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Some miscellaneous thoughts as I keep on keeping on:

For all that he's labeled as the head writer, the Winter City was Savin's first major contribution to the quest writing. He'd pop in here and there, usually to set something up before leaving it all to the others, so his vision for how things would play out has been murky. With his voice firmly in command for once, what I got from this adventure was a whole salt mine over (what I assume to be) cut ideas for CoC plotlines. Kasyrra just unloads over how sloppy the final dungeon was.

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Speaking of people who shouldn't be allowed to write non-horny scenes, this made me laugh:

You confidently set your stance and muddle over your own thoughts for half a minute, trying not to think about sex and cute people. "Not a problem, I'll pay Garth money; he'll solve all of our problems... at least this time."
I don't pick on SKoW just because he comes off like he's either 13 years old and just discovered that BOOBS are AWESOME or 43 and hasn't figured anything out beyond that. You don't expect anything from someone like that. Lines like this, though, where they tasked him with a 'real' piece of writing and he visibly doesn't know what to do, caught me off guard with their buffoonery.

Seems like the minotaur town is the next big thing. I'm actually looking forward to that; if it's mostly Wsan then it should have a basic sense of what people actually want from the game on display. Curious to see how he handles a whole plot.
 

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Some miscellaneous thoughts as I keep on keeping on:

For all that he's labeled as the head writer, the Winter City was Savin's first major contribution to the quest writing. He'd pop in here and there, usually to set something up before leaving it all to the others, so his vision for how things would play out has been murky. With his voice firmly in command for once, what I got from this adventure was a whole salt mine over (what I assume to be) cut ideas for CoC plotlines. Kasyrra just unloads over how sloppy the final dungeon was.

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Speaking of people who shouldn't be allowed to write non-horny scenes, this made me laugh:



I don't pick on SKoW just because he comes off like he's either 13 years old and just discovered that BOOBS are AWESOME or 43 and hasn't figured anything out beyond that. You don't expect anything from someone like that. Lines like this, though, where they tasked him with a 'real' piece of writing and he visibly doesn't know what to do, caught me off guard with their buffoonery.

Seems like the minotaur town is the next big thing. I'm actually looking forward to that; if it's mostly Wsan then it should have a basic sense of what people actually want from the game on display. Curious to see how he handles a whole plot.
Said what everyone was thinking but was too lazy to write.Gj man.
 

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I don't pick on SKoW just because he comes off like he's either 13 years old and just discovered that BOOBS are AWESOME or 43 and hasn't figured anything out beyond that. You don't expect anything from someone like that. Lines like this, though, where they tasked him with a 'real' piece of writing and he visibly doesn't know what to do, caught me off guard with their buffoonery.
Isn't SKoW a chick?
 

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Man or Woman his writing sucks and thats all that matters.
I don't like their writing much either, I find it overly raunchy, but that wasn't the point. Who you are is an intrinsic part of everything you do, and in this case it certainly explains their writing style and character choices.
 

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Maybe i've yet to know the soft brush of a woman's pen, but the only one that distinctively reads like one to me is the cow teacher writer.
 
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Maybe i've yet to know the soft brush of a woman's pen, but the only one that distinctively reads like one to me is the cow teacher writer.
Alypia? Yeah, an easy litmus test in a game like this is whether they can write a F/F scene without mentioning dicks. It -never- fails; even the competent guy writers will inevitably throw in a line about a slavering pussy sucking on fingers as if they're the fat cock they feel is missing in that scene. All of the SKoW scenes I've run into have made sure to keep phallic thots (literal or in mind) close by.
 
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Alypia? Yeah, an easy litmus test in a game like this is whether they can write a F/F scene without mentioning dicks. It -never- fails; even the competent guy writers will inevitably throw in a line about a slavering pussy sucking on fingers as if they're the fat cock they feel is missing in that scene. All of the SKoW scenes I've run into have made sure to keep phallic thots (literal or in mind) close by.
Now I wonder if this is caused by a limit in the writer's abilities or are there sacrifices that they have to make to get scenes approved since Savin's tastes are...well known.
 

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No idea, I just assumed based on the vibes. The style is -very- teenage boy.
I took that as overcompensating. The thing that really disturbs me about their writing is the constant focus on bodily fluids, SKoW will take a passionate kissing scene and focus entirely on the drool, saliva and spit. Apparently it's called Hygrophilia.

Opening a random Jae'lyn scene, keywords: "Drool, saliva, squirt, milking, pre-cum, spit, futa-cream, cum, drink-serving, salty-shots, slurping, spunk"
 

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I took that as overcompensating. The thing that really disturbs me about their writing is the constant focus on bodily fluids, SKoW will take a passionate kissing scene and focus entirely on the drool, saliva and spit. Apparently it's called Hygrophilia.

Opening a random Jae'lyn scene, keywords: "Drool, saliva, squirt, milking, pre-cum, spit, futa-cream, cum, drink-serving, salty-shots, slurping, spunk"
If you want to write a cum drinking scene,then write a cum drinking scene.This is one big complaint that i have.noy only from SKoW but from most of the CoC2 writers.They never go all the way(pun intended).They either try to write a jack of all trades scene that fails cause it trys too fit too many things so it stops being arousing OR they focus on 1 fetish but they focus on its worst and most unarousing(idk if thats a word but you get the idea) features.
 

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If you want to write a cum drinking scene,then write a cum drinking scene.This is one big complaint that i have.noy only from SKoW but from most of the CoC2 writers.They never go all the way(pun intended).They either try to write a jack of all trades scene that fails cause it trys too fit too many things so it stops being arousing OR they focus on 1 fetish but they focus on its worst and most unarousing(idk if thats a word but you get the idea) features.
Checkmarking the required tags for a scene always brings down quality of writing, whether it's erotica or not
 

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Been a while since I played. They start adding more corruption options? Last time there was just making Cait have more titty and/or chonk to her, and that was it. And that's not really corruption either.
 

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Been a while since I played. They start adding more corruption options? Last time there was just making Cait have more titty and/or chonk to her, and that was it. And that's not really corruption either.
Nope. There is no such thing as corruption in Corruption Of Champions 2 :HideThePain:
 

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I know there is a way to have more than 2 companions in your party with save edit, but I don't know how to do it. someone knows?
 

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I know there is a way to have more than 2 companions in your party with save edit, but I don't know how to do it. someone knows?
save to file (pls also keep a copy just incase)
open the save file
scroll down to the very bottom, you should find \"party\"
then just edit who you want to add by manually typing

here is mine with all party members (except \"brint\") for reference

\"party\":{\"members\":[\"pc\",\"etheryn\",\"brienne\",\"cait\",\"arona\",\"agni\",\"kiyoko\",\"atugia\",\"azyrran\",\"quin\",\"viviane\"],\"guest\":[]}

i going to repeat what i said before, this shouldnt break regular gameplay but will break quests that add party members (arona, garret, liaden, calise, etc...)
 
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