Skandranon

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Okay this is a bit confusing, it sounds like you're saying that Kalysea has a Doc Mengele setup in her house but since this is more applicable to Kassyra I assume that's what you're referring to. Because I think Kassyra is worse compared to to Kalysea.
I read Kalysea as Kassyra

I was sleepy dammit
 
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NODOGAN

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I was down for the hardcore fendom thing, but the marriage thing felt weird/unnecesary as fuck in my humble opinion...oh also Moira being great with the art as always, made the "BrAt BuLl" princess look sexy as hell.
 

TalRash4

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Not a big fan of femdom myself, but i can stand it if it's well written. Octavia content? This is just absurdly stereotypical, like third-grade fanfic. Honestly, Carter Brown's fiction is much more intellectual than this. I can almost feel how my braincells dying in agony, screaming for mercy.
But i had to admit, Moira did damn fine job. At least something good in this whole sequence.
 

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Wait wait wait, I've been lurking about and kept seeing the name Tay repeated and wondering who the fuck it was, and that's apparently the name of the Black Knight? Man that is NOT at all the name I'd expect of someone that looks like that.

I thought it was a new fox or some other similar character with that type of name and the overuse of brat they apparently have in their sentences from what I've read here :KEK: :KEK: :KEK:
 

NODOGAN

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Wait wait wait, I've been lurking about and kept seeing the name Tay repeated and wondering who the fuck it was, and that's apparently the name of the Black Knight? Man that is NOT at all the name I'd expect of someone that looks like that.

I thought it was a new fox or some other similar character with that type of name and the overuse of brat they apparently have in their sentences from what I've read here :KEK: :KEK: :KEK:
I think its supossed to be her nickname? real name being Octavi and all, still no fucking clue how we went from Octavia to Tay, the don't sound similar at all.
 

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The character you're writing is somehow telling you what you should be writing, but no dom futa whose ass you just beat, also the armor that genderswapped your male companion gave her a horse dick. It's so dumb and next level spite writing. Holy.
 

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So we canonically beat the character in the fight, but we still have to be the bitch to said characters with no option to turn the tables apparently.

This doesn't make sense while you already have Arona, a futa you can beat into submission or lose to already in the game.

Not having the option to turn the table when we already beat them sounds like dumb writing.
 

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So we canonically beat the character in the fight, but we still have to be the bitch to said characters with no option to turn the tables apparently.

This doesn't make sense while you already have Arona, a futa you can beat into submission or lose to already in the game.

Not having the option to turn the table when we already beat them sounds like dumb writing.
And in Arona's case, if you decide you don't like being the dom anymore, you can also intentionally lose a bunch in the sparring matches you can do with her, to flip her Dom/Sub counter over to Dom. And the reverse as long as you haven't locked in Dom from intentionally losing *too* much in the sparring.
 

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So we canonically beat the character in the fight, but we still have to be the bitch to said characters with no option to turn the tables apparently.

This doesn't make sense while you already have Arona, a futa you can beat into submission or lose to already in the game.

Not having the option to turn the table when we already beat them sounds like dumb writing.
This really is like if arona didn't have the submission route, just the dom route but you still got it by beating her ass.
 

NODOGAN

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Oct - TAY - via... i would know, its my sisters name xD
Oh...ooooooh, ok now it makes sense (just slightly weird to me, down here we make nicknames either using the start or the end sillabes of a name, here would be either "Octy" or "Vi" lol)
 

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Welp, gone through most of Tay's stuff. Tinfoil hat time but I'm not sure the observer is tagged incorrectly, her sex scenes especially read like tobs imitating wsan's futa stuff. Also even more than Kalysea this is a character who does not give a single fuck about the player character, which does sort of make sense given that they seem to be a different person to the one she fought in the arena. The switch between the brief confrontation after the fight and the conversation in the tavern is pretty jarring, the person who held the conversation in the tavern wouldn't have entered the arena at all.
 

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Welp, gone through most of Tay's stuff. Tinfoil hat time but I'm not sure the observer is tagged incorrectly, her sex scenes especially read like tobs imitating wsan's futa stuff. Also even more than Kalysea this is a character who does not give a single fuck about the player character, which does sort of make sense given that they seem to be a different person to the one she fought in the arena. The switch between the brief confrontation after the fight and the conversation in the tavern is pretty jarring, the person who held the conversation in the tavern wouldn't have entered the arena at all.
What do you mean by doesn't give a shit?
 
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Lord Kentus

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So we canonically beat the character in the fight, but we still have to be the bitch to said characters with no option to turn the tables apparently.

This doesn't make sense while you already have Arona, a futa you can beat into submission or lose to already in the game.

Not having the option to turn the table when we already beat them sounds like dumb writing.
Case and point of just ignoring the trash that flows downstream.
 
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