Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.8.16] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[Knife-wielding crab]

Time for another update from a gay crustean.

I went through my femboy orc and gosh golly was he a mess. I understand why he got rejected.

I more or less rewrote all of his scenes and adressed the 600+ comments from a communityn member. Also added a loss scene and a bottoming option when you team up on the femborc with Arona.

Going to do one more readthrough then I will send him back to the thunderdome. Or cumdome.

 

[Darak123]

But I don't think anyone has romantic feelings about her unless you are talking about the rich patron getting Ntr'ed when cait relaspes into her inner slut

Not disagreeing, but writers of this game really is pussies in term of writing ntr/click ngl

 

[K1ng_C00mer]

Invalidating story and whatever is just straight up bullshit. The only factor that will ever matter is whether Savin wants it or not, considering Ryn is one of his characters. I'm mostly reminded of how we're not allowed to have both Olivia and the genderbent lupines "because reasons", when it only takes adding a single variable to a single line of code to fix. I forgot whether it was on the forums or on here that someone was gaslighting themselves into believing we couldn't because "It's not what Olivia would have wanted" or whatever, trying to rationalize it when even the discord people end up using the console to have both anyway.

I mean it's the same reason why ToBs only lets you knock up either Miko or Mai. "Because someone needs to be in line to be Komari's heir"

Yeah, bullshit. Komari isn't going anywhere and even if she was clearly the fox twin you knock up is able to keep being a shrine maiden and raise a kit on the side, so that explanation doesn't even make sense.

If they actually had characters getting pissed off and leaving or locking you out of areas like in CoC I, then I can understand their logic, but that would mean not only including tangible consequences for our actions but they'd need to get off their asses and account for different situations. You know, probably the entire point of the parser system instead of using it to track if Ryn need to be babied again or Berwyn's fifty variations.

Also saw someone on the forums say they're going to take a shot at writing a Clementine expansion... That involves giving her a dick. You seriously can't make this shit up, Jesus Christ. And of course it's the person that was malding over how,

"All this complaining about "to much dickgirls" reminds me that men who are (predominantly) attracted to women had it to good for to long! They are not used to a game that does not pander entirely to them."

It's going to get in, isn't it? Savin will totally fast track it just to fuck with us and because it's a new dickgirl, isn't he? For fuck's sake....

 

[Titan king]

The Kara kara idiot or some other shit like that?

 

[Knife-wielding crab]

Also, while I am still horny posting, have the image that inspired the femborc.

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[Jbuster]

It's going to get in, isn't it? Savin will totally fast track it just to fuck with us and because it's a new dickgirl, isn't he? For fuck's sake....

Savin just undermined the confidence of an an aspiring community writer in order to sacrifice Clemetine in the futadom altar

Pain, so, much, pain

After drifting through the forums, I gotta ask these questions and such:

1. Would you fight the Seven if given the option? Call one out on their bullshit and take their places?
2. If given the chance, what character would you add just to piss Savin or the observer off (Me personally, a trad wife catfolk who hates Mallach's guts).
3. Add interactions where you have an option to fight certain enemies if you have a certain level cap. Like enemies pouncing at you, just to realize they are in way over their heads and try to run away, and the "Pick fight" button is ambusing them

1. Yeah, I would even do it just for fun
2. Kitsune son/daughter that instead of following their traditions decides that the champions is their role model and follows you in a mission to learn from you, bonding in an unique way
3. Centaur pack leader trying to kill me, suddenly, his cock gets trapped in a painful vice grip, under him, Cait like a freaking cock sucking crocodile reveals herself, "now do it", whispers my champion, "death roll", and the last thing the pack leader sees is his cockhead flying through the air while the champion laughs like a maniac

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Would you know?, I was actually playing that game and she really does a shit spell there

Frieren is truly magical

Regarding Inheritance (that was another post), great history, great premise, good writing, everything but gameplay, gameplay sucks ass, is the worst thing ever, like an inversion of a shitty visual novel pretending not to be a kinetic novel. Zero directions, zero clues, just your insane mc wandering through every richly decorated scenario trying to trigger this or that scene in order to advance the plot

Based, even more so that the champ is married to them all.

Haddi perched from the ceiling like a clumsy and adorable ninja, "do I spray him now with the bimbo potion or what?", she ask distracting this poor guy who is about to become another cow wife, because the champions does have a healthy apetite for big women

Also, while I am still horny posting, have the image that inspired the femborc.

