Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.8.17] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[zwere]

It's always a treat finding poorly thought out word choices in scenes.
Now, if you just look at the google dictionary meaning, the word has been used properly. Except if you delve slightly below surface level, you'd be hard pressed to find this specific synonym of accept not used in extremely formal and political matters.

Obviously there's nothing wrong with busting out the thesaurus and fishing for synonyms to avoid repetitiveness in creative writing. I do it all the time. But by God, if it's a really obscure one, at least check examples of where and how it is typically used. There are some words that are mostly seen in politics but have some fringe use in mundane writing, such as the word unilateral, yet for the most part you want to avoid misusing lingo where it just doesn't fit.

 

[Quintilus]

It's always a treat finding poorly thought out word choices in scenes. View attachment 3105844
Now, if you just look at the google dictionary meaning, the word has been used properly. Except if you delve slightly below surface level, you'd be hard pressed to find this specific synonym of accept not used in extremely formal and political matters.

Obviously there's nothing wrong with busting out the thesaurus and fishing for synonyms to avoid repetitiveness in creative writing. I do it all the time. But by God, if it's a really obscure one, at least check examples of where and how it is typically used. There are some words that are mostly seen in politics but have some fringe use in mundane writing, such as the word unilateral, yet for the most part you want to avoid misusing lingo where it just doesn't fit.

'Marvelous, carry on, Im arriving'

 

[zwere]

He also hasn't made any content for quite awhile now afaik. Someone will probably correct me here, but Bubs' last entry revolves around finally adding the proper responses to Leofric's sucker punch and not much else. He promised more content for genderbent Hirrud, a few foxes, the mercenaries, and more scenes for the ex-cultist bunny creep. but now there's barely news about him.

I just checked the forums and it looks like his last appearance there was the same month as that updated scene dropped and it was him getting into a spat with someone criticizing Quin lol.

 

[TalRash4]

I mean.
We're comparing the traditional fun race where they mistfy you, have fun quirks, are generally lighthearted in nearly every setting, in porn get your rocks off, and maybe fall in love depending on the story you're reading from games in this space to old folktales to...

to...
I mean you visit the tree:

• Everybody tries to brutalize you with no room or time for an explanation
• That fox band you helped won't even remotely attempt to help you through this scenario in a way that actually matters
• if they win they forcefully kill your ego, genderbend you, and force you into marriage and likely life of servitude as a mother to edge the fox
• The elder was cursed into an eternal punishment stated to be worse than death
• One of the denizens was turned into bacon because of politics
• Edge the fox clearly hates you
• Drunk the fox exists to fuck all the other NPCs and be abrasive to the PC. But, it's okay because they're all thots including the potential mother of your children:
  
• Your cute daughter time warps into a Mary Sue stranger with a marriage you as the filthy foreigner get to do nothing with including meeting the groom in any official capacity. (Damn Tobs, not even having him visit you on a date with your daughter? I would have been pummeled to a pulp for being so brazen)
• The roaming foxes aren't tricksters at all who get what they want through trickery but roaming gangs of rapists who use whacky moon logic; if you get your rocks off, it was an equivalent trade
• You find out that their tree is what's killing the hippie elf tree gods (except not really it was hippie elf targeting mushroom ancient evil all along!)
• Treated like an outsider by nearly everybody involved

Anyways, I'm not saying you can't cover more serious themes in a porn game. But, man... My big thing is maids and while the maids in this game commit every single sin that exists even they weren't mangled as hard as kitsune were.

It is a porn game, but for kitsunes I would like to have an option like in (God forgive me) Skyrim with a den of assassins: just erase them into ashes without any conversations. Just walk in, slaughter every single one (perhaps, spare one or two - for, y'know, fun) and walk out like a chad. There is an arrogant idiots and there is this multi-tailed twisted wretches.

 

[Raf-Raf]

It is a porn game, but for kitsunes I would like to have an option like in (God forgive me) Skyrim with a den of assassins: just erase them into ashes without any conversations. Just walk in, slaughter every single one (perhaps, spare one or two - for, y'know, fun) and walk out like a chad. There is an arrogant idiots and there is this multi-tailed twisted wretches.

Raphael: Join me, brother. And let us eliminate this den of evil together.


He was the hero all along, we're just in the POV of a shitsune.

