Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.8.17] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[K1ng_C00mer]

Obviously I am not disputing your opinion. I can't really agree with the B statement, though. I mean, B did write Zo, and despite her simple style, her interactions and relationship building are unique, as are her scenes and the skills you can learn. I feel the same about Lyric (girl Lyric for me, so always feminine). She's a unique companion you can bring along (I don't use her in combat), and even overlooking the male side for me, I know the kind of work that goes into having to write a scene and always having to do a [lyric.heShe] or [lyric.hisHer] check for every pronoun. Then there's the feeding electrum for fun and filling her out to please, and her interactions with other kobolds. And then Kailani... I can't hate Kailani! It might be mostly due to Moira's artwork, but damn, she rival's Zo unclothed bust in Wow factor (for me, at least. Obviously I don't have to persuade anyone else)! He did up a unique language and style for her (mostly just some native words and such, but still), so I can't agree that it's an empty shell.

Just sharing my thoughts on that part. Not telling you how you need to feel.

You don't need to worry about me taking your disagreement with my statement wrong. I'm more than willing to entertain disagreement, especially since you're coming at me with full sincereity. Everything posted here, is, naturally, opinion for the most part, so everyone will have alternative takes.

I will just concede that my statement was a bit more of a shallow blanket statement than how it should have been phrased. Yes, B does experiment with his writing too. I mean, Lyric alone is very experimental and there's nothing else like her in the game. Oma too, is also quite unique with her mechanics if a little shallow everywhere else. And I don't doubt that he doesn't put effort in writing. As the writers who have come here have shown, even writing a minor scene is an exercise in and of itself given the parser system.

I suppose my main faults with B's works is, the execution. I will freely admit, I did not touch Zo's content other than a quick playthrough given how I personally wasn't attracted to her bust. I know that alone had a decent amount of content though, with a training and relationship building arc.

Kailani, for me, was boring. Her quest is very quick to complete mostly relying on RNG to pad it out when you have to take out 20 vulperine hunters. There was no time for us to really sort of get know her on a deeper level. I get that the it's not the intention for us to speedrun through her quest. We're suppose to meet her, start it, and then slowly chip away at it while visiting her and Inaya to learn about them. Even so, it's in the style of "click this button to learn about Kailani's religon, click this button to learn about her family, click this button to...etc" which thankfully, all the writers are starting to move away from that sort of lore drop, but it still does nothing to help Kailani in this regard.

Then there's Berwynquest, which has been talked to death here and I've given my take on it already. And Agni, who I also have talked about and made clear how I dislike her.

One recent character of B that I actually really love is Ivaze, the female imp that can show up at the Frost Hound. I seriously love her. She's a character that doesn't use words, so B really brought his A game when it came to writing the interactions between her and the Champ. I won't mince my praise I have for B for delivering us an actual S tier shortstack, and from a race that typically isn't written more than cannon fodder, in a game that's really starved for more.

 

[ChubbyFatBoy]

Cait's expanded content is... Man I don't know, feels like an afterthought, like, at some point her sluterry became far too ridiculous and in a weak attempt to try and correct the caricature she is they made up this "normal" Cait path, an eternal promise to give her the romantic edge she doesn't have, only that you have to go for 2/3 of the game to reach it and ain't even there yet

If I were a kind man. A generous man. I would give some leeway. That this was always the plan. A true miracle story of redemption and true love! Turn one of the biggest whores in this game into a housewife. After miles of dick and rivers worth of cum. She realizes that all she ever really needed was the champ. Because they have always been there for her and never abandoned her in the inn to never to be seen again, until she forces herself on you against your will in certain scenes anyway.... but I ain't neither one of them things!

Spoiler: This is Cait's past, present, and future.

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But hey, more power to those that want to try and give it a spin anyway.

 

[Love120]

If I were a kind man. A generous man. I would give some leeway. That this was always the plan. A true miracle story of redemption and true love! Turn one of the biggest whores in this game into a housewife. After miles of dick and rivers worth of cum. She realizes that all she ever really needed was the champ. Because they have always been there for her and never abandoned her in the inn to never to be seen again, until she forces herself on you against your will in certain scenes anyway.... but I ain't neither one of them things!

Spoiler: This is Cait's past, present, and future.

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But hey, more power to those that want to try and give it a spin anyway.

