undyingrevenant
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Doing aileh's lover route and the birth and dialogue then comparing it to kiyokos content is sad. I think part of it is tobs doesn't or chooses not to handle mental issues properly, which is a big issue when the den is like 85% "you need help". Rindos burns, komaris death wish, takahiros drunkenness, nakanos self esteem(?) issues, mai having to numb herself with drugs to prevent sensory overload, miko being a turbo nympho which is like a vampire that's never full, kinu has parental issues and probable ptsd regardless of choice, kiyoko SHOULD have super cabin fever or severe attachment issues or yandere-ness or something but is instead just generic or a poorer version of too many people now.
Imo aileh, that popped up off a single reference in the winter city, already has completely decimated kiyoko and kinu. If the growth of your kid with her is eventually accelerated then skow already did tobs "family simulator" better, and it's also intimately connected to kas and her story and your relationship with her. There's no reason for spite toward brienne on the writing team any more, even arona is getting better content, and if you want abuse the dom arona is better at abuse than the den, too. Drifa, a new character, is also a well received devoted waifu sim.
I really want to like a eastern themed, trope heavy smut playground with monster girls, but kiyoko just seems like a poorer tamamo from mgq and nobody else has any pull. All of the relationships seem hollow there, like if you went somewhere else it wouldn't matter to any of them. I dunno if tobs is sitting on like 13 arcs of anything besides kinus power fantasy solo adventure, but kiyoko and kinu need a small rewrite and new approach or something. If tobs really wants the attention brienne and others are getting and to earn a ego he really needs to stop with irl political subtext or whatever tf and get with a wife character that can stand alongside the others.
I don't want him to fail, I want a big tiddy loving fox wife and maybe even nakano or farm boy alternative to be salvaged, maybe a father or mother in law relationship where he proves his love to kinu and you both start to begrudgingly like each other, maybe he opens up to you and you can slap the edge out of him, that tropey family movie stuff.
Imo aileh, that popped up off a single reference in the winter city, already has completely decimated kiyoko and kinu. If the growth of your kid with her is eventually accelerated then skow already did tobs "family simulator" better, and it's also intimately connected to kas and her story and your relationship with her. There's no reason for spite toward brienne on the writing team any more, even arona is getting better content, and if you want abuse the dom arona is better at abuse than the den, too. Drifa, a new character, is also a well received devoted waifu sim.
I really want to like a eastern themed, trope heavy smut playground with monster girls, but kiyoko just seems like a poorer tamamo from mgq and nobody else has any pull. All of the relationships seem hollow there, like if you went somewhere else it wouldn't matter to any of them. I dunno if tobs is sitting on like 13 arcs of anything besides kinus power fantasy solo adventure, but kiyoko and kinu need a small rewrite and new approach or something. If tobs really wants the attention brienne and others are getting and to earn a ego he really needs to stop with irl political subtext or whatever tf and get with a wife character that can stand alongside the others.
I don't want him to fail, I want a big tiddy loving fox wife and maybe even nakano or farm boy alternative to be salvaged, maybe a father or mother in law relationship where he proves his love to kinu and you both start to begrudgingly like each other, maybe he opens up to you and you can slap the edge out of him, that tropey family movie stuff.