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I do hope this works crab-sama, orc boys can be cute too

 

[bleargh1]

Also, while I am still horny posting, have the image that inspired the femborc.

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Femboy orcs.. the ultimate delightful rarity! MORE!

 

[Pizza Lord]

Time for another update from a gay crustean.

I went through my femboy orc and gosh golly was he a mess. I understand why he got rejected.

I more or less rewrote all of his scenes and adressed the 600+ comments from a communityn member. Also added a loss scene and a bottoming option when you team up on the femborc with Arona.

I am sure some people here will be salivating. 600+ comments is a whole lot to address.
I didn't know you had artwork for him.

 

[Knife-wielding crab]

I am sure some people here will be salivating. 600+ comments is a whole lot to address.
I didn't know you had artwork for him.

I don't have artwork. That picture got posted in the discord and it lead to me writing 35 pages of femboy orc sex.

 

[K1ng_C00mer]

Also, while I am still horny posting, have the image that inspired the femborc.

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God I love femboys so much...

Spoiler: Especially ones from "masculine" races like Orcs and Minotaurs.

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Will never forget Birb's femboy Kitsune that never was...

Not disagreeing, but writers of this game really is pussies in term of writing ntr/click ngl

Honestly, they are. They're too afraid to drive away patreons and other paypiggies so they do this stupid halfway shit that satisfies no one. I myself wouldn't be opposed if we could do some cucking/wife stealing but of course that'll never happen.

The Kara kara idiot or some other shit like that?

Yes, it was. Surprised you managed to figure that out almost instantly, honestly. I don't hate them or anything, but I do think they really don't understand who Savin is and the history of Fenoxo and why the game is the way it is. They just came in with preconceived notions after CoC II had already embraced the shipping path and just assumed the people criticizing it were just angry chuds screaming about "Muh wokeness in vidya gamez!" without bothering to really understand the arguments people were making.

I don't even disagree with some of their arguments. Like I think earlier on, they were asking why female champs can't dom men like Brint and needed to have dick to do that, and it's like yeah, Savin and friends do typically think you need a cock in order to dom someone. Almost as if they're so mindbroken by futacock they can't percive any form of domination other than penis goes into hole roughly.

 

[Knife-wielding crab]

God I love femboys so much...

Spoiler: Especially ones from "masculine" races like Orcs and Minotaurs.

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Will never forget Birb's femboy Kitsune that never was...



Honestly, they are. They're too afraid to drive away patreons and other paypiggies so they do this stupid halfway shit that satisfies no one. I myself wouldn't be opposed if we could do some cucking/wife stealing but of course that'll never happen.



Yes, it was. Surprised you managed to figure that out almost instantly, honestly. I don't hate them or anything, but I do think they really don't understand who Savin is and the history of Fenoxo and why the game is the way it is. They just came in with preconceived notions after CoC II had already embraced the shipping path and just assumed the people criticizing it were just angry chuds screaming about "Muh wokeness in vidya gamez!" without bothering to really understand the arguments people were making.

I don't even disagree with some of their arguments. Like I think earlier on, they were asking why female champs can't dom men like Brint and needed to have dick to do that, and it's like yeah, Savin and friends do typically think you need a cock in order to dom someone. Almost as if they're so mindbroken by futacock they can't percive any form of domination other than penis goes into hole roughly.

I think one of the big selling points of a femboy orc is that they are a bit bigger, more muscular and meaner then the avarage femboy.

Add to that a barbarian aesthetic, massive sex drive and lots of boasting.

That's some prime porn, comrade!

 

[Tsubuhaza]

MC forever cursed to be a wallflower only able to click through things and never fully use the sex dungeon for pleasure

There's even a laboratory to alter things through alchemy, can't do shit to change the mc's body

Yeah, I was a bit miffed it doesn't change much if you finally get Eve to grow up a bit. Did find the hidden ending lovely, it kinda relies on her slow aging though.

Unfortunately for her my servant's Noble Phantasm, Gay Ballg, is ranked NTR and is classified as Anti-Horny. Cait has no chance.

Does the existence of futa as another gender in-game imply that classifying them as lesbians or homosexual is incorrect since it's technically not same gendered, or does the fact that futas use female pronouns overwrite that consideration? Or maybe I'm just overthinking porn logic.

May I interest you in an Edo Period Ibuki-Doji in these trying times?
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I'd suggest not going into that rabbithole. Nobody can agree on what to classify futas, just take your own classification as right and move on.

