up]

i play so many games that i often get them mixed up for others
could be wrong BUT i could swear someone in this thread said something about theres no bad ends in this game AND if so IF someone said that they are wrong
i got a bad end ...fighting mino guard tried to use brute force to make them let me through the gates
needless to say i lost THAT battle at least you hit retry and then just walk away from the fight

 

[WazaQQXOXO]

there is no normal and loving relationships in this game.

An healthy relationship? That’s a power fantasy, have you got a licence for that?

 

[Skandranon]

i play so many games that i often get them mixed up for others
could be wrong BUT i could swear someone in this thread said something about theres no bad ends in this game AND if so IF someone said that they are wrong
i got a bad end ...fighting mino guard tried to use brute force to make them let me through the gates
needless to say i lost THAT battle at least you hit retry and then just walk away from the fight

There are LOTS of bad ends in this game. Dozens at a minimum.

You must be registered to see the links

This list is outdated and incomplete! But 50+ at least.

 

[Dezdanna]

This game needs more male companions that are good and you can't randomly genderbend or de-dick, or it needs to make it so you can de-vag and de-boob certain characters, like, I don't know, Arona?

 

[Noone202]

This game needs more male companions that are good and you can't randomly genderbend or de-dick, or it needs to make it so you can de-vag and de-boob certain characters, like, I don't know, Arona?

That's power fantasy, my dude.
And turning Arona into an actual male?
This game devs main fetish is Futa, you have a better chance impregnating Nakano

 

[M0nte]

Also, it's nothing but I think it's funny. When I asked about what male npcs that I could write seg for, a lot of them asked for Bub's char

Frankly, you are writing for yourself -- for free! -- so I would rather if you could tell us what guys you would like to write for.
But since you gave me a position to push myself into your creative space, here goes--
Elyon power bottoming scene. Where that elvish preatyboy holds the leash while we hump him like a desperate bitch that we are.
More of Sugo or Prince Nyze content. Really pick any of the existing femboys since all of them are lacking in stuff to do and interact with. Jin Jin is my personal favorite. Really, just write a scene where we absoulutely smother a cute guy with our unbridaled attention until they are as putty as putty pudding.
And, I am not sure what is your stopping point in where a guy is to musceline to you, but are you interested in Rooh -- the minotaur twink?

He is the guard of Khorminos and also, in my humble opinion, a cocktease like no one else. The only thing we can do to the fucker is blow him, with three of his scenes being shared with Cait. Nothing wrong with that, but I honestly want his piece of ass all to myself and I would be interested in how you would interept it. He is presented as some kind of jock and is currently bored out of his mind. He even chalenges us to a fight. Maybe we could take him up for it and if we beat him, he lets us top him. If we lose, just write a throaway scene where he pounds us. Or anything really. I just want to destroy him -- sexually!

Still, ask first for permision to write before you proceed. And I am not sure if Bubs would allow you to write for his baby boys. Did discord joke about it?

 

[Darak123]

That's power fantasy, my dude.
And turning Arona into an actual male?
This game devs main fetish is Futa, you have a better chance impregnating Nakano

Both are equally low lol. Like hell Tobs gonna let you touch his special snowflake. You have a better chance for anything else really

 

[Darak123]

Frankly, you are writing for yourself -- for free! -- so I would rather if you could tell us what guys you would like to write for.
But since you gave me a position to push myself into your creative space, here goes--
Elyon power bottoming scene. Where that elvish preatyboy holds the leash while we hump him like a desperate bitch that we are.
More of Sugo or Prince Nyze content. Really pick any of the existing femboys since all of them are lacking in stuff to do and interact with. Jin Jin is my personal favorite. Really, just write a scene where we absoulutely smother a cute guy with our unbridaled attention until they are as putty as putty pudding.
And, I am not sure what is your stopping point in where a guy is to musceline to you, but are you interested in Rooh -- the minotaur twink?
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He is the guard of Khorminos and also, in my humble opinion, a cocktease like no one else. The only thing we can do to the fucker is blow him, with three of his scenes being shared with Cait. Nothing wrong with that, but I honestly want his piece of ass all to myself and I would be interested in how you would interept it. He is presented as some kind of jock and is currently bored out of his mind. He even chalenges us to a fight. Maybe we could take him up for it and if we beat him, he lets us top him. If we lose, just write a throaway scene where he pounds us. Or anything really. I just want to destroy him -- sexually!

Still, ask first for permision to write before you proceed. And I am not sure if Bubs would allow you to write for his baby boys. Did discord joke about it?

I think they're just tired of waiting for him lol. It's been a while after all.

And I mostly ask to get like a list of potential npc since I haven't played the game in ages and a larger pool of characters is a higher chance of getting accepted. The point of too musculine for me is about bara, I still can write for them but it'll be very bad, or just the champ being bottom lol.

And I actually do have an idea for like a high corrupt champ for Elyon but high chance it won't be accepted lel.

Guys I want to write for are kitsunes with me being a weeb and all, but ehhhh, probably not gonna get shit for any of them lol, I'm gonna try asking about Kazuo tho.