But remember that it's not your cock that will turn her into that because that would be a power fantasy xd

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

If everyone in-game is a slut to some degree then wouldn't corrupting those morals lead to loving, monogamous relationships that only have sex in the missionary position once a week at most?

 

[Yeppers34]

If everyone in-game is a slut to some degree then wouldn't corrupting those morals lead to loving, monogamous relationships that only have sex in the missionary position once a week at most?

Yeah honestly the concept of corruption in this game is nonsensical (probably why sav and co stopped making it) since 99.9% of all the characters are dtf at the drop of a hat, If they get corrupted they're still dtf but now they either look like a demon or turn goth. Would probably also explain why no one seems worried that there's currently a demon invasion.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

One recent character of B that I actually really love is Ivaze, the female imp that can show up at the Frost Hound. I seriously love her. She's a character that doesn't use words, so B really brought his A game when it came to writing the interactions between her and the Champ. I won't mince my praise I have for B for delivering us an actual S tier shortstack, and from a race that typically isn't written more than cannon fodder, in a game that's really starved for more.

Not to cut ur out pour but I can't get down with something that that describes pussy as pungent. I engage in a little bit of horse talk, but there are limits. Where imagination cleans up the nastier aspects of the smut, but when you use the word pungent, you just let it all be known that we out here eat day(s) old–un washed pussy. Nah, he's wrong for that.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Yeah honestly the concept of corruption in this game is nonsensical (probably why sav and co stopped making it) since 99.9% of all the characters are dtf at the drop of a hat, If they get corrupted they're still dtf but now they either look like a demon or turn goth. Would probably also explain why no one seems worried that there's currently a demon invasion.

Nothing but faxx

 

[Jbuster]

If I were a kind man. A generous man. I would give some leeway. That this was always the plan. A true miracle story of redemption and true love! Turn one of the biggest whores in this game into a housewife. After miles of dick and rivers worth of cum. She realizes that all she ever really needed was the champ. Because they have always been there for her and never abandoned her in the inn to never to be seen again, until she forces herself on you against your will in certain scenes anyway.... but I ain't neither one of them things!

Spoiler: This is Cait's past, present, and future.

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But hey, more power to those that want to try and give it a spin anyway.

Goth mommy central is supposed to be like a one square wide with this dumb gimmick that makes you go to places at random, and in that same square of nothingness you're supposed to be with Cait as she rejects her previous faith in the slut god, the one thing that's basically her main trait, the one thing she won't shut up about, and suddenly become wife material

I insist, the logical ending is for her to stop being a companion and become the matron at full time at her own whore temple. Let it be a lesson about someone getting everything she wanted and gaining nothing in return, always avoiding whatever sadness may remain in her through never ending, catnip fueled orgies. She should become her own mother, who after years of a luxurious life has lost her position in the temple while her two daughters are one stranded in another dimension and the other has become another sacred harlot, who just like her, depends of whatever sympathy she might gather from a foolish minor noble (you, the champion), only this time and unlike her dad, you can pretty much walk away, and never retuurn there

The consequences of my choices? In my CoC2 Game? It's more unlikely than you think.

Salwah was a mistake.

Cait has one personality trait and that is pseudo bimbo. Not full bimbo cause savin is a coward.

And Hirrud not having a genuine bad end always felt weird since he was before the plethora of "You Died" bad ends they made recently. Like you mean to tell me the guy who keeps slaves doesn't want to expand his harem? It was definitely spite motivated.


It will come in the year of our lord 2077.

Consequences as in how sleepy the champion was while deciding how Brint should fuck the non futa centaur following them

Whole slut temple project seems to be a way to bring all of Cait's friends to your side, so you might wonder, what happens in her GF route?, does she gets new friends?, are we turning Salwah into a short stack toasted goth cat slut?, can we be based for once?, please Savin, let us be based for once

 

[BMVV]

Whole slut temple project seems to be a way to bring all of Cait's friends to your side, so you might wonder, what happens in her GF route?, does she gets new friends?, are we turning Salwah into a short stack toasted goth cat slut?, can we be based for once?, please Savin, let us be based for once

Supposedly there'll be an opportunity to undo the temple stuff because too many people thought they were just doing something nice for Cait instead of making her like the player less.

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

Supposedly there'll be an opportunity to undo the temple stuff because too many people thought they were just doing something nice for Cait instead of making her like the player less.

Undo how though?

