atomicp
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I will quote myself (only a snippet) from 2 years ago; when I still gave a shit about CoC2.
That was my obs "evaluation".
That was my obs "evaluation".
]I'll be completely and total honest here. I don't think TheObserver is a bad writer per se. But he keeps on trying to reach beyond his own grasp.
What he really needs is an honest editor outside his hugbox. It shows badly.
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Writing is not like figure skating, where flashier tricks are required to stand out. I mean, very skilled writers avoid flowery writing because it's troublesome to make it work.