Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.8.17] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[Sacred_Lamb]

Ehhh I gotta disagree about the last bit. Just write it like you would any other furry, monster girl, etc. It's just a difference in the character's visuals. Even if someone were to go full silent no words. Just make it behave like anything but a simple animal. Plus there are many games on this very website. With male animals among other things in the mix, fucking the human FMC. It's more so a dream because those who dabble in that type of mixing. Don't really care for the reverse. If Lassie is on the cover, folks want to see it humping, not getting humped.

Fair point, doubt that last bit tho, since its still mainly guys that are into the feral stuff.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Bigger, more milk, even more sensual face. Shits crazy. But I'm curious. Is there another situation like this with a size difference?



The context is OC special vs PC ain't. That's it.

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Should've left this hoe plugged in

 

[ChubbyFatBoy]

Fair point, doubt that last bit tho, since its still mainly guys that are into the feral stuff.

I mean yea there are those into it.

I mean I don't know anyone who is though...

Because it's like.... icky? Yea icky and totally not hot at all.

But what I meant when I said they don't really care for the reverse. Is because when you compare the content. One is very clearly more popular over the other. However saddened some of us others might be by it.... whoever those people are.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

I mean yea there are those into it.

I mean I don't know anyone who is though...
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Because it's like.... icky? Yea icky and totally not hot at all.

But what I meant when I said they don't really care for the reverse. Is because when you compare the content. One is very clearly more popular over the other. However saddened some of us others might be by it.... whoever those people are.

I care for the reverse, give my loyal mare whom I have gone to war with that has now spontaneously started talking to because fairy magic or some shit.

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See this card, it's government mandated

I don't need a reason, its the LAW
Now if you'll excuse me

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[OreoLuma]

 

[PixelLewd]

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And SavCo ruins another writer. I wonder how many this makes at this point; and I'm almost certain he got denied for bs reasons

 

[Pizza Lord]

And SavCo ruins another writer. I wonder how many this makes at this point; and I'm almost certain he got denied for bs reasons

I am reading Gardeford's notes in the doc... and they all seem very reasonable and point out the concerns. I can't say he's been discouraging, all the notes seem on point for typos and capitalizations and concerns for the scene. I think it's more that Luma's been working on it for two years and paid an editor that didn't really show out and the artwork for pregnant Clementine wasn't considered to match the style (which is discouraging since his friend made it). Obviously Moira would have done preg busts for her if the doc was accepted, then I think the other pics might have gotten in as alternate art.

I definitely didn't see any discouragement from the staff, but the time and the turn around seems the issue. Kind of a burnt-out, wanting to be free of it feeling than it being any staff reasons (for the Clementine Pregnancy doc, at least). I really wanted to see his half frost-elf, half-sheep-girl, Acacia, get in... but it seems like he's giving it all up there.

 

[Mrbark1234]

I'm almost certain he got denied for bs reasons

None of them have dicks i'm assuming so savin decided to waste two years of that poor guys life as punishment
how are they honestly that slow at rejecting submissions

 

[PixelLewd]

I am reading Gardeford's notes in the doc... and they all seem very reasonable and point out the concerns. I can't say he's been discouraging, all the notes seem on point for typos and capitalizations and concerns for the scene. I think it's more that Luma's been working on it for two years and paid an editor that didn't really show out and the artwork for pregnant Clementine wasn't considered to match the style (which is discouraging since his friend made it). Obviously Moira would have done preg busts for her if the doc was accepted, then I think the other pics might have gotten in as alternate art.

I definitely didn't see any discouragement from the staff, but the time and the turn around seems the issue.

I'll have to take your word for it, but I'm sure you understand why I'd immediately assume foul play, at least assuming you've gone through this thread.

And honestly even then I'm still skeptical, but honestly I don't care enough to trawl the forums, docs, or anything else that might show what happened with this writer.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

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Fuck em, I've read some of your stuff before never returning to that site. They were nice.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

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Link the doc, I wanna see what this is about.
I don't trust people that instantly come out in defense without even a quote or a receipt, stinks of dick sucking.

