Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.8.17] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[namelessdudewithnoname]

You might even get a cameo in the game, if you piss them off enough.
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Hiredgun won so hard..

 

[M0nte]

Sup, Crab here, writer of gay sex. Just wanted to add that there is a bad end in the Nash quest for those that enjoy that stuff.

Also, this only includes the path where Nash dominates the PC. Sub Nash is in editing and it will probably be a while before I submit it.

Is Nash getting new art? I like his DLC bust, but it is not exactly sexy.

 

[Knife-wielding crab]

Is Nash getting new art? I like his DLC bust, but it is not exactly sexy.

No idea. I hope he gets at least a nude bust

 

[M0nte]

No idea. I hope he gets at least a nude bust

Well, here is hopping. Something about his abdomen just makes him look more boney than I generaly prefer. He needs some more meat (and not just one I am going to feed into him, heh.)

 

[Jbuster]

You might even get a cameo in the game, if you piss them off enough.
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... Maybe I called them cucks far too many times while also, calling their cuck scenes weak, because the chair thing feels full ntr, but that would imply that Savin actually cares about this forum (beyond making fun of it)

Should've aimed for something better

I wish I could find it, but it's so long ago, but I remember a study was done showing that while media doesn't make people violent or anything, it can exasperate already present personality traits or mental conditions and cause desensitization to certain subjects. Of course that would vary per person but you right.


Damn I wish that game wasn't abandoned, even if the obvious twist would've made some bad ends 100 times worse. It was really fun and tried something new instead of a traditional leveling system. Pain is cuteness entering the body. Or whatever that one early game quote was.


Erectile Function.

Abandoned at the climax, just after learning who was Wendy and gaining access to the tower, after securing all the girls, about to resolve that twist, damn it, I can't bring myself to delete it

And yeah, some people out there are broken, some for several reasons. You never know what may bring them to the edge

No reason Kesuk can't have kids for you, either. Pretty sure we got some magic girdle lying around somewhere...

He gets off to the idea of Marigold having yours, now imagine if he actually got to have them.

Nah, this goes beyond masochism and turns nihilism into a source of arousal.

Now I can't help but imagine the champion holding her back from falling out of a hot air balloon. All because she wants to physically fight the clouds.

Orc champion shooting at the clouds because the sheep wife said so (later she got sad because fluffy things should be visible for all)


I'm just glad someone is working on it, it may not be perfect but at least someone care (if you're reading this give me that goblin witch next and also that witch at the river we know I have more space for my collection of oddities at the Wayfort, and also the frost pupper, she's sad and alone in that tree and she shouldn't be)

 

[K1ng_C00mer]

Kesuk and Marigold can both be part of my harem. Happy end for everyone.

Proof that "poly" relationships can work in this game if the person writing it actually fucking focuses on the player and the NPCs and not as an avenue for shipping their OCs. *Looks in Skow's direction*

How ironic the relationship that's meant to simulate the player cuckolding someone is more wholesome and romantic than all the "threesomes" and "polycules" that are suppose to be focused on >You.

Although I'm pretty sure Kalysea is a commission character from outside the dev team, I feel like that part was added as a way to "encourage" players to sacrifice our cool loot so we'd be even less impressive compared to all their OP OCs. Which it doesn't work because savin has failed to understand that not everyone is into horsedick futa and those of us who are are kinda tired of the same thing over and over.

One of Savin's bizarre design philosophies for this game is apparently he didn't want players to "horde" unique items and he wanted them to scrap or sell off the ones we don't use. Hence why he drags his feet when it comes to expanding our storage options.

Which you know... It's funny to me, because for a guy who's big into D&D, Savin should understand people would be predispose to horde shiny things. What if I wanted to respec into another class or change my load out? What if I just wanted to keep loot for the glory/prestige of it? All of these are natural Human impulses when it comes to uniques and Savin, in his infinite brilliance, just decides to go completely against that. A real Miyamoto in the making, that Savin.

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

Abandoned at the climax, just after learning who was Wendy and gaining access to the tower, after securing all the girls, about to resolve that twist, damn it, I can't bring myself to delete it

Maybe someday the abandoned tag will disappear and it will return. Magical girl content is always great.

*Looks in Skow's direction*

It's even weirder because Liaden is listed as Savin's creation so it's probably another Alypia situation and she's shipping her super cool OC with some rando savin made probably just for one quest but stuck around cause the cuck chair demands a host and Skow is simping. Only this time said OC is a companion and exists in-game and not as frequently commissioned fanart.