Consequences as in how sleepy the champion was while deciding how Brint should fuck the non futa centaur following them

Brint can take the almighty pack pony over my cold, dead hands.

Goth mommy central is supposed to be like a one square wide with this dumb gimmick that makes you go to places at random, and in that same square of nothingness you're supposed to be with Cait as she rejects her previous faith in the slut god, the one thing that's basically her main trait, the one thing she won't shut up about, and suddenly become wife material

That one tile must be an ass with how much is being pulled out of it to justify changing her fundamental characterization defined until that point with nothing challenging it or encouraging her to change. Does any character have an arc aside from Ryn? And does any party member besides Cait and Ryn have a real goal?

Not to cut ur out pour but I can't get down with something that that describes pussy as pungent. I engage in a little bit of horse talk, but there are limits. Where imagination cleans up the nastier aspects of the smut, but when you use the word pungent, you just let it all be known that we out here eat day(s) old–un washed pussy. Nah, he's wrong for that.

Yeah honestly the concept of corruption in this game is nonsensical (probably why sav and co stopped making it) since 99.9% of all the characters are dtf at the drop of a hat, If they get corrupted they're still dtf but now they either look like a demon or turn goth. Would probably also explain why no one seems worried that there's currently a demon invasion.

Savin once again proving he has no media literacy or just did not care about the original game's setting and premise.

 

[Blaq Mask]

It seems pretty obvious he didn't care about actually connecting CoC2 to the first game, he just slapped the name on for a popularity boost. He's even said he doesn't like writing for transformations and corruption, so why would he claim to make the sequel to a tf/corruption game? If it wasn't for the CoC name, nobody would've cared about the game at all. It's just a showcase for savin and friends' favourite OCs.

 

[bleargh1]

Oh, yeah, it sucks being boy crazy/gay in CoC2. Thanfully, as a bi dude with preference for women, I do not suffer as much as those who prefer their partners with he/his pronouns. But still, even when I am desperate for men, the temple boys are not the ones I go to.

I either top Brint (someone beg Wsan for more), cuddle with June, talk with Tetty or reload my save with meating Mallach in person.

Seriously, I wish we had more scenes with Brint in general, let alone more scenes where we can dom/top him, perhaps power-bottom for him, or, gods forbid, have a MUTUAL scene where we take turns back and forth with each other. I'm one of the few here who actually like the goofball himbo husband, and prefer also playing a big burly minotaur boy myself.

 

[ChubbyFatBoy]

Undo how though?

With extreme prejudice.

The temple reeks of heresy....

Jokes not really aside. If that were to be true and we get to toss it later. Would allow me to build it so I could see that Kas content that was stupidly locked behind it. Though I am curious how they would go about it.

 

[TalRash4]

With extreme prejudice.

Victor, is that you? Tf are you doing here, you're supposed to command Scaldra?

 

[Tsubuhaza]

You just know he's gonna find a way to fuck that up. Can't wait. Wait until it turns out that there's virtually no difference between both paths, assuming that content ever drops anytime soon.
I'm not gonna lie and pretend that I'm not at least kind of hopeful, considering the top-notch content "turboslut" Cait has to offer.
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Eternal typo aside, the only reason this pseudo-bimbo character wants to help a stranger (that's about to get fucked six ways to Sunday by a bunch of Leothrans) is that she's "cute." Not even considering Hana isn't exactly written as a "cute" character last I checked, which is crazy because it's the same writer behind both of these characters.
If you're gonna insist on making her chime in on everything at least make it meaningful, man.
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I do enjoy Cait, I am a freak of nature and not normal but man, they really don't want me to like her

Every positive aspects gets drowned into vapid interactions that won't let her shine, and she's so stuck into her slut path that I'm not sure how they could fix her at this point, if they ever decide to do that

See, that's kinda the thing. Cait's shtick right now is that... well, bluntly speaking, she's a slut. She has some characteristics peppered in, but they're all a direct inheritance of her being a slut. And she's been a slut for so long that any effort towards that would probably have to be huge, as being a slut is essentially tied to herself.

Think Shaundi from Saints Row. Bear in mind that most people I've seen that gave a shit weren't too fond of the switch, and even the Fourth went and brought back her stoner self. And now, you're telling me that this proper challenge that actual professional writers struggle with is on the table for goddamn Savin of all people to tackle?

It'll be amusing, sure. If it gets finished.

