Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.8.17] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[Sacred_Lamb]

Thank you, it comes naturally and I don't know why

Spoiler: I'll TOBs of course

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Good shit man it's a good look. Ropes n bdsm Glad to see you TOBS.
Constructive criticism: When you're doing those short action intense beats, use your full stops. Commas aren't your friend there.

And add this. I don't think that a bland characters is necessarily bad when there's space to grow as even the most bland shonen mc can do (yet they don't), what I usually find is that some authors get stuck inside a trope and are unable to get out, and when they do get out, they betray their own premise. Use for example Naruto or My Hero Academy, you have this very simple plot about this character overcoming impossibly hard odds through hard work, thus achieving what was once an impossible goal, but then the thing goes own and the author, trying to fulfill an increasing demand must add more and more stuff. Naruto like Rise of the shield hero went through the route of betraying their premise, hard work is meaningless, elitism is the true answer, people who were supposed to be great will always go beyond those that lack any talent that is not hard work, and the result will be the same hole they were supposed to be. Naruto becomes an glorified office worker/absent dad, Midoriya is the best hero ever for like five seconds and then becomes a boring teacher while blank face kids is the true hero, Naofumi gets stuck in isekai samsara harem forever and so on

I never get that. Always ends up like that. Like, just stick to your premise right? But they keep on expanding and adding, but they don't go deep in the premise they're building.

Conan the Barbarian that doesn't pretend to be anything else than dark fantasy and reveals in that, it works, and at the other side of the spectrum, where there's pure subversion you find nothing, because subversion by itself is an empty thing, is the author being petty and stupid for the sake of it and I don't think anyone should ever waste time with someone like that. Think of how Star Wars, a pretty good, not complicated at all trilogy, with a failed albeit fun prequel, was dragged through mud due to a combination of corporative greed, fan blindness and awful creatives without an honest bone in their bodies

I don't think it's because subversion is bad. It's more of how authentic are the creators being and how tgey are exploring a concept. Elric of melnibone tries to subvert lord of the rings and a little bit of conan, but it still has its own thing, right? It basically brought in the multiverse concept as we know it to literature, and comics ,and all that good stuff. It subverts what those icons did, but it's authentic to its own premise.It goes deep, it doesn't just add on stuff, because it can, it goes deep with them.And when it's exhausted, the concept that's when it moves on and a lot of authors data.Society give something a new dimension.They just add more, they just add more, and they don't go in deep.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

There's rape, there's murder, there's literal conversion/corruption of people into demons who want to rape and murder. Women being both victim and perpetrator of actions. All types of other horrible, violent, and sexy shit going on. In a world where like 99% of the population is just sucking and fucking anything. Chicks with dicks, men with clits, just all types of stuff. But THIS! No, no, no, no. THIS is a step too far! Wanting access to a character that was forcefully inserted in an unneeded way. And with a moronic decision to only make her swing one way. That can already be bypassed in the most modern day bullshit way.

PLEASE tell me someone called them out? If there's one thing that rustles my jimmies something fierce. Is when people say dumb shit and nobody addresses it. Oh man.... when I find stuff like that, especially years later. It hurts mah soul.

No, one's gonna call them all my dude.You don't want to get banned, do yah?

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Damn, there's people beefing here, and I didn't instigate? I feel so left out

 

[GS21]

You love to see it. New favorite followed closely by baseball-sized balls and boyish hips. No clue how I managed to play this game so long and never ran into this literary wonder before. simply phenomenal.

 

[Jbuster]

I mean, it's not necessarily unrealistic. I don't know if you know about that youtuber Destiny, but bro got his girl robbed by some fucking twink. Can't make this shit up

Having seen that pic of Destiny at the beach and his fucked up goblinoid body, all I can say is that I would've chosen the twink too

Brother no one here knows what you're talking about nor do we care, you've essentially just walked in took off your pants and shit on the floor, if you've got beef do it privately.

It's been a while since the last time Savin activated one of his sleeping agents, I was worried he had forgotten about us

You get addicted to demonic mino cum and you get a bad end if you swallow too much.

We must warn the world about the dangers of demon cum, I know who can do it

 

[GS21]

Having seen that pic of Destiny at the beach and his fucked up goblinoid body, all I can say is that I would've chosen the twink too

Fucking hell why are his proportions like that?

 

[Neighborsknowmyname]

Y'all I commissioned art.