One of Savin's bizarre design philosophies for this game is apparently he didn't want players to "horde" unique items and he wanted them to scrap or sell off the ones we don't use. Hence why he drags his feet when it comes to expanding our storage options.

If not for hording then why have special icon? And also makes sure to ask if we want to sell it. He is so petty about the mechanics he made.

Savin's whole "muh anti power fantasy" is seriously crippling the quality but people still pay them so why should he care I guess. But him trying to find ways to discourage certain builds or keeping special items reeks of desperation at stopping his paying customers from enjoying the product because would detract from his friends' stuff. Why people still throw money at him is beyond me.

 

[Rawiya]

I love how every time I come into this thread, Savin is still the biggest dick in the game. It's the universal feeling of those who enjoy what the game could be without him. <3
That is to say, dear CoC team, never change... the endless wank you generate is great fun to watch from the sidelines.

 

[GS21]

I love how every time I come into this thread, Savin is still the biggest dick in the game. It's the universal feeling of those who enjoy what the game could be without him. <3
That is to say, dear CoC team, never change... the endless wank you generate is great fun to watch from the sidelines.

This is literally just the CoC cycle repeating itself. Bro really managed to do away with the good stuff from the first game and double down on the bad. Phenomenal.

 

[OreoLuma]

She isn't even remotely shy and quirky anymore, the scenes are not cutesy as they used to be. Repeated usage of really questionable words like "baby factory" or "baby chamber" that really ruin it for me. She never really called PC "sweetie" or "sweetheart" before so that was kind of weird seeing it come out of nowhere. Why is she suddenly okay with anal even if you never did it before? Your scene doesn't even interact with the older scenes, when you do them out of order she acts like she didn't do anal before. Also not really my point but a tad bit too much capitalization errors and typos for my taste.

And don't get me wrong but, I don't think she'd ever say things like;
"Sweetheart! Stop teasing me so much and just d-do it already! It’s called the mating press, so do it! Mate me! Breed me with your lambs please!"
or
"Ohmygods! Why does it feel so much better in both?!" and "R-right there, PC! G-Give me every inch of your cocks!"
That's just generic bimbo language filled to the brim in this game already. Clementine was unique in that regard.

Also, when I said that I didn't mean to be rude or an

haha, was just my personal opinion. I was so happy she was getting content, it's just that it didn't meet my expectations. That's all.

Another also, where did they talk about my comment and decided all of us were evil anyway beside asking "How so?" I geniunely don't get it.

Let me properly address this. Both the mating press and doggystyle scenes were a part of the pregnancy expansion. In which Clementine and the PC become proper mates/lovers(also why she calls PC Sweetheart), this is why she wants the PC more. I had to basically rip out these scenes to get the main preg doc under 100 pages and to meet the proper requirement of having at least one scene in the game before they consider any bigger projects I write.

This is why she acts differently around PC and the tonal whiplash. These scenes were meant to be a part of a bigger project but I really should've changed them to be more independent.

As for the smaller points:
-All the breeding stuff is just my style of writing (and these scenes are meant for a preg expansion).
-She says that stuff because in the content of the pregnancy expansion she's fully committed herself to PC. It was never intended to make her sound like a bimbo.
-I intended for these new scenes and the main preg doc to make Clementine more confident around the PC.

I've made a note about keeping her shy and quirky. Clementine has a charm that other characters lack and I should strive to keep that maintained. Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate it.

PS: Typos? Damn, Acehangman will not be happy about that.

 

[BMVV]

This is why she acts differently around PC and the tonal whiplash. These scenes were meant to be a part of a bigger project but I really should've changed them to be more independent.

Understandable. A mistake was made and experience was gained.

 

[ChubbyFatBoy]

One of Savin's bizarre design philosophies for this game is apparently he didn't want players to "horde" unique items and he wanted them to scrap or sell off the ones we don't use. Hence why he drags his feet when it comes to expanding our storage options.

Which you know... It's funny to me, because for a guy who's big into D&D, Savin should understand people would be predispose to horde shiny things. What if I wanted to respec into another class or change my load out? What if I just wanted to keep loot for the glory/prestige of it? All of these are natural Human impulses when it comes to uniques and Savin, in his infinite brilliance, just decides to go completely against that. A real Miyamoto in the making, that Savin.

I'm sorry but fuck any and everyone who does goofy shit like that. You don't want me to hoard and collect stuff? Then don't make shit unique and add lore to it. Don't give me this ancient relic that has massive importance in a quest. Then force my hand with small storage. To decide whether I want to keep it, or this salisbury steak I might need later for healing/bonus stats.

