Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.8.17] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[DesSaasu]

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Goddammit, Clementine is joining the rest of the NPCs of being uncompleted.

Alright I've seen multiple people asking for my stuff to be made public. Most of my stuff is public but the links are a little hard to find.

Let me just post all my links in a single post. Please keep in mind they are all very lengthy (60+ pages) and please don't expect anything from them or I.

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just a warning about this doc: It's mostly WIP and full of issues and grammar problems along with incomplete scenes and ideas.

Definitely need to be modded into the game.

 

[destroyerofassholes]

CoC 2 has always had issues attracting fan content compared to its predecessor or its sibling. Though higher perceived quality of writing and better consistency are given as reasons, I'd like to retort with the fact that SKoW is a professional writer writing for CoC2. The man somehow manages to lose your attention in the span of 2 words.

The review/submit pipeline needs work if it needs months of effort just to get a rejection and you're barely getting any actual fan submissions in the damn game, especially seeing as there are abandoned characters left and right.

I mean we had legendary dialogue like "Your kiss tastes like my armpits!" by Jstar. Clearly, the scrutinization is for thee but not for me.

 

[Tsubuhaza]

I don't think the pictures had any bearing on the document submission itself, I think it was a separate mention that they didn't quite fit in which just kind of added onto the pile, so to speak.

I am definitely not an artist, so I am not going to say good or bad, and definitely not gonna call anyone's work 'ass', because I can see that someone put time and work into it, but you can form your own opinions. Good or bad, there's definitely a preferred style (granted, that's because they have an established artist in Moira), so...

There's like 9 or 12 pictures I see, so I will post the link to the forum he posted them on:

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Honestly, I'm not seeing a major clash in the art. You can tell different people did it but still, shouldn't be a hindrance.

I've also looked up the files and while I'm a bit dubious of certain comments being made in good faith, I can see it. That said, I've still seen worse in this game so I will echo the feeling standards are a bit flimsy.

Goddammit, Clementine is joining the rest of the NPCs of being uncompleted.


Definitely need to be modded into the game.

Assuming the writer wants it, of course.

 

[Skylark97]

Eat a dick M0nte, you acting like I added the whole doc in the fucking thing. I could have wrote a piece for it to fix.

Spoiler: In fact, I did for a project I'm writing.

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Being overly sensitive about AI is such bitch mindset.

Man I gotta say reading these last couple pages you got alot of audacity.

 

[OreoLuma]

I'd like to thank everyone for the kind words!

This will be my last post regarding the game unless I have to absolutely address something. I'm just using this to vent out some feelings regarding everything about the game and community. It's gonna be pretty unfocused and grammar is gonna be a mess but its just my raw thoughts and opinions. This isn't a hate post or anything, I may have my own grievances but writing is hard and I respect the devs for the willpower and skill it takes to make a world like this.

If you don't care about the incoming wall of text then I fully understand. Have a wonderful day and stay safe.

Spoiler: Writing for this game

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[Jbuster]

I'd like to thank everyone for the kind words!

This will be my last post regarding the game unless I have to absolutely address something. I'm just using this to vent out some feelings regarding everything about the game and community. It's gonna be pretty unfocused and grammar is gonna be a mess but its just my raw thoughts and opinions. This isn't a hate post or anything, I may have my own grievances but writing is hard and I respect the devs for the willpower and skill it takes to make a world like this.

If you don't care about the incoming wall of text then I fully understand. Have a wonderful day and stay safe.

Spoiler: Writing for this game

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That's a pretty neat attitude bro, I'm glad you ain't letting this destroy your drive to create new stuff and I'm sure you'll do great in whatever future project you might have

 

[Tamsay]

Thank you, OreoLuma. And may you find what you couldn't find here in your future endeavours.

Also, your friend's art is awesome

 

[DesSaasu]

I'd like to thank everyone for the kind words!

This will be my last post regarding the game unless I have to absolutely address something. I'm just using this to vent out some feelings regarding everything about the game and community. It's gonna be pretty unfocused and grammar is gonna be a mess but its just my raw thoughts and opinions. This isn't a hate post or anything, I may have my own grievances but writing is hard and I respect the devs for the willpower and skill it takes to make a world like this.

If you don't care about the incoming wall of text then I fully understand. Have a wonderful day and stay safe.

Spoiler: Writing for this game

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I think you should create an account on Internet Archive and save your docs there.

 

[K1ng_C00mer]

I'd like to thank everyone for the kind words!

I agree with you 2000000% with you criticisms with the game's development and the people who want this side character to have all these bells and whistles and this side character as well and etc. etc. etc. As well how utterly incompentant the staff are at making this a welcoming and easy enviroment for the community and new writers to submit their stuff.

