Yes. The reason is I don't know how to format shit.Unless there's a reason behind it that I'm not seeing, which there very well could be.
Yes. The reason is I don't know how to format shit.Unless there's a reason behind it that I'm not seeing, which there very well could be.
sooo i cant get the normal app to work but i did get it to work by running it like it said to do for mac PCs soooo whateverSo i just got a new computer and it has Windows 11 now when i try to fire up the CoC2 app it says i need a app for that is there something special i need for Win 11 i was running off XP before.
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Fair enough. Depending on style/type of writing, formatting can differ. And, of course, everyone has their own style that they find easy to follow. Personally, I use double line-breaks and a play script style of formatting for dialogue. If you want an example, I've spoilered a small excerpt from some of my latest writing for Masters of Raana. (Not a sex scene, but the formatting is the same)Yes. The reason is I don't know how to format shit.
8 days lol. The brain rot hit me hardI really liked it! how long did this take to write?
Yeah, it does help.I'm by no means an expert, feel free to disregard everything I've said, but hopefully some of that helps!
Porca miseria, even with that small text sample its obviously TOBS-ed. Im missing the point of first sentence in the end of a second one. How he consistently manages to pulls it up is beyond me.
I never hid it was TOBS' writting lol, just saying the IDEA of a "small hero doing their part in a world-changing event" could work/be a FUN spin on the otherwise almost nagging-sounding "No PoWeR fAnTaSy" dogma we've heard over and over and over.Porca miseria, even with that small text sample its obviously TOBS-ed. Im missing the point of first sentence in the end of a second one. How he consistently manages to pulls it up is beyond me.
Tobs is some kind of failed psychological weapon project that managed to crawl from secret government underground facility straight up to the world of porn games, Im telling ya!!!!111111111111
Okay who the fuck wants to play a porn game where it takes you several reads to actually understand wtf the character is talking about? It doesn't even have to be related to porn - I would be confused by this even when playing games that require high brain usage. This makes me wonder if I am dumb or not. If I give myself the benefit, then I can say that this is not easy nor smooth to read. Any kind of character for whom it would be appropriate to speak like this would be on my "don't talk to them" list. I am going to attempt to simply this text.So I decided to steel my resolve and dive into the word diarrhea that is anything Tobs touches and talked to the cat-paladin in Cait's whore temple...gotta admit some of the stuff he said was more than just pretentious word salad, in particularl these two:
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I don't think it's great - I don't fully know the context of this scene nor the characters, but I hope it's at least easier and smoother to read and doesn't distract you from the actual story by making you decipher every sentence."And let's not forget that we're in this together. It will take the hosts months to get here, but we are able to act on the situation here and now. By the time our backup arrives, it will be too late for too many people. Are people saved by our actions be insignificant compared to the entire populace of the region? Those you save certainly won't think so."
"Even thought I am sure there are forces that will dwarf us, it doesn't make us irrelevant or unneeded. If we act fast, we can get to the smaller details that will be missed in the scuffle."
I honestly really like your take on it, not only because it's EASIER to understand (you're not alone on that sentiment) but also because it feels more PERSONAL, like the character speaking to you is really trying to appeal to you as a reader.Okay who the fuck wants to play a porn game where it takes you several reads to actually understand wtf the character is talking about? It doesn't even have to be related to porn - I would be confused by this even when playing games that require high brain usage. This makes me wonder if I am dumb or not. If I give myself the benefit, then I can say that this is not easy nor smooth to read. Any kind of character for whom it would be appropriate to speak like this would be on my "don't talk to them" list. I am going to attempt to simply this text.
I don't think it's great - I don't fully know the context of this scene nor the characters, but I hope it's at least easier and smoother to read and doesn't distract you from the actual story by making you decipher every sentence.
There are multiple reasons for this. According to various sources its a stream of new goods from a new world, (one of the many) consequences of black death, overall urbanization, etc.All that south american silver did eventually render silver basically worthless in Europe for a bit though
We in writing competition now? Oke..."And let's not forget that we're in this together. It will take the hosts months to get here, but we are able to act on the situation here and now. By the time our backup arrives, it will be too late for too many people. Are people saved by our actions be insignificant compared to the entire populace of the region? Those you save certainly won't think so."
"Even thought I am sure there are forces that will dwarf us, it doesn't make us irrelevant or unneeded. If we act fast, we can get to the smaller details that will be missed in the scuffle."
It's a shame tea stopped writing...I get diabetes whenever I go through Clementine‘s content. Damn, what a waste.
She was something special....It's a shame tea stopped writing...
Everything he/she wrote was just up my alley
10/10, Would shear the sheep again.I get diabetes whenever I go through Clementine‘s content. Damn, what a waste.
Apparently "Sex lyric and you’ll see an option labeled [Extra bits]. Click that, and grab a blue/pink egg."How to make Lyric a Futa?
That..is probably one of the lowest effort excuses I’ve ever heard. I like how writers for CoC will talk about porn game logic and then go and say stuff like this, how embarrassing.On another note I've read that Kohaku preg is never going to happen because Tobs said it would get in the way of her being a merchant.
Also like, since when is pregnancy such a debilitating condition? Whoever you get pregnant between Miko or Mai can’t take over Komari’s role as head priestess anymore (even though Komari herself never had any issues having kids while being a priestess); Kohaku won’t get pregnancy content, even though she presumably has suppliers (she doesn’t run around collecting all her wares now, does she?) and could very realistically continue to maintain a store.That..is probably one of the lowest effort excuses I’ve ever heard. I like how writers for CoC will talk about porn game logic and then go and say stuff like this, how embarrassing.
I found that info on a fan discord server, so take it with a grain of salt. (Should've stated this in my first post. My apologizes)That..is probably one of the lowest effort excuses I’ve ever heard. I like how writers for CoC will talk about porn game logic and then go and say stuff like this, how embarrassing.