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Unobtainium

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Comiies said:
such magical power appearing out of nowhere not only breaks the immersion and confuses the reader but it also is never explained.
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Not gunna say anything about this centaur lady cause I have no horses in this race(lol), I've just wanted to say this for a while, but man I have already been broken on immersion for anything power related in this game.
I don't get how on one hand, you can have Zo, who in the grand scheme of things cultivates a little bit even by wuxia standards and almost deletes her consciousness; and on the other you have Dragon Eve who does nothing but sit on her ass and beat off in an inn but can just take in centuries of dragon life force and walk out totally unscathed.

tl;dr I take any chance I can to bitch about dragon eve my god do I hate it conceptually.
 
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Hey, remember when I said that I'd write every version of Kinu? Yeah, here's the one for her smol ver. Soooooo content warning, now as usual, tear it to pieces please and thank you.
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I know the champion isn't the most consistently written character in this game but both of them seem extremely ooc in this. It seems like very poorly written fanfic of the two characters. If this was added to the game I would immediately wonder how it was approved. I think this need a couple more revisions to make the scenario plausible as involving these established characters.
 
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I kinda get what you mean, the scenes were chosen to establish a solid foundation to build on, covering all the usual suspects with more varied scenes planned for later. For example if she had a bunch of fetish scenes like the bad end but no 'standard' sex scenes it would feel a bit odd, so I wanted to get those written first. I have plenty of fun ideas for the future now that the core framework is all in place.
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Hey mate i appreciate the fact that you are opening your wallet for kaly.Dont take my criticism to heart.Kalys peak.Cheers
 
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Are they ever going to fix Kyoko? Fox den ruined everything with her.
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from the information i was able to gather, if you are looking for kyoko being fixed via the original developers the answer is probably a hard no. but in the future if the game gets a decent mod team then the answer may become yes.
 
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And any chance of that basically requires that the code stop changing every time they update. Seems they shat their engine out in such a hurry that they're STILL finding foundational bugs, or having to fix NPCs to use the same systems that already exist.
And that they get over this idea that people need PERMISSION to mod their game. Its a commercially sold game, people can do WTF ever they want with their copy.
 
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And any chance of that basically requires that the code stop changing every time they update. Seems they shat their engine out in such a hurry that they're STILL finding foundational bugs, or having to fix NPCs to use the same systems that already exist.
And that they get over this idea that people need PERMISSION to mod their game. Its a commercially sold game, people can do WTF ever they want with their copy.
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That's why the code is such a confusing and ever-changing mess is to prevent mods I'm sure. If you can add any story you want why pay the devs?
 
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That's why the code is such a confusing and ever-changing mess is to prevent mods I'm sure. If you can add any story you want why pay the devs?
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No, I think they're just incompetent. So many errors in text, flags or scenes in general with the latest updates. I doubt they have the skill to deliberately make the code a mess and get it to work.

I'm sure Savin finds some relief that it's difficult to mod, but I don't think it's the reason for these shenanigans.
 
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No, I think they're just incompetent. So many errors in text, flags or scenes in general with the latest updates. I doubt they have the skill to deliberately make the code a mess and get it to work.

I'm sure Savin finds some relief that it's difficult to mod, but I don't think it's the reason for these shenanigans.
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Mate you just gave them an status upgrade that went from "They are preventing it" to "nah i just think they're useless."
 
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GokutheG said:
I know the champion isn't the most consistently written character in this game but both of them seem extremely ooc in this. It seems like very poorly written fanfic of the two characters. If this was added to the game I would immediately wonder how it was approved. I think this need a couple more revisions to make the scenario plausible as involving these established characters.
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Thank you for your feedback, really appreciated. Can you expand more on the ooc please, so I could have a starting point on what to fix. Again, thank you.
 
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Kinu is mature for her age and I think she already knows about sex in the game so her acting clueless about the "toy" in the mc's pants felt off.

I dont know a better way to say this but the mc and his RAGING BONER was just cringe. He also sort of comes off as sort of a creep(lying in order to rub her) yet extremely passive at the same time.

These were the biggest issues I had. I had smaller ones but I'm having trouble putting them into words.
 
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