Gay Ballg? Oh, no... Could it really be who I think it is? Lancer, Hornet Knight of No Relevancy?

Also, Ibuki-Douji was hilarious in Samurai Remnant for how much she didn't want to get embroiled in an evil scheme.

LancerEtheryn, shit yourself

Damn it, Kirei!

1. Would you fight the Seven if given the option? Call one out on their bullshit and take their places?
2. If given the chance, what character would you add just to piss Savin or the observer off (Me personally, a trad wife catfolk who hates Mallach's guts).
3. Add interactions where you have an option to fight certain enemies if you have a certain level cap. Like enemies

1. Think so, yeah. Reminds me of CoC Xianxia where you can fight Alvina and her fight takes like... half an hour from the health points. Fun times.
2. I'm not into that, but I imagine pissing them off would come through dedicking Savin's characters and taking the piss of Tobs' ones.

I did find the rng of it all very tedious. It just takes too damn long to go anywhere, but the writing is good. I'm just not going to get back into it after losing my save. I made progress a 2 months of progress and was very into the game until I update got rid of it all.

It's the one downside. Last time I've played, I was trying to get the damn karaoke room to show up.

Time for another update from a gay crustean.

I went through my femboy orc and gosh golly was he a mess. I understand why he got rejected.

I more or less rewrote all of his scenes and adressed the 600+ comments from a communityn member. Also added a loss scene and a bottoming option when you team up on the femborc with Arona.

Going to do one more readthrough then I will send him back to the thunderdome. Or cumdome.

Good luck!

It's going to get in, isn't it? Savin will totally fast track it just to fuck with us and because it's a new dickgirl, isn't he? For fuck's sake....

Savin just undermined the confidence of an an aspiring community writer in order to sacrifice Clemetine in the futadom altar

Pain, so, much, pain

"My kingdom, my kingdom for the upteenth futa!"

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

After drifting through the forums, I gotta ask these questions and such:

1. Would you fight the Seven if given the option? Call one out on their bullshit and take their places?
2. If given the chance, what character would you add just to piss Savin or the observer off (Me personally, a trad wife catfolk who hates Mallach's guts).
3. Add interactions where you have an option to fight certain enemies if you have a certain level cap. Like enemies pouncing at you, just to realize they are in way over their heads and try to run away, and the "Pick fight" button is ambusing them

1. So I would go the godslayer route, have us be able to either kill or talk them down out of existence. Do I much prefer killing a couple. But writing them out of the story might be a better choice.
2. I'd remove a couple of characters, I'd definitely remove the foxes completely from the game and enable the player to kill Mallach and the Snake God. Also give player Callah instead of Cait.
3. I definitely have more level type interactions more akin to stuff you'd see in BG3 first act or yeah ambushes or straight fight denials dependent on the player lvls.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

God I love femboys so much...

Spoiler: Especially ones from "masculine" races like Orcs and Minotaurs.

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I like to call it the thailand effect. Got the most extremes when it comes on to masculinity from the hypermasculine to the hyper feminine, and everything inbetween.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

I don't even disagree with some of their arguments. Like I think earlier on, they were asking why female champs can't dom men like Brint and needed to have dick to do that, and it's like yeah, Savin and friends do typically think you need a cock in order to dom someone. Almost as if they're so mindbroken by futacock they can't percive any form of domination other than penis goes into hole roughly.

Can't show em stuff like this

 

[Rononoes]

its funny how over time every mention of the game started to have the tagline of "savin's" or "salamander studios", like on the site, forums, the wiki, as soon as you boot up the damned game...
really goes to show the priorities of the game as well as undermine all the hard work of the contributors

 

[Femboys and Futas]

Can't show em stuff like this
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The numbers mason

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

The numbers mason

What could they mean....339531

 

[M0nte]

Wwhile appreciate femboy orc, I do wish we had muscular pretty boy hunk in vein of Courier from Cloud Meadow.

Muscular guys that are feminine are my fucking jam.

 

[Knife-wielding crab]

Wwhile appreciate femboy orc, I do wish we had muscular pretty boy hunk in vein of Courier from Cloud Meadow.

Muscular guys that are feminine are my fucking jam.
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If I could clone myself I would work on such things. But alas, I have to focus on one project at a time.

I wanted to do a stripper orc. But that will probably have to wait for next game.