And Hirrud not having a genuine bad end always felt weird since he was before the plethora of "You Died" bad ends they made recently. Like you mean to tell me the guy who keeps slaves doesn't want to expand his harem? It was definitely spite motivated.

Oh, it was spite motivated. Kinu and him are tied to the hip when it comes to that, though Hirrud was a result of active trolling while Kinu, for her adulthood leap, was inept trolling.

Whole slut temple project seems to be a way to bring all of Cait's friends to your side, so you might wonder, what happens in her GF route?, does she gets new friends?, are we turning Salwah into a short stack toasted goth cat slut?, can we be based for once?, please Savin, let us be based for once

I'd bet on how it'll still be the same bunch, but they'll go "oh, no, it's fine that you don't want to be a whore for our religion, we just do it for the sport".

Supposedly there'll be an opportunity to undo the temple stuff because too many people thought they were just doing something nice for Cait instead of making her like the player less.

That's what I did, actually. And honestly... Well, fuck Cait? There's better options out there.

So, no.
I don't want no scrubs.
A scrub's a whore who can't get no love from me.
Hanging out with her rear on top of a minotaur ride slop, tryin' to holla at me.

Undo how though?

With extreme prejudice.
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The temple reeks of heresy....

Jokes not really aside. If that were to be true and we get to toss it later. Would allow me to build it so I could see that Kas content that was stupidly locked behind it. Though I am curious how they would go about it.

"Are we really going to do that?" Cait asked from atop her seating positions, a couple of meters above us. It's not like we have much of a choice, seeing as this is really about cleaning her, so having her do it only sounds fair.

A thumbs up causes her to simmer down and aim towards her religion's whorehouse. You then motion for your aide for the day, the lesbian knight that keeps dragging off that bee girl you keep forgetting the name of, who gladly slices the rope.

Your favourite dirty kitty gets flung into the air, yelling incongruities as her flight arc forms. The locals come to watch and Salwah, who was off to get groceries join you in confusion. "Why is Cait flying?"

You choose not to answer as Brienne knocks her out with chloroform, laying her peacefully near the Caitapult before pulling out a phone and making a quick call. "Yes. It's time for Project Ulm."

A round, black object that clearly was lit up is launched from another corner of the village, meeting with Cait's face and the whorehouse's wall, emitting a blast of wild cat shrieks. The damage is enough to topple the entire structure, causing its regulars to crawl and run away from the rubble.

You observe the scene with joy, Brienne stepping to your side in contemplation. "Was it great for you too, husband?" You confirm it, wondering if this really will be the start of your new kingdom. She smiles, her chin growing to match the scene. "Yes. And it shall be glorious."

While Atugia and Agni carry Cait off in a stretcher to, presumably, patch her up from taking a bomb and a stone wall to the face, you hear a loud question from the castle's tower. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING, YOU MOTERFUKERS!"

It was Carmen.

 

[BigDaddyBoo]

Steam key is: ki9JG3dw1JNCfKYDitxK

well it doesnt work for me i guess

 

[K1ng_C00mer]

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[Jbuster]

See, that's kinda the thing. Cait's shtick right now is that... well, bluntly speaking, she's a slut. She has some characteristics peppered in, but they're all a direct inheritance of her being a slut. And she's been a slut for so long that any effort towards that would probably have to be huge, as being a slut is essentially tied to herself.

Think Shaundi from Saints Row. Bear in mind that most people I've seen that gave a shit weren't too fond of the switch, and even the Fourth went and brought back her stoner self. And now, you're telling me that this proper challenge that actual professional writers struggle with is on the table for goddamn Savin of all people to tackle?

It'll be amusing, sure. If it gets finished.



Oh, it was spite motivated. Kinu and him are tied to the hip when it comes to that, though Hirrud was a result of active trolling while Kinu, for her adulthood leap, was inept trolling.



I'd bet on how it'll still be the same bunch, but they'll go "oh, no, it's fine that you don't want to be a whore for our religion, we just do it for the sport".



That's what I did, actually. And honestly... Well, fuck Cait? There's better options out there.

So, no.
I don't want no scrubs.
A scrub's a whore who can't get no love from me.
Hanging out with her rear on top of a minotaur ride slop, tryin' to holla at me.




"Are we really going to do that?" Cait asked from atop her seating positions, a couple of meters above us. It's not like we have much of a choice, seeing as this is really about cleaning her, so having her do it only sounds fair.