Spoiler: Threesome rant

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Spoiler: Savin Rant

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I feel you man. I really, truly do. As a writer. That's why I'm not telling you to get back in the game. There's no shame at all in saying I can't do this and walking away. You don't owe the world your blood, sweat, and tears especially when it's not getting you anywhere.

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

I'm actually surprised to hear savin hates preg content given there's a whole month dedicated to only putting out pregnancy related content. Though maybe it's more proof he prioritizes the money over all else. Every CoC2 update and the more I learn about savin makes me more worried for TiTS.

As for the discord server? It's a useful tool to correct your stuff but its a cesspit just like this place. No offense lmao.

I resemble that accusation.

I feel like everyone here is hyping it up way too much. The devs are most likely gonna use some anti-modding stuff when the game is finished. I just don't have my hopes up.

Unfortunately that's been my biggest concern about it as well. Given savin's hate boner for all things modding I've been afraid a way to brick mods would be programmed in and the only thing stopping them is they don't know how without disrupting development time and making them wait until it's done to do so.

I don't have it in me anymore. My star is all burnt out. If I continued to write, I would have to slave away at the same fucking doc that I've been looking at for the past 2+ years. It's time to hang my coat and call it quits.

I love writing and making characters, just not for this game anymore. Which is why I'm pursing art! I'm just funneling all my creative drive into that now.

Honestly completely valid and understandable. You gotta do what's best for you and brings you joy. At least this game didn't kill the creative drive for you altogether.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Man I gotta say reading these last couple pages you got alot of audacity.

You get off on being vague or something? Be plain or stfu and lurk. Ain't nobody got time for your cryptic ass.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

(I'm gonna get some hate for this but just hear me out) If I'm going to be honest, not every character needs preg, futa or threesome content. Sometimes less is more. Sometimes a simple romance expac is all a character needs. (Kurako for example, is a really good character. She could really be expanded on more! Would preg content be nice? Yeah but a romance expac would be just as good.)

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

I love writing and making characters, just not for this game anymore. Which is why I'm pursing art! I'm just funneling all my creative drive into that now.

Beautiful, don't let your passion end this. Godspeed mate

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Most of the people who are active in the discord and forums are people who see this game as an avenue for shipping.

Shipping wars, the cancer that kills every fandom.

 

[Yeppers34]

Kinda weird that there's shipping in this game when everyone is dtf at the drop of a hat but maybe im the weird one, being a degenerate but only liking monogamous ships.

 

[Jbuster]

Shipping wars, the cancer that kills every fandom.

Now I was lost in this part, there are people shipping these characters?, I'm going to their discord to demand some Kinu x Champion right now

Kinda weird that there's shipping in this game when everyone is dtf at the drop of a hat but maybe im the weird one, being a degenerate but only liking monogamous ships.

Give me your top five CoC2 ships and no, Cait and the Gloryhole at Garth's tavern doesn't count

 

[DesSaasu]

Kinda weird that there's shipping in this game when everyone is dtf at the drop of a hat but maybe im the weird one, being a degenerate but only liking monogamous ships.

I think we ignored the warning signs when Alypia became the writer for Etheryn and commissioned NSFW arts of Ryn with her OC.

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

Give me your top five CoC2 ships and no, Cait and the Gloryhole at Garth's tavern doesn't count

There's a glory hole at the tavern and nobody told me? I knew garth was holding out on me.

I think we ignored the warning signs when Alypia became the writer for Etheryn and commissioned NSFW arts of Ryn with her OC.

Thank fuck someone else said it too. That was so weird how she showed up and did all that and everyone thought it was sweet.

 

[Yeppers34]

Now I was lost in this part, there are people shipping these characters?, I'm going to their discord to demand some Kinu x Champion right now


Give me your top five CoC2 ships and no, Cait and the Gloryhole at Garth's tavern doesn't count

Fuck dude you kinda put me on the spot...uhhh
1.PC x Ryn
2.PC x Brienne
3.PC x Kiyoko
4. The hairdresser and tattoo artist in the starting area
5.Takahiro x alcohol (cause that's all he deserves)

 

[Jbuster]

There's a glory hole at the tavern and nobody told me? I knew garth was holding out on me.

Now you know the secret behind the mystery of how Garth became a grandpa and why Garret and Gwyneth are forbidden to use the toilet at the Frost Hound at same time

Fuck dude you kinda put me on the spot...uhhh
1.PC x Ryn
2.PC x Brienne
3.PC x Kiyoko
4. The hairdresser and tattoo artist in the starting area
5.Takahiro x alcohol (cause that's all he deserves)

Solid list, strong number 4. Hot chicks doing threesomes in exchange of herbs and none of them has a dick, truly surreal in this game