 

[destroyerofassholes]

You're right, BubbleLord, real life sucks. But not in the way you think. It sucks not in that some pretentious twat thinks that emulating real life is peak fiction, it sucks in that such pretentious twats are capable of inserting themselves in a porn game and contaminate the minds of others with their stupidity.

That was such a sad, pathetic comment by Bubs because you just know it's not actually about the character, it's about him getting "all the bitches" through some character he wrote. And he has to defend that.

Of all the various insane fucks over at SavinCo, Bubs is the single most miserable fuck out there. Tobs is also a massive asshole, but nobody accidentally shits on himself quite like Bubs does.

 

[Wrynn13]

Hmmm, does that mean Bubs giving us the option to leave the mind rapist out in the cold to die was less about gods forbid actually giving the player choices and more about shitting on himself knowing the character was trash? I still actually like Byvernia though so it's not like he can't do good on occasion. Still wish we got her as a companion instead of the cultist too.

 

[Rocky Pineapple Rhythm]

I remember when I used to like Byvernia, than Bubble boy kept talking about future plans for her and into the trash she went with the rest of em

 

[YouShallNotLol]

I remember when I used to like Byvernia, than Bubble boy kept talking about future plans for her and into the trash she went with the rest of em

What future plans?

 

[zwere]

Hmmm, does that mean Bubs giving us the option to leave the mind rapist out in the cold to die was less about gods forbid actually giving the player choices and more about shitting on himself knowing the character was trash? I still actually like Byvernia though so it's not like he can't do good on occasion. Still wish we got her as a companion instead of the cultist too.

No, in his mind if you don't help Quin, he goes full Sonic and keeps running forever.

 

[Susan Xandera]

View attachment 3106810
No, in his mind if you don't help Quin, he goes full Sonic and keeps running forever.

If he went full Sonic then he'd be likeable.
EDIT: Also, why does BubbleLardass have a picture that looks like its got the downs?

 

[Wrynn13]

If he went full Sonic then he'd be likeable.
EDIT: Also, why does BubbleLardass have a picture that looks like its got the downs?

I think he's supposed to look drunk. It's just not a great picture.

 

[YouShallNotLol]

If he went full Sonic then he'd be likeable.
EDIT: Also, why does BubbleLardass have a picture that looks like its got the downs?

Because he does.

 

[Deviton123]

That was such a sad, pathetic comment by Bubs because you just know it's not actually about the character, it's about him getting "all the bitches" through some character he wrote. And he has to defend that.

Of all the various insane fucks over at SavinCo, Bubs is the single most miserable fuck out there. Tobs is also a massive asshole, but nobody accidentally shits on himself quite like Bubs does.

I'm convinced the dude has watched too many red pill videos with the way he acts. I'd bet given the chance he would describe himself as "alpha", but I guess even he knows that would be too embarassing.

 

[Quintilus]

red pill videos

I aint gonna watch 3+ hours video to understand that joke(???) and all other information that google returns me about red pill is degenerative questions about matrix movie a la 'what if neo would eat both pills and then drunk a whole bottle of vodka on top of it?'

 

[Bulk Biceps]

Instead of not seeing the problem...

Hmm.

Spoiler: Quick aside about meta perspectives

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For that scene in particular, she smooches face with you and you're getting a blowie while you spitroast Arona. Most of them have the NPC as an interactive equal part of that relationship. NPC centric or not, they're some of the few scenes where the focus is clearly on an NPC yet the PC isn't just an actionless background character

But goodness if they don't push the poly with all the subtlety of a punch to the face

If you're into that, they're not written bad. I think. Hard to judge things you're not into impartially but... Anyways, I can't say I'll ever align with Savin's fetishes for anal, dickgirls, and poly. But, his talent as a writer for a porn game's porn scenes is rather good.