A thumbs up causes her to simmer down and aim towards her religion's whorehouse. You then motion for your aide for the day, the lesbian knight that keeps dragging off that bee girl you keep forgetting the name of, who gladly slices the rope.

Your favourite dirty kitty gets flung into the air, yelling incongruities as her flight arc forms. The locals come to watch and Salwah, who was off to get groceries join you in confusion. "Why is Cait flying?"

You choose not to answer as Brienne knocks her out with chloroform, laying her peacefully near the Caitapult before pulling out a phone and making a quick call. "Yes. It's time for Project Ulm."

A round, black object that clearly was lit up is launched from another corner of the village, meeting with Cait's face and the whorehouse's wall, emitting a blast of wild cat shrieks. The damage is enough to topple the entire structure, causing its regulars to crawl and run away from the rubble.

You observe the scene with joy, Brienne stepping to your side in contemplation. "Was it great for you too, husband?" You confirm it, wondering if this really will be the start of your new kingdom. She smiles, her chin growing to match the scene. "Yes. And it shall be glorious."

While Atugia and Agni carry Cait off in a stretcher to, presumably, patch her up from taking a bomb and a stone wall to the face, you hear a loud question from the castle's tower. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING, YOU MOTERFUKERS!"

It was Carmen.

Me when the old lady next castle complains about the Caitapult


We could've had a slut with a heart of gold that becomes so much more with time, but no

They're gonna give her goth make up and turn her into another alt e-thot, guess I'll sell bathwater, either as fetish stuff or in her case, bioweapons

Undo how though?


Brint can take the almighty pack pony over my cold, dead hands.


That one tile must be an ass with how much is being pulled out of it to justify changing her fundamental characterization defined until that point with nothing challenging it or encouraging her to change. Does any character have an arc aside from Ryn? And does any party member besides Cait and Ryn have a real goal?


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Savin once again proving he has no media literacy or just did not care about the original game's setting and premise.

The Napoleonic drive to dive into the raunchiest pussy lives in all of us, we only have to accept it

Goth mommy is maybe that powerful to make her question her life choices, thing is, nothing in the game supports Cait becoming someone else, you can't encourage her to be different. Her life is pretty much set in stone, when she talks about love, marriage and other important stuff, is always things like, "well in the temple harlots married each other, and they got fucked together", and her character arc itself is already done, you help with the temple because she wants that place, you pay for it because said temple also houses the portal that is key in getting her sister back, her main motivation to stay with the champion. There's a whole operation to achieve just that, even with a scholar working on it

Right now only one companion does have a somewhat active character arc, Atugia, and the mystery behind her memories, that's the most I can think of a character arc now that Ryn is queen, Arona is chief, Brint/Brienne got to be legendary adventurers and go back home to a life of bliss, and Cait got her sister quest in stand by while building a reasonable way to achieve said objective at some point, but right now that project is as advances as it can be

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*deep sniiiiiiif smack lips*
I love jungles!

 

[Joyvankek]

See, that's kinda the thing. Cait's shtick right now is that... well, bluntly speaking, she's a slut. She has some characteristics peppered in, but they're all a direct inheritance of her being a slut. And she's been a slut for so long that any effort towards that would probably have to be huge, as being a slut is essentially tied to herself.

Ob boy I've missed a lot, are they trying redemption ark with Cait? I mean... How? Also I thought she was supposed to be brothel moma in the end? Oh well so far only Brianna and the fox girl the name I forget, are the only good characters, at least compared to what else I saw.
I mean with how far I was able to get in this game which honestly was never that far.
Overall characters are meh, and CoC2 was so nuttered when compared to CoC1 that I always bounced unable to keep myself interested.
Maybe I will try to stream roll thru the game on save edited character. But I honestly don't see the point.
Also to anyone who went far enough to build whore temple. Can you then turn yourself into a pimp, profiting from the broth... temple that YOU are the sole reason to exist there in the first place? Or does it have no other point, than to let Cait whore herself even more, + bringing some of her whore friends into the city?
Both CoC1 and CoC2 also failed to give us wholesome cat-girl waifu.(At least CoC 1 got Ember, Mouse Girl and The Ant Queen) If we wanted to go non-corrupt. Oh also, is there any corruption concent for characters or still nah?

 

[Essta]

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This is the path to TiTS's hyper everything coming to CoC2. Beware.