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Really late reply but I found it interesting that it isn't just me struggling with descriptives during sex scenes.Has reactivity for the type of drifa, if she's on contraceptives or not, if she's pregnant or not, if the wayfort is built up or not, the furniture set (e.g; if you're using traditional Belharan), and even her Lustful Liquor scene changes dependent on if you've fucked her already or not. If not you don't bump uglies at all and she goes off to flick the bean.
Her talks are also more interesting than the average NPC as it's not an exposition vomit to provide information, it's a character reflecting on their own history with all of the sometimes awkwardness that brings.
I can't get why you're not able to recruit her if you don't recruit the wolves (let's be real, there's a not so small chance we both know what content her future holds) but, it makes perfect sense why you can't recruit her if you genderbend them. Given that body-altering corruption is the reason she has a bone to pick with the wizard who ballooned her out, it makes perfect sense for her to not go under the roof of a person who was more than willing to do what happened to her to others.
It could be recency bias (probably not given that my default setting is negative). But I liked the work Tobs did.
...Barring a sex scene.
After the contribution to Drifa proper, this was honestly surprising.
No way of telling how much of that was deliberate or just Tobs naturally continuing to improve as a writer. That there was a Tobs sex scene where my eyes didn't glaze over obviously is novel. Though it still has the obvious flow of other various adult medium in places it's not as instantly brain shaking as the word Tomboy being used seven (7) times in one sex scene for Isadora.
Now for some tomatoes
SKoW working on their own quest? Gee whiz, I wonder what kind of content will be in it?
It surely will be a surprise. Totally.
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Sex scenes are probably the trickiest part for me mostly because you're mentioning the PC's partner so many times and you want to get away from spammimg "Name" or "his/hers". So you tend to default to a handfull of descriptives you enjoy using. Comimg up with new ones are scary because you're afraid they will sound stupid.
If you read my Nash sex scenes there are alot of combos like "handsome/athletic wolf/merchant/lupine".