I mean.
We're comparing the traditional fun race where they mistfy you, have fun quirks, are generally lighthearted in nearly every setting, in porn get your rocks off, and maybe fall in love depending on the story you're reading from games in this space to old folktales to...

to...
I mean you visit the tree:

• Everybody tries to brutalize you with no room or time for an explanation
• That fox band you helped won't even remotely attempt to help you through this scenario in a way that actually matters
• if they win they forcefully kill your ego, genderbend you, and force you into marriage and likely life of servitude as a mother to edge the fox
• The elder was cursed into an eternal punishment stated to be worse than death
• One of the denizens was turned into bacon because of politics
• Edge the fox clearly hates you
• Drunk the fox exists to fuck all the other NPCs and be abrasive to the PC. But, it's okay because they're all thots including the potential mother of your children:
  
• Your cute daughter time warps into a Mary Sue stranger with a marriage you as the filthy foreigner get to do nothing with including meeting the groom in any official capacity. (Damn Tobs, not even having him visit you on a date with your daughter? I would have been pummeled to a pulp for being so brazen)
• The roaming foxes aren't tricksters at all who get what they want through trickery but roaming gangs of rapists who use whacky moon logic; if you get your rocks off, it was an equivalent trade
• You find out that their tree is what's killing the hippie elf tree gods (except not really it was hippie elf targeting mushroom ancient evil all along!)
• Treated like an outsider by nearly everybody involved

Anyways, I'm not saying you can't cover more serious themes in a porn game. But, man... My big thing is maids and while the maids in this game commit every single sin that exists even they weren't mangled as hard as kitsune were.

Lets not forget that they try not to get you involved in politics cause they are worried that if they offend you in some way you will fuck shit up (if you are the champion of Keros).

 

[NODOGAN]

Boredom is one hell of a drug! tried the new update and explored the Windy Peaks and got some things to say, but frst, DISCLAIMER TIME! (I'm gonna defend Savin abit here, please bear with me it'll be all in the name of shitting on Tobs later I promise!)

So I went in to the Windy Peaks and gotta say thus far story-wise the place is...pretty alright, the only plothole I've found on the whole thing belongs to Tobs but we'll talk about it later, so the things I liked:

1-Credit where credit is due, Skow's Manticores have some nice sex scenes and FINALLY there's a new character other than Githa that acknowledges MC can have more than 1 cock & gives you a special scene as a result!

2-Savin's writting of the Vulperine Pottery Maker (IDK the word for this, sculptor? whatever he makes pots!) Arene was...surprisingly wholesome? dude's the father that stepped up and has a happy life raising his harpy daughters, both the ones he fathered and the ones he adopted (Also yes he being eloquent/speaking Belharan fluidly goes against Tob's description that they speak other language but hell, guy establishes that he frequently traded with the Minotaurs so there's an excuse as to why he speaks our language good.)

Now for the things I didn't liked...IS TOBS TIME!

1-We have confirmed Vulperines are just discount furry kitsunes for Tobs from the way he writes them, Savin made the village seem a cozy if isolated & humble place, where the inhabitants are nice and curious of visitors (this is GOOD and in tune with Tob's description of them as "savages/more tribe-esque people") and we don't interact with many of them because they can't speak Belharan good...yet if that's the case then WHY IN THE FLYING FUCK do the Vulperine Hunters TALK & ACT LIKE THE KITSUNE?¡

Tobs literaly wrote the kitsunes all over, thin-veiled threats from eloquent/polite fox encounter...which makes no sense, why? WHY would you be able to talk a FOREIGN LANGUAGE like you spent your whole life in a library and not scrapping for food in the fucking arctic?¡ do Harpies teach discount kitsune's words beyond the ones needing for fucking or something?

2-Good Lord the Empath Vulperine is a discount Kiyoko in ALL THE WRONG WAYS, the breeding sex scene was one of the longest Tobs scenes I've bothered reading (seriously it was like...10 paragraphs a page and 3 pages long? Tobs I don't overdose on Viagra like you do my boy, PP can't stay hard that long!) and that last page? GOD, WHAT WAS HE THINKING?¡

The whole "HuRr DuRr ImMa DeScRiBe EgGs' FeRtIlIzAtIoN sTeP bY sTeP!1!1!" scene was so bad...we're a Gods-damned bronze-age adventurer fucking a STONE-AGE TELEPATH BARBARIAN! WHY DOES SHE TALK LIKE KIYOKO?¡ (A noble that literaly spent CENTURIES trapped with nothing better to do than read books mind you!) WHY CAN WE FUCKING SEE SPERM INSEMINATING HER OVARIES MID-ORGASM?¡ HELL, WHY THE FUCK DOES ANY OF US KNOW WHAT A FUCKING SPERM/EGG IS?¡

TLDR: Windy Peaks is shaping up to be a nice new Area so far as you ignore Tobs' writting (he CLEARLY made the Vulperines to be Kitsunes 2.0 but they can be saved when written by others! hell Savin made an ok Vulperine character so anything's possible) and I thank Skow for remembering multi-cocks are an option in this game and giving us some fun with the Manticores!

