It's not so much about length as it is about flow.but this is a text smut game, and people are complaining the text smut scenes are too long? ? ?
Honestly, what's the issue? Creaming before the scene is over?
Tobs gets ragged a lot on this, specially with smut, because erotic writting should be present, concerned with the moment to moment, and his signature style is interrupting the action with pointless descriptions, constant hypophora, and inner-monologuing.