 

[_Aury]

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You love to see it. New favorite followed closely by baseball-sized balls and boyish hips. No clue how I managed to play this game so long and never ran into this literary wonder before. simply phenomenal.

New Feature: If your dick qualifies for the “cucumber-sized” parser and you’re an orc, Katya slaps it and jumps out a window when you try to fuck her

 

[GS21]

New Feature: If your dick qualifies for the “cucumber-sized” parser and you’re an orc, Katya slaps it and jumps out a window when you try to fuck her

You will consider giving us a tradwife Katya route

 

[Tsubuhaza]

New Feature: If your dick qualifies for the “cucumber-sized” parser and you’re an orc, Katya slaps it and jumps out a window when you try to fuck her

Shades of the Hamrick Bump.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Having seen that pic of Destiny at the beach and his fucked up goblinoid body, all I can say is that I would've chosen the twink too

Jokes jokes It wouldn't be so bad if it was like, you know, a manlyish twink. Like this dude is on stream throwing it back in a maid's dress. She chose between a famous goblin and a bitch ass twink and his constant defense of bullshit is icing thats gotta burn.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

New Feature: If your dick qualifies for the “cucumber-sized” parser and you’re an orc, Katya slaps it and jumps out a window when you try to fuck her

I guess thats why they call it bumper crop.

 

[_Aury]

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You will consider giving us a tradwife Katya route

But Katya is a tradwife. She always has been!

 

[Jbuster]

But Katya is a tradwife. She always has been! View attachment 5379703

I love her

Good shit man it's a good look. Ropes n bdsm Glad to see you TOBS.
Constructive criticism: When you're doing those short action intense beats, use your full stops. Commas aren't your friend there.



I never get that. Always ends up like that. Like, just stick to your premise right? But they keep on expanding and adding, but they don't go deep in the premise they're building.

I don't think it's because subversion is bad. It's more of how authentic are the creators being and how tgey are exploring a concept. Elric of melnibone tries to subvert lord of the rings and a little bit of conan, but it still has its own thing, right? It basically brought in the multiverse concept as we know it to literature, and comics ,and all that good stuff. It subverts what those icons did, but it's authentic to its own premise.It goes deep, it doesn't just add on stuff, because it can, it goes deep with them.And when it's exhausted, the concept that's when it moves on and a lot of authors data.Society give something a new dimension.They just add more, they just add more, and they don't go in deep.

My theory is that a lot of authors are mental slaves that get their creativity depleted through a mix of sudden success and increasing demands that can't be fulfilled, so they revert back to the same issues they run away from. This may be controversial but as I see it, Joe from Ashita No Joe dying in his final fight after a whole life struggling is a far more positive ending than the solo leveling guy becoming another guy and being glazed ad eternum. There's something there about broken people giving their best, this guy living in poverty, training at a rundown gym build under a bridge who reached glory even for a second while the other one, is nothing but defeat, sure they can give him power up after power up and turn him into a multi universal power and all of that, another one for the old pile of "let's make him fight against Goku" that got nothing else going on

I agree a lot with your take about subversion man, is a really good take

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Fucking hell why are his proportions like that?

Right?, Destiny literally looks like a 3D generic goblin model for manwah, like, he got the torso and arms of a large midget but with toothpick legs which makes no sense. No wonder the dude is so bitter, ragebaiting is the only thing he still has

 

[DuckwingQuack]

Oi, I hate to be the one to break this to you, but I think starting with "I'm not going to get into this" and then pissing out a 4 paragraph hissy fit just makes you look like even more of a dishonest dipshit?

"The fact that nobody said anything to the contrary" I'm truly moved to tears, fuck, no one said a damn thing about someone actually being upset about your bullshit?? For rizzles and for true?? That's rough buddy.

What's the world come to when a grown ass man can't ignore his wife and whole-ass family of five children to go kink shaming some shitty niche porn-game's target demographic half the day without repercussion. Now you've got to neglect your imaginary kids by piss-talking in a slightly different online community. I'm so sorry Aury :'c

Getting kinda personal here aren't we? Like damn. Attacking a person on a personal level like that anonymously must make you feel pretty strong. Not even with your discord name.

And no, I’m not pulling the victim card; I chose to walk out for at least a while, because the fact nobody said anything to the contrary indicated that maybe that’s how everyone feels. If I’m making people feel uncomfortable, I don’t want to do that; even if people seem to have no problem making me feel uncomfortable. This isn’t some self-martyrdom, it’s an act of determining whether I’m truly the common denominator.