Where's Alterism when you need him!!!

 

[Jbuster]

I mean yea there are those into it.

I mean I don't know anyone who is though...
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Because it's like.... icky? Yea icky and totally not hot at all.

But what I meant when I said they don't really care for the reverse. Is because when you compare the content. One is very clearly more popular over the other. However saddened some of us others might be by it.... whoever those people are.

I'm allowed to be insane?, I feel I should be allowed to go insane

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Bad end???

A sillier/better dev would add a secret timer adding possible kids for every block you walk with him in a city/town and then give you a title/cool secret if you somehow manage to defeat the great propagator

I'll have to take your word for it, but I'm sure you understand why I'd immediately assume foul play, at least assuming you've gone through this thread.

And honestly even then I'm still skeptical, but honestly I don't care enough to trawl the forums, docs, or anything else that might show what happened with this writer.

True, I mean, if this was only about typos and capitalizations then some other stuff from the official writing team would also be rejected, and we know that doesn't happen

 

[K1ng_C00mer]

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This is why the whole "IF yOu wANt SoMEthINg iN thE gAMe, WrIte iT1!!11!!!" argument that Savin and his glazers make falls flat. Motherfucker is notorious for acting like a stingy shithead over the pettiest of reasons when it comes to submitting content to his game. Not only that, but signing away your rights to your character to that ungrateful prick? Fuck that.

As PixelLewd said, it's another starry-eyed writer who just wanted their favorite character to get more content but ends up gets pissed on and fucked over by Savin. Tale as old as time and what's even more sadder is it'll keep happening. Because people see this game and see how inviting and easy it looks like in order to submit writing, only to get burned or bullied and humiliated.

That's why I always sideeye anyone who comes here and talks about how reasonable Savin is and how they want to bridge the gap between us and the discord. No. Fuck off. I'm not interested in playing nice with that douchebag and his gang of chuckleheads. You're only on his good side because he likes the fetish you like or you're paying him.

I am reading Gardeford's notes in the doc... and they all seem very reasonable and point out the concerns. I can't say he's been discouraging, all the notes seem on point for typos and capitalizations and concerns for the scene. I think it's more that Luma's been working on it for two years and paid an editor that didn't really show out and the artwork for pregnant Clementine wasn't considered to match the style (which is discouraging since his friend made it). Obviously Moira would have done preg busts for her if the doc was accepted, then I think the other pics might have gotten in as alternate art.

I definitely didn't see any discouragement from the staff, but the time and the turn around seems the issue. Kind of a burnt-out, wanting to be free of it feeling than it being any staff reasons (for the Clementine Pregnancy doc, at least). I really wanted to see his half frost-elf, half-sheep-girl, Acacia, get in... but it seems like he's giving it all up there.

I did skim through the doc myself and can corroborate that there's nothing there that outright points to people being a dick to Lama. That being said, I can understand their reaction. They revise and revise their document and then submit it for review, only to be told after months it's not up to standards.

I can see why they'd get burned out and sick of running in circles for no gain. They've been at this for two fucking years.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

I'm allowed to be insane?, I feel I should be allowed to go insane

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Sometimes I wonder why are horsegirls so sexualized

Then I remember they have an unreasonable amount of ass.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

A sillier/better dev would add a secret timer adding possible kids for every block you walk with him in a city/town and then give you a title/cool secret if you somehow manage to defeat the great propagator

Behold, towns and lands and cities are laid waste before the flood of thy progeny. The mighty chieftains are humbled at thy feet, and the hosts of armies are delivered into the hands of thy children. And when the Great Propagator doth wane, thou shalt rejoice amidst a multitude of countenances fashioned in thine own likeness, and shalt behold as they smite and behead Brint the Breeder.

 

[Tsubuhaza]

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You did your best, man. Don't feel bad about it, we're not disappointed.

I think it's more that Luma's been working on it for two years and paid an editor that didn't really show out and the artwork for pregnant Clementine wasn't considered to match the style (which is discouraging since his friend made it). Obviously Moira would have done preg busts for her if the doc was accepted, then I think the other pics might have gotten in as alternate art.