 

[Raf-Raf]

Boredom is one hell of a drug! tried the new update and explored the Windy Peaks and got some things to say, but frst, DISCLAIMER TIME! (I'm gonna defend Savin abit here, please bear with me it'll be all in the name of shitting on Tobs later I promise!)

So I went in to the Windy Peaks and gotta say thus far story-wise the place is...pretty alright, the only plothole I've found on the whole thing belongs to Tobs but we'll talk about it later, so the things I liked:

1-Credit where credit is due, Skow's Manticores have some nice sex scenes and FINALLY there's a new character other than Githa that acknowledges MC can have more than 1 cock & gives you a special scene as a result!

2-Savin's writting of the Vulperine Pottery Maker (IDK the word for this, sculptor? whatever he makes pots!) Arene was...surprisingly wholesome? dude's the father that stepped up and has a happy life raising his harpy daughters, both the ones he fathered and the ones he adopted (Also yes he being eloquent/speaking Belharan fluidly goes against Tob's description that they speak other language but hell, guy establishes that he frequently traded with the Minotaurs so there's an excuse as to why he speaks our language good.)

Now for the things I didn't liked...IS TOBS TIME!

1-We have confirmed Vulperines are just discount furry kitsunes for Tobs from the way he writes them, Savin made the village seem a cozy if isolated & humble place, where the inhabitants are nice and curious of visitors (this is GOOD and in tune with Tob's description of them as "savages/more tribe-esque people") and we don't interact with many of them because they can't speak Belharan good...yet if that's the case then WHY IN THE FLYING FUCK do the Vulperine Hunters TALK & ACT LIKE THE KITSUNE?¡

Tobs literaly wrote the kitsunes all over, thin-veiled threats from eloquent/polite fox encounter...which makes no sense, why? WHY would you be able to talk a FOREIGN LANGUAGE like you spent your whole life in a library and not scrapping for food in the fucking arctic?¡ do Harpies teach discount kitsune's words beyond the ones needing for fucking or something?

2-Good Lord the Empath Vulperine is a discount Kiyoko in ALL THE WRONG WAYS, the breeding sex scene was one of the longest Tobs scenes I've bothered reading (seriously it was like...10 paragraphs a page and 3 pages long? Tobs I don't overdose on Viagra like you do my boy, PP can't stay hard that long!) and that last page? GOD, WHAT WAS HE THINKING?¡

The whole "HuRr DuRr ImMa DeScRiBe EgGs' FeRtIlIzAtIoN sTeP bY sTeP!1!1!" scene was so bad...we're fucking bronze-age adventurers fucking a STONE-AGE TELEPATH BARBARIAN! WHY DOES SHE TALK LIKE KIYOKO?¡ WHY CAN WE FUCKING SEE SPERM INSEMINATING HER OVARIES MID-ORGASM?¡ WHY THE FUCK DOES ANY OF US KNOW WHAT A FUCKING SPERM/EGG IS?¡

TLDR: Windy Peaks is shaping up to be a nice new Area so far as you ignore Tobs' writting (he CLEARLY made the Vulperines to be Kitsunes 2.0 but they can be saved when written by others! hell Savin made an ok Vulperine character so anything's possible) and I thank Skow for remembering multi-cocks are an option in this game and giving us some fun with the Manticores!

So in short.
Everything was fine until the Tobs shenanigans starts.

Why am I not surprised.

 

[NODOGAN]

So in short.
Everything was fine until the Tobs shenanigans starts.

Why am I not surprised.

Yup, same weaboo super polite fox-people even tho they have tribal lives/no real education structure and SHOULD behave closer to Orcs for all we know.

 

[Noone202]

So in short.
Everything was fine until the Tobs shenanigans starts.

Why am I not surprised.

Because that's the usual in this game. The day where Tobs write a proper, deeply characterized person with good sexual scene is more rare than a living natural red lobster