Now I feel sorry Aury. I should have said something. I was just hoping to make the smart move and let that convo die out but clearly the pettiness in some people is to high. Let me say it now:

You weren't in the wrong throughtout that entire conversation. You made just one fatal mistake: arguing with redacted.
Redacted is bad faith arguer number one. Strawmanning, gaslighting all of that shit, never letting up until they feel that they are right, always having to stand on the imaginary moral highground.
Your words got twisted and everything you said was taken in the worst possible way. Despite you trying to end that convo 3 times.

And don't take redacted2 words serious either. The need to continue that topic 12 hourse later is just uff . They are biased against you for other reasons. And I also suspect they are DrasticCreature because they sound just a petty. But whatever.

 

[K1ng_C00mer]

I mean, none of this stuff is doing the Savin futadickriders any favors, this is like... The seventh or eighth time they've broken containment to try to start shit with us? It's actually kind of sad, you know? I've never seen a more cult like worship of a fucking porn game dev than this. And what's even worse is none of you fucks are making daddy Savin and his friends proud- they hate you as much as you hate us.

I feel a bit sorry for Savin, really. It must be annoying having a bunch of freaks come out of nowhere and suddenly claim to speak for you and browbeat anyone who even gives the most wimpiest, lightest of criticism. It's such a weird and creepy parasocial relationship. But then I remind myself how he did nothing to nib this shit in the bud and seemed perfectly fine with existing in an echo chamber of toxic positivity, so my sympathy for him is really limited. I feel more for the community writers, I'd be scared if I wrote one of these shipper's waifus "wrong", they'll come after me like Steven Universe fans when that fan artist drew a character that was fat in the show slightly leaner.

In short, get a fucking life, you pricks. Also, next time you barge in here to accuse anyone of being a "bigot", come with some receipts, otherwise you just look like an unhinged schizo rambling about drama no one knows about.

Well, now that that's out of the way, what were we talking about? A new area's coming up? That's nice. Hope it won't be a let down the Windy Peaks was. There's still NPCs there that haven't gotten a fucking bust.

 

[procrastinator101]

I mean, none of this stuff is doing the Savin futadickriders any favors, this is like... The seventh or eighth time they've broken containment to try to start shit with us? It's actually kind of sad, you know? I've never seen a more cult like worship of a fucking porn game dev than this. And what's even worse is none of you fucks are making daddy Savin and his friends proud- they hate you as much as you hate us.

I feel a bit sorry for Savin, really. It must be annoying having a bunch of freaks come out of nowhere and suddenly claim to speak for you and browbeat anyone who even gives the most wimpiest, lightest of criticism. It's such a weird and creepy parasocial relationship. But then I remind myself how he did nothing to nib this shit in the bud and seemed perfectly fine with existing in an echo chamber of toxic positivity, so my sympathy for him is really limited. I feel more for the community writers, I'd be scared if I wrote one of these shipper's waifus "wrong", they'll come after me like Steven Universe fans when that fan artist drew a character that was fat in the show slightly leaner.

In short, get a fucking life, you pricks. Also, next time you barge in here to accuse anyone of being a "bigot", come with some receipts, otherwise you just look like an unhinged schizo rambling about drama no one knows about.

Well, now that that's out of the way, what were we talking about? A new area's coming up? That's nice. Hope it won't be a let down the Windy Peaks was. There's still NPCs there that haven't gotten a fucking bust.

I guess that, on a primal, lizard brain level, they agree with us. That's why they're here. Because trying to start shit with us is actually more fun than playing this fucking game.

 

[Peasantry]

Well, now that that's out of the way, what were we talking about? A new area's coming up? That's nice. Hope it won't be a let down the Windy Peaks was. There's still NPCs there that haven't gotten a fucking bust.

If we're going coastal, it's high time they let us fuck a mermaid. A big-tiddied one that doesn't randomly have a seahorse-cock

 

[Neighborsknowmyname]

If we're going coastal, it's high time they let us fuck a mermaid. A big-tiddied one that doesn't randomly have a seahorse-cock

Most likely outcome, since the green shark has a dick

 

[Peasantry]

Most likely outcome, since the green shark has a dick

I have a plan- yeet Cait at the green shark while I search for hot mermaids