Honestly, fail to see why the artwork thing would be an important deal. No disrespect to the artists as they have the better track record of the whole lot but even those have duds. Was his friend's work too ass to matter?

But I do get Luna being fed up. It's kinda why most of us don't bother with Savco, ages to get anything going, get declined later. Just zero trust even if we bothered.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

This is why the whole "IF yOu wANt SoMEthINg iN thE gAMe, WrIte iT1!!11!!!" argument that Savin and his glazers make falls flat. Motherfucker is notorious for acting like a stingy shithead over the pettiest of reasons when it comes to submitting content to his game. Not only that, but signing away your rights to your character to that ungrateful prick? Fuck that.

As PixelLewd said, it's another starry-eyed writer who just wanted their favorite character to get more content but ends up gets pissed on and fucked over by Savin. Tale as old as time and what's even more sadder is it'll keep happening. Because people see this game and see how inviting and easy it looks like in order to submit writing, only to get burned or bullied and humiliated.

That's why I always sideeye anyone who comes here and talks about how reasonable Savin is and how they want to bridge the gap between us and the discord. No. Fuck off. I'm not interested in playing nice with that douchebag and his gang of chuckleheads. You're only on his good side because he likes the fetish you like or you're paying him.




I did skim through the doc myself and can corroborate that there's nothing there that outright points to people being a dick to Lama. That being said, I can understand their reaction. They revise and revise their document and then submit it for review, only to be told after months it's not up to standards.

I can see why they'd get burned out and sick of running in circles for no gain. They've been at this for two fucking years.

Think about it is the reason why I do not trust what has been said before. Because I've submitted something and Gardeford himself has said that when I wrote sounds like roleplay, now, I've never role played (fanfic version) before and what I did do when I submitted it, I use content in game as a sort of format or as an example to follow, to format what I wrote. So if what I wrote sounds like roleplay basically all of the game sounds like roleplay, because I used the structure of those scenes there were written in order to write my own. So when Lama said their frustrated I completely feel for them.
And then you read shit that Tob's or what SKoW writes, and your outrage just burns even more.

 

[OreoLuma]

I am reading Gardeford's notes in the doc... and they all seem very reasonable and point out the concerns. I can't say he's been discouraging, all the notes seem on point for typos and capitalizations and concerns for the scene. I think it's more that Luma's been working on it for two years and paid an editor that didn't really show out and the artwork for pregnant Clementine wasn't considered to match the style (which is discouraging since his friend made it). Obviously Moira would have done preg busts for her if the doc was accepted, then I think the other pics might have gotten in as alternate art.

I definitely didn't see any discouragement from the staff, but the time and the turn around seems the issue. Kind of a burnt-out, wanting to be free of it feeling than it being any staff reasons (for the Clementine Pregnancy doc, at least). I really wanted to see his half frost-elf, half-sheep-girl, Acacia, get in... but it seems like he's giving it all up there.

It was discouraging because I spent so much time and money commissioning that art. Along with working on something for 2+ years and having it sent back two times for corrections and rewrites.

Regardless I have no negative feelings towards the devs or any other writer but I simply have no more passion for this game anymore. I merely wanted to give one last update about my projects.

 

[Yeppers34]

It was discouraging because I spent so much time and money commissioning that art. Along with working on something for 2+ years and having it sent back two times for corrections and rewrites.

Regardless I have no negative feelings towards the devs or any other writer but I simply have no more passion for this game anymore. I merely wanted to give one last update about my projects.

Sorry that happened to you homie

 

[M0nte]

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I do feel like you are jumping a gun just a tiny bit. From where I am standing, you just seem burnt out from trying to get this pregnancy expansion into the game. My advice is to take a break, remove yourself from that feeling of rejection, and then see if you want to continue to work on this project or not. Making such sudden decisions when you are heated never bodes well.

And, please, do not apologise. You are writing for free. Unlike Savin, Wsan and the rest, you are fan submitting your work. You owe us or anyone else absolutely nothing. You wrote this for yourself cause it brought you joy. If it doesn't anymore, then who are we to criticize you?