But since the hoarding typically starts early. I tend to fall more so in the "glory/prestige" category. Not only am I powerful. But in my storage, I keep relics beyond mortal comprehension. I am the keeper of this worlds many wonders and secrets. Even if the gear is under leveled or the item only served one purpose. The roleplay shall not be interrupted!

 

[Jbuster]

I'm sorry but fuck any and everyone who does goofy shit like that. You don't want me to hoard and collect stuff? Then don't make shit unique and add lore to it. Don't give me this ancient relic that has massive importance in a quest. Then force my hand with small storage. To decide whether I want to keep it, or this salisbury steak I might need later for healing/bonus stats.

But since the hoarding typically starts early. I tend to fall more so in the "glory/prestige" category. Not only am I powerful. But in my storage, I keep relics beyond mortal comprehension. I am the keeper of this worlds many wonders and secrets. Even if the gear is under leveled or the item only served one purpose. The roleplay shall not be interrupted!

Lord Savin in his infinite wisdom gave you a bunch of powerful, magical trinkets and also, a fortress you own, yet couldn't connect the two of them as, "you know what would be a great place to keep these many weapons?, my own place, which I already own", nop, you have to choose, because collecting stuff is a dumb mechanic

Can't even use the cuck chair for anything non-cuck related...

 

[FurrBat]

Its quite strange, Savin doesnt want you to hoard unique stuff but new quests are introduced that reward you with new shiny stuff and they cant just not give you something special for completion.

The game also just gives you quite the amount of things, are Khorminos arena items uniques or normal rarity?

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

Unique things. Like it has a mug that summons a bear, an alternative if you don't want to trigger Ryn's PTSD by summoning a zombie boar that killed her dad (always trigger her ptsd by summoning the boar, it's funny).

The boar has canonically killed and is therefore the strongest being by not adhering to porn logic. Also summoning it bullies elves and I support that.

Lord Savin in his infinite wisdom gave you a bunch of powerful, magical trinkets and also, a fortress you own, yet couldn't connect the two of them as, "you know what would be a great place to keep these many weapons?, my own place, which I already own", nop, you have to choose, because collecting stuff is a dumb mechanic

To be fair it took him how many years to implement a quest to fix it and then more to add a dungeon function even though TiTS already had something similar in Gastigoth. Clearly we must wait another 3 years to get a wayfort trophy room at this rate.

Cuck chair pants when?

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

Boar wins easily. Gweyr failed in killing the cult twice and had no real impact on the narrative and voluntarily noped out cause Sanders had a bad take and was mean to her. Meanwhile The Boar is responsible for one of the biggest backstory points and enabling Alissa's rise to power and all the bullshittery that came with that and took being killed twice to finally be stopped only to be able to be summoned and thereby continue to affect the plot. Gweyr wishes she had that level of audacity.

 

[Tsubuhaza]

But since the hoarding typically starts early. I tend to fall more so in the "glory/prestige" category. Not only am I powerful. But in my storage, I keep relics beyond mortal comprehension. I am the keeper of this worlds many wonders and secrets. Even if the gear is under leveled or the item only served one purpose. The roleplay shall not be interrupted!

"REJOICE, MONGRELS! FOR THE KEEPER OF SECRETS, THE KING OF HEROES HAS ARRIVED!"

The random futa whore from the tavern peeks out, gets hit on the head by the door as the PC motions for glory.

 

[Jbuster]

Boar wins easily. Gweyr failed in killing the cult twice and had no real impact on the narrative and voluntarily noped out cause Sanders had a bad take and was mean to her. Meanwhile The Boar is responsible for one of the biggest backstory points and enabling Alissa's rise to power and all the bullshittery that came with that and took being killed twice to finally be stopped only to be able to be summoned and thereby continue to affect the plot. Gweyr wishes she had that level of audacity.

That pig saw who was the last and only cool king of the elves and gutted him out of spite, there's a level of disrespect there I can't help but admire, in Gweyr's shoes, he would've ended Tollus and his gang and then he would most likely eat their faces, while they were still alive

 

[FurrBat]

Maybe the porker was a real hero? He saw in a dream whats going to happen in the future of the world and gone "miss me withthat gay shit" and took out the only homie along with him, that he gave his daughter ptsd that triggers traumatic flashback when she sees pork is a bonus .

 

[GS21]

That pig saw who was the last and only cool king of the elves and gutted him out of spite, there's a level of disrespect there I can't help but admire, in Gweyr's shoes, he would've ended Tollus and his gang and then he would most likely eat their faces, while they were still alive

I have been a long time user of the pig ever since he was introduced as a summon and bro actually mauls everything in his path. Does a lot of damage and can